Space nam, the battle for endara IV.

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Space nam, the battle for endara IV.

Post by Allan1234 » 13 May 2015, 18:22

(please note that this is NOT canonical in anyway and is pure fan faction for our universe in other words, don't take anything this crazy old man says literally)

(listen to this as you read https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4H0JDomv8ac )

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Space Nam, Part One So.. you've come to hear the story of space Nam have ye? well then take a seat son cause the memory's in my mind are as fresh as the shrapnel in my heart .

It was a Dark cold night on Endara IV A, the Asteroid moon orbiting Endara IV, it was the beginning of a large scale assault on the vietmorphs by the United Systems Colonial Force's code named.. The Tet offensive, as my dropsip hit the Asteroid i could smel the napalm ad blood in the air,when out of nowhere my company's drop-ship was downed deep behind enemy lines after a vietmorph rocket hit us, after i came to i found that the pilot and two my my men where dead and the vietmorphs where enclosing on all directions, so we quickly got our shit and made our way to a nearby outpost.

Once we got to the outpost we found that it was under heavy vietmorph assault. once we got inside i made my way to the command tent and immediately got on the radio, as the battle raged on outside i desperately tried to contact someone at command but the damn Vietmorphs had blocked our coms so after a while of fruitlessly trying i was forced to give up, so i garbed my gun and headed outside to join my men. The sky was alight with a hail storm of arty and bullets as me and my men desperately tried to hold the line but it was no use, everywhere i looked my men where dieing from the vietmorphs onslaught. i was about ready to order the fallback when out of nowhere a vietmorph rocket hit the wall and they poured in, ripping apart what was left of my men and the outposts garrison, i finally called in the retreat and well fell back onto the top of the hill.

as we fell back more and more of my men died until only eight of my men remained the rest either dead or dieing, low on ammo and even lower on men we fought our way to the hills summit and decided to make a final stand there, we held for hours until only i remained, i watched as my life flashed before my eyes as the vietmorph pointed his gun to my head and said "morphisum is the only way you imperial basted" Then just as he was about to shoot the sky light up with light with fire as a hailstorm of drop-ships and rail rounds rained down like angels from heaven.. and then i heard it.. the most beautiful sound i have ever heard... the sound of a USCM Frigate's engine..and i watched as it rained down fire from above as a drop-ship landed nearby and i was pulled to safety... the name of the frigate you ask? why no other then the USCM Sulaco..

is it over you ask? Haha no its only the beginning. i was quickly put back on my feet and giving a new company, we quickly joined the others as the Tet was still underway... but this time it was for the planet itself.

The damn vietmorphs had dug in hard.. but we hit harder, me and my company dropped right on there capital city of Hanoimorph and as the ships bombed the shit out of the veitmorph defenses we dropped in hard like soldiers of hell slaughtering every Veitmorph we found and leaveing no survivors, be it soldiers or children no one was spared our wrath, we kicked in the doors of every house we found as they ran and screamed then we burned them alive in there own homes.. before long the entire city was ablaze and what remained of the vietmorphs in the city had either been slaughtered or scattered into the jungles.

and that's the end of this story, come by later for the next story, for now i must rest.

The END of the first story, let me know what you think also please note this is my first thing i have ever wrote like this and if i get enough constructive critizium i /may/ rewrite it bigger and badder then before, please post all your thoughts and comments in the comments and i will try to take them Onto the next part

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Re: Space nam, the battle for endara IV.

Post by SASoperative » 13 May 2015, 19:03

SPACE NAM BITCH!!!!! SMELL THE NAPALM!!!!
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Post by TopHatPenguin » 13 May 2015, 19:06

I'm liking space nam allan :) needs more space napalm though

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Re: Space nam, the battle for endara IV.

Post by Allan1234 » 13 May 2015, 19:06

on it

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Post by coroneljones » 13 May 2015, 19:12

"FUCK YEA,SPESS MURICA ASSHOLES!!!"

Also..yay for a spessnam story
I am Crornel Jrones, grorious admin of Coronial Mahreens. U ar arr nast Trorr and will be ding dong bannu. U critizize Xenos? Ding dong Bannu. U no rike grorious adminnu? Ding dong Bannu. U comrpain about Marine nerfs? Dingdong bannu. U comprain about grorrious adminnu? O yoo betta bereev dat's a bannu. It has come to my Grorrious attention dat nasty trorr has been imidatingu me on serveru, dis is a shamfrul dispray and unacceptaboo so dey ding dong bannu. End of Rine -----------------Rine ends here.'
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Post by crazyh206 » 13 May 2015, 19:21

Hm...would've expected the marines to lose the space nam war
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Re: Space nam, the battle for endara IV.

Post by Allan1234 » 13 May 2015, 19:44

not really, they out number the vietmorphs and they also have space ships.. im also working on part two taking place in another part of the planet

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Re: Space nam, the battle for endara IV.

Post by SecretStamos (Joshuu) » 13 May 2015, 19:45

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Posted this earlier in the CM chat as a joke.

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Re: Space nam, the battle for endara IV.

Post by MrJJJ » 13 May 2015, 20:50

Heh nice…
Continue the story

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Re: Space nam, the battle for endara IV.

Post by Sadokist » 14 May 2015, 04:09

SecretStamos (Joshuu) wrote:Image
Posted this earlier in the CM chat as a joke.
LoL

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Re: Space nam, the battle for endara IV.

Post by Felkvir » 14 May 2015, 04:29

Sorry Allan, but my inner asshole calls to me here.



>"My men feel all around me"

>dieing

>"the sky was light up with light"

>USCMC Sulaco > frigate

> morph at the end of every place-name

>fanfiction, linking it to our main plot

>mfw you don't include Jack Knight Image




1/10 points for originality

3/15 points for effort

-666/420 points for sentence structuring and grammar

Spacenam/414 points for setting



Overall verdict: H0w doo eye spehss muhreen!?

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Post by coroneljones » 14 May 2015, 04:53

-90 points for no jack knight

BOOOO!
I am Crornel Jrones, grorious admin of Coronial Mahreens. U ar arr nast Trorr and will be ding dong bannu. U critizize Xenos? Ding dong Bannu. U no rike grorious adminnu? Ding dong Bannu. U comrpain about Marine nerfs? Dingdong bannu. U comprain about grorrious adminnu? O yoo betta bereev dat's a bannu. It has come to my Grorrious attention dat nasty trorr has been imidatingu me on serveru, dis is a shamfrul dispray and unacceptaboo so dey ding dong bannu. End of Rine -----------------Rine ends here.'
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Re: Space nam, the battle for endara IV.

Post by MrJJJ » 14 May 2015, 05:25

Jack knight is too old for this shit...
Brock same

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Re: Space nam, the battle for endara IV.

Post by Sadokist » 14 May 2015, 06:36

needs more me

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Re: Space nam, the battle for endara IV.

Post by UnknownMurder » 14 May 2015, 07:19

Title Name sounds like,

Star Wars, Battle for Endor

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Re: Space nam, the battle for endara IV.

Post by speedybst » 14 May 2015, 18:37

Hmm, just thinking, at the time this was happening, Kaeli was busy cutting people up in back alleys for their augmentions...

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Re: Space nam, the battle for endara IV.

Post by Allan1234 » 14 May 2015, 21:32

who says jack wont be in part two?

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Post by coroneljones » 15 May 2015, 03:55

..DO ET!

Spessnam is part of his backstory too
I am Crornel Jrones, grorious admin of Coronial Mahreens. U ar arr nast Trorr and will be ding dong bannu. U critizize Xenos? Ding dong Bannu. U no rike grorious adminnu? Ding dong Bannu. U comrpain about Marine nerfs? Dingdong bannu. U comprain about grorrious adminnu? O yoo betta bereev dat's a bannu. It has come to my Grorrious attention dat nasty trorr has been imidatingu me on serveru, dis is a shamfrul dispray and unacceptaboo so dey ding dong bannu. End of Rine -----------------Rine ends here.'
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