thwei yin'tekai The Avenger of the Innocent

[johners12345]

Since it's unlikely i'll make a pred app soon, this was my old application for predator when it first came out in 2015... Please keep in mind i know the English is bad, but hopefully you can appreciate my attempt at lore, have fun reading.

The Initiation

Thwei jumped to a tree branch and crouched, he looked at the other two unblood's before he used his visor to scan the area For the selected prey...A group of three Quatza-Rij. Two were seemingly fighting over the third, Thwei both rumbled and Chattered as his head cocked to one side. He hoped the others couldn't tell he was excited.. Even if There were three of them, He was confident that him and his fellow clan brethren could handle it.. THEY WERE M-DI H'DLAKS! THEY FEAR NOTHING! He had thought to himself.. He shook his head gently as he watched one of them split off, Seeming to give up on the female.

Thwei Chittered as he and the others began to follow the lone Quatza, It was time.. Thwei screeched as he lunged at the Quatza.. Only to be swatted away as it had known of their precence, Thwei growled with amusement as He got back up, He Barked out and on command the other two came down, swiping their claws down the back of the creature. Thwei watched as it screeched in pain and turned to smash at one of them, Thwei than roared a battle cry of rage as he ran forward, Hearing only what happened to memory.. The thumps of movement, The roar of surprise of the Quatza.. The sound of the air as he jumped forward... Than.. The pressure and crunch of his claws hitting their mark... The squelch as he twitched his hand, Ripping skin... Than The thud of the creature going down.

Thwei breathed deeply, Looking at his first fallen prey it gave him a overwhelming sense of pride and joy to see it, He rumbled with pleasure at his victory, He looked to the other two, seeing them Nod in approval.. They Than went on to help the second one claim his kill.. Thwei showed great pride in how it was executed, and Than.. It was the third ones trial.. Where it all went wrong... They weakened it and the third went in for the kill.. and That is when the second dove in and took the life before the third could.. Claiming the kill.. Thwei immediately stood back and Clicked his mandibles together as he rumbled with a sense of warning.. He knew what would happen.. The third than stared at the second, Hissing and roaring at him as his mandibles flared, The second one immediately lowered his head and eyes into submission.. After being back handed.. The third calmed down and began to survey the area.. Allowing mercy to the dishonorable one..

CRUNCH! SNAP!

Thwei's Eyes widened as he watched the third one fall down Bleeding.. The second ones claws stained with the blood of the innocent merciful hunter... Thwei Roared in anger as his back arched and his mandibles flared He ran up and Pushed the second in the shoulder to a tree, Withdrawing his claws as He roared, charging at him,

SLICE!

Thwei began to assault on the dishonorable Yautja, Angrily swiping at him AGAIN AND AGAIN! His rage coursing through his veins at the thought of a other clan member killing one of their own.. HOW COULD THEY!??! He slashed more and more, Relentlessly assaulting him.. He winced as he felt a blade pierce his arm, He smashed the dishonorable one with the back of his claws, Smashing him into a tree.. The dishonored one than lowered his eyes and head, realizing he was beaten.. He weakly offered up his claws, hoping for mercy.. Thwei breathed angrily, His mandibles still flared as he went to reach for them...
SMACK!

Thwei fell down.. Weakened.. He looked around.. Through hazy eyes seeing the dishonorable one retreat away.. He weakly Hissed as he reached out in the direction of the dishonored one.. Before his vision faded.. He awoken Hours later to the sight of the dead yautja.. He gently caressed The face of The fallen.. Using his own blood from his fight with the dishonored to mark Him.. Before setting his gauntlet to self destruction.. He Brought his fallen prey back and told of what occurred and was accepted in the ceremony.


Epilogue

Thwei went on to be a great hunter, Being known for killing a xenomorph with it's own tail when it failed to pierce him with it, Though There seemed.. Something off about Thwei.. He told of his true hunt.. The one for the dishonored.. The killer of the innocent and honored.. Thwei had made a promise the night of his ceremony.. That he would only accept the true title of a hunter when he caught the true prey.. The dishonored and so.. He had set out on his hunt.. Through space for him.. Only stopping at other planets for necessities and such.. His next stop. For what is known to the humans as LV-624.

[TehSpoderman]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rAbP5REW_Fc

[MrJJJ]

Good thing this is acid goop

[johners12345]

Good thing this is acid goop

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rAbP5REW_Fc

your hatred only makes me stronger

[Moon Tune]

+1000
Would like to get blown up by suicide bombing/10

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[johners12345]

+1000
Would like to get blown up by suicide bombing/10

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REEEEEEEEEEEE!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fnfDXznMf0E

[spartanbobby]

CRUNCH! SNAP!

SLICE!

+1 for Crunch and Slice but -1 for Snap

[Boltersam]

This....

-1.

[johners12345]

This....

-1.

... thats... That's it!?
NO!
NO!

I WILL NOT ALLOW TO BE STEPPED ON! RIP ME APART! EXPLAIN YOURSELF! GREAT LORE BEARER!

SMITE ME!!!

... Give me a hug

[Boltersam]

Not good enough to deserve a review.

[TehSpoderman]

Not good enough to deserve a review.

slacking on yo job i see

[johners12345]

Not good enough to deserve a review.

SMITE ME!

When I made this i went through lore book after lore book!


GO AHEAD! REVIEW ME!


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1KitDwmuxZs

[Boltersam]

If this is your best effort, you going through endless lore books to perfect it....

Don't go back to the whitelist forums. Spare me the miniscule effort.

[TehSpoderman]

If this is your best effort, you going through endless lore books to perfect it....

Don't go back to the whitelist forums. Spare me the miniscule effort.

sounds like s l a c k e r talk to me

[Karmac]

the smack was a bit of a let down

I was hoping for a slamjam

negative points for this

[johners12345]

If this is your best effort, you going through endless lore books to perfect it....

Don't go back to the whitelist forums. Spare me the miniscule effort.

IT WAS TWO YEARS AGO! I WENT THROUGH A LOTTA LORE SITES!

TELL ME WHAT I DID WRONG
SMITE ME YOU SLACKER!

[johners12345]

the smack was a bit of a let down

I was hoping for a slamjam

negative points for this

I-i...

I don't know what a SlamJam is..

[Karmac]

-1000 points for not knowing what a slamjam is

[johners12345]

-1000 points for not knowing what a slamjam is

well fuck you too ;-;