The Doctor's Blessing upon Planet {Poem}

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The Doctor's Blessing upon Planet {Poem}

Post by UnknownMurder » 16 Oct 2015, 21:49

The Doctor's Blessing upon Planet

Oh, say can you foresee by the night's early moonlight.
What so proudly we hailed at the dawn’s last gleaming?
Whose curved stripes and bright stars thru the perilous defense,
O’er the nebula we watched were so gallantly streaming?
And the Sulaco blasting torpedo’s red glare, the orbital strikes exploding on planet,
Gave proof through the atmosphere that our marines was still there.
Oh, say does that portal flag yet wave
O’er the land of the Marines and the home of the United States Colonial Marines?

None yet is true... For Sulaco invade@d#)dswpqf@4#6)$%4g [End Journal]


~Poem by Alex Graves, Medical Doctor of U.S.S. Sulaco, 10/16/2150
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Re: The Doctor's Blessing upon Planet {Poem}

Post by Outboarduniform » 16 Oct 2015, 21:58

if you make it rhyme , it would be even better. good poem though !

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Re: The Doctor's Blessing upon Planet {Poem}

Post by johners12345 » 16 Oct 2015, 21:59

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