Peter's / Nescau's Predator Application

[NescauComToddy]

Byond ID

NescauComToddy.

Marine Name

I recently changed my name to Willhelm Hoffman. Generally, I'm playing as a synth known as Peter.

While Willhelm is an arrogant and rude marine, Peter is a disciplined, obedient and gentle synth.

When I play as Willhelm, I periodically play as a sergeant or marine, but I am experienced playing as a squad medic, engineer, doctor, MP and XO because of my past experiences with my former character; Pedro Heering.

The period in which I played as CL (Jackson Peter) was a success. At the same time that I had certain events that were concluded as desired, I had others, being Emerald's the most recent, that were terminated due to the stupid decisions I made.

I play as a xeno to filter the tension and nervousness of the week, after all, who is not satisfied to break some bones of the marines and generate salt?

I love playing as Queen. Most of my rounds have had great results, but a certain minority of them have been somewhat undesirable. If you see that a Queen is being too nice, you'll know that it's me playing her.

Name of the character you want whitelisted.

Man'sur (Victorious). Memorable name, but if it is not valid, I will change.

Are you familiar with the Predator Code of Honor?

Yes. I have reviewed the code of honor multiple times and therefore, absorbed its content.

Character Background

The Great Hunt.

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"That was the day I would become honored. The day when I would claim my rightful place among my clan. I had prepared a lifetime for this moment, I could not fail. Finally, the hunt would begin.

I could already hear the sounds of my own footsteps, I was sneaking through a stream until I found an abandoned camp of soft meat. I found the bodies that were already decomposing in a brutal state, with their gibs scattered all over the place. Soon I knew that the r'kas had passed through that area, exterminating all the non-co that once inhabited such a place.

After examining the wounds of the deceased, I discovered that my prey was a proficient and nracha-dte serpent. At that moment, I felt a feeling I had never had, something that was bothering me deeply.

That was the most important moment of my non-co, nothing could stop me.

I continued the trail that led me to an entrance to an obscure cave. After entering it, I began to hear something scream in agony. After descending the lair, I began to find signs of a hive. My care increased dramatically since I knew I was not alone anymore.

At the bottom of a large resin corridor, I found a soft meat trapped in that sticky material, screaming agonizingly. After looking at the entrance to the hall, I had found my prey.

The serpent looked intently into my eyes. I activated my wrist-blades right after its threatening look. I discovered that the feeling I had felt before was fear.

It would come down to me, raising its tail in an attack position. I already decided to start my attack, which was defended by the sharp claws of my prey. Soon after this quick moment, the r'ka pierced my armor with its precise tail. I suffered tremendous pain, but I retaliated, performing a deadly attack on the r'ka's skull. It drew back as it let out an agonizing cry. I drew the sword from my clan from my back as I looked into my prey's eyes before finishing it.

I was severely wounded, but I found the way out of that infernal cavern. After seeing the bright light of the day, I saw the Jag'd'dja atoll coming to remove those who overcame the great challenge. The Elder and other elites offered their hands. Finally, my hunt was over.

The Awakening.

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The vision was completely darkened, when suddenly a clary and dazzling light filled the gaze, along with the disturbing sounds of machines whistling, with the levity and serenity of the water colliding with a body. As the light grew brighter and more uncomfortable with every passing second, a loud voice could be heard.

"Initializing cryogenic deactivation sequence .."

Swiftly, a strange object similar to a kind of capsule opens, falling from within an exotic figure or individual with his face protected by a unique and intimidating tribal munch.

"Gkaun-yte, mei'hswei."

The unknown figure, with a certain contempt in his eyes, avoids eye contact with the being in front of him, curiously similar to him. As he rose from the compact, rigid floor, Man'sur placed his hand on the shoulder of the figure that pulled him out of his unconscious state, as if he were greeting the figure.

"Cetanu leitjin-de Hma'mi'de, Na'kra."

Slowly, Man'sur followed Na'kra as they discussed the ritual hunt he would accompany to rescue the new blood that would complete it and ensure nothing unusual happened. As they approached the navigators' room, Na'kra quoted the first hunt they had, saying that the humans she found were robust and gave her a good and honorable fight.

It was not long before Man'sur's jaws began to click quickly and bizarrely as if he were laughing at what his partner had said.

"Do not be stupid, Mei-jadhi." The soft-meats are imbeciles, egocentric and stupid as the followers of Paya, the religious plague that haunts the tradition of our species. Few of them are deserving of our blade, the possibility of finding a group of oomans who are not insignificant as insects is non-existent. "

Na'kra slightly irritated by her partner's arrogance raises her arms diagonally and crosses them, making eye contact with the hunter's eyes that mocked her supposition.

"Mei'hswei, your arrogance will guide you to humiliation. You should accept the new God, maybe he'll light up your monotheistic mind.

They stared at each other for a long time, murmuring and complaining. Fortunately, Man'sur 's new blood group had already woken up and was already ready for the hunt, thus the hunter had to guide them, which prevented the discussion between him and his experienced partner from causing further confusion.

When the small hunters who were mature ended their hunt, Man'sur performed a prayer to Cetanu, asking that the souls of the new blood that died during the great hunt be strengthened so that they return to the world and finish their hunt.

 "Cetanu B'huja m-di h'chak..."

"Cetanu B'huja m-di h'dlak..."

"Chi'ytei, thei-de..."

"N'dhi-ja, life..."

Periodically, the elite hunter would leave his clan to hunt by himself or with other hunters of other origins to ever raise his and their honor, bearing in his heart the essence and piety of Cetanu, defending true faith...

Description of your character's personality (background complement), plus the way you intend to play it:

My character is fanatic by Cetanu. Besides being extremely mysterious and calm, he is a discreet observer. He will usually perform sacrifices to seder the eternal hunger of the God of death with his ceremonial knife. He may at some point during the round build a small temple just to perform his prayers. He hates any other kind of religion, which makes him suspicious and uncomfortable around other Yautjas with different beliefs than his. In any case, he is completely honored with those who show themselves worthy even with ethical differences.

For him, death is not the end of a being, only a stage in a long journey that Cetanu B'huja will guide. Thus, the death of his valuable prey serves as a reward for them and a trophy for Man'sur.

Being a trapper, he prepares ambushes, attacking his target quickly when a vulnerability is demonstrated. Being patient, he awaits a valuable prey to provide its soul to Cetanu B'huja, so that the worthy creature finds its purpose in the great journey that is death.

Man'sur has an adversity in respecting other hunters with religion or ideas different from his. His arrogance and selfishness are his are his weaknesses, making him always underestimate his prey.

While he is dueling, he will also be, in a certain way, performing a ritual, proclaiming words that involve the acceptance of death.

A not very accurate reference would be how Khal Drogo acted during his fight against Mago in the first season of Game Of Thrones.

Why should we whitelist you?

In addition to being disciplined and obedient to server rules, since I started playing as Peter, my skills and the way I play have been perfected and as a result I believe I am more than competent enough to play the role of predator and successfully exercising a good experience for players who are already on the whitelist and for those who are not.

'As long as it does not involve door hacking,' I am more than prepared to play the role of a yautja, so I would love to join the minority of the members of our community who are also on this whitelist.

I will never break the hunters' code of honor, if I have trouble wrapping it, I will charge myself and ask the head staff to provide me with a temporary or permanent penalty of the role, which I am sure will never be necessary because of my great behavior.

I will do my best to preserve RP, even if it implies the death of my character.

I am always interested in learning more about ColMar and I am sure that I will have fun and will do my best to amuse others by playing as Man'sur.

Unlike a large majority, I believe that CM is an RPG game, a story that is being constructed according to the decisions of the characters of the players. Some have few pages of history, while others are protagonists of a round, where they influence the progress of the story of a round, making a difference.

I believe that indirectly, this is the factor that makes CM a success. Each round is a different story and I intend to influence the progress of each round in a different way if an opportunity is given when I am playing with my character.

I will be open to all kinds of criticism, no matter what. In fact, I believe I could have applied more effort in the context of Man'sur, but since my application has this problem, I intend to develop my character by a method in the game.

I sincerely hope that the background story is not something that, in your opinion, greatly affects my application, but if you think that it is strongly influencing the outcome of my application, I fully understand your criticism and I accept it happily.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason?

No, I've never been banned and never intend to be.

I have very few notes, but no warnings.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?

I've never been banned or approached by a staff member from another server. I am completely clean on this point.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?

I fully understand, as I had previously written in the reasons why I should be whitelisted.


Since my last application that was around the middle of the year, I improved my English in an attempt to improve my image in the community. Unfortunately, the vocabulary I use is still Brazilian, but this has never caused any in-game problems or other tasks that involve the English language.

Some time ago, I tried to distance myself from the server like many others, but to my surprise, I discovered that it is impossible to escape totally from CM addiction. Anyway, I'm still very active on the server.

Again, as usual in my applications, all criticisms will be welcomed.

[Karmac]

why do people gotta make the fonts huge and give em colours that hurt to read

[NethIafins]

Yeah, good god, my eyes.
App is good, and I like the quirk.
Saw Peter many times and had no issues with him

+1 from me

[NescauComToddy]

why do people gotta make the fonts huge and give em colors that hurt to read

I consider this form of application with changes in fonts and colors as better worked, but I understand that this can make reading difficult.

Unfortunately, as a rule, I am unable to change this problem, however if this is too much for you, it is recommended that you click on the quote button of the post where the application was made and remove all BBCode through a button located in the right corner the top of the screen in the tool area. This will remove all changes in fonts and colors, which makes it easier to read but takes away some of the charms of an application.

I appreciate your feedback along with that of NethIafin. Thanks for the evaluation and also, for the point indicated in the layout of the application. I will keep this in mind.

[spartanbobby]

I found it pretty easy to read
I know you're active and you have some pretty good RP, App looks solid and your avatar looks cool
+1

[Sailor Dave]

This app was a genuine pleasure for me. The first half of the story was alright, a bit heavy on the predspeak in general, but I actually feel like I would love to see you in action with your predator's philosophy, and as a player.

I know that you're a good player Toddy, and your english has improved by leaps and bounds. You've been around a long time, and I can't recall a single time that I've seen salt from you.

I would gladly give you a +1.

[NescauComToddy]

Thanks for everyone's review!

Spartan:

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It will be a pleasure to have more interesting moments like the one we had before yesterday among our characters. I've always respected your in-game character very much, and I'm sure we'll have more of those interactions to come. Even though I was very sleepy, since it was about three in the morning due to my timezone, I was able to enjoy the moment until we were FFed to death.

Sailor:

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About your post, Sailor, I'm glad you recognize me in such a way. You were always a great mentor and always been nice to have your good mood on msay when I was still a moderator. I will be happy to show how my predator's philosophy and my method of playing would work if I were accepted.

I have been playing Willhelm more than Peter since yesterday, so I hope to find Eden in future rounds.

If possible, please indicate the bad parts of my application so that I do not make the same mistake again in the future.

It will be an intriguing experience to participate in the hunt if the opportunity is given. Hope to see you at the huntings grounds.

[forwardslashN]

You have improved your communication a lot since you first started, and that's not something to be taken lightly. Since you're willing to learn and improve, and because your character background is actually pretty good, I think you'll do well as a predator. Plus you're a long time community member, and someone I am actually familiar with. I want to see you continue to improve. Good luck. +1

[NescauComToddy]

You have improved your communication a lot since you first started, and that's not something to be taken lightly. Since you're willing to learn and improve, and because your character background is actually pretty good, I think you'll do well as a predator. Plus you're a long time community member, and someone I am actually familiar with. I want to see you continue to improve. Good luck. +1

I thank you for your feedback, N. About the improvement in my communication, I am happy to have been able to fulfill the promise that I had made about eliminating the language barrier. I believe that at the time of my first application, I was really unprepared not only because of my difficulties in speaking English but also because of my maturity. At that moment I still could not understand it, but now I can.

I am happy to receive your support and you can be sure that we are all in a long process of improvement. The failure of my first and my post as moderator at that time were the factors that made me change my maturity and my ability to write in English.

Curiously, on the discrimination of Man'sur with Yautjas with those of another faith was an idea that I had due to your character, Zazin. Knowing that he has a different religion, I decided to create a certain contrast between Cetanu and Paya especially thinking about your character.

I sincerely hope to have the opportunity to attend the great hunt, Elder.

[forwardslashN]

Curiously, on the discrimination of Man'sur with Yautjas with those of another faith was an idea that I had due to your character, Zazin. Knowing that he has a different religion, I decided to create a certain contrast between Cetanu and Paya especially thinking about your character.

I did see that and I thought it was an interesting point about your character. You are not the first predator to worship Cetanu, but it's a different angle, and I like it. I think it could lead to some interesting situations.

[Rustarus]

Gah all I have had were amazing experiences with Nescau. Seen him ever since I first joined on the forums, and he's a really good guy. The story was also pretty nice! +1

[NescauComToddy]

Gah all I have had were amazing experiences with Nescau. Seen him ever since I first joined on the forums, and he's a really good guy. The story was also pretty nice! +1

Thank you for your evaluation, Rustarus. Fortunately. I've never had bad experiences with you or your character, which is great.

Honestly, I do not have much faith in the story I did, but thank you for praising it. I'm happy to have your support and hope to see you around.

[Redikalzip]

My verdict? I can easly put my +1 here, because you're active. Saw alot of RP moments with you and it's good.
Good story and colored application. Huh.
Good luck and bye.

[NescauComToddy]

Thanks for your feedback, Simon! I hope you have enjoyed my choice of colors.

See you around.

[McRamon]

Havent talked personally in game i think, but from what ive seen, this dude can handle predator role, at least its current rp level which is not that high =)
Hopefully you are the one who will make marine-predator interactions better than it is right now.
Overall, another +1 here

[NescauComToddy]

Havent talked personally in game i think, but from what ive seen, this dude can handle predator role, at least its current rp level which is not that high =)
Hopefully you are the one who will make marine-predator interactions better than it is right now.
Overall, another +1 here

Thanks for your review.

Thank you for placing your trust in me. As you say, I am more than capable of such a role, if I were not, I would never have made this app.

Something I was intrigued was what you said about the interactions between predators and marines currently. I would love to improve such interactions, but whitelist members are great with them. If possible, could you please give a critique of what you dislike about the current interactions between marines and predators?

For now, I have never had problems with these interactions that I witnessed, and for that reason, I would like to know your opinion.

[Ghostdex]

Nothing else to exactly say, +1 from me.

[Shyguychizzy]

From personal experience as previous staff standpoint and was oldie as a player I did favor. Can very trust this sacred role in which their intent from the little video clip I do like and at times have done myself as predator not really blandish but what is of more expected of us predators. Not lay lowed or too laid back but reminiscing we are true hunters that are quite feared from others due to our some may say barbaric or even severe carnage alike. In ways, I pictured more from 300 as Spartan with honor but highly skilled among honor...with yours a fearful predator of religious origin who dares despises other tribes which at times is true. Not all tribes did get along or even had the same, and for the story and motives quite interesting. Iffy with being afraid part but everyone has some sort of origin in their story. I think of my first positive posts of the year...I give yah. +1
(Yes its in red...may or may not have stolen it from yer app for the color and yes it is 100% POSITIVE or PLUS ONE in my book)

[Stripetail]

I've never had any issues with you, you're a pretty solid player all around and this is a nice app.

I'd offer a more detailed response, but there's really nothing I can add that hasn't been said already. +1, good show and good luck.

[Feweh]

MOre feedback required.

[NescauComToddy]

Thanks for the feedback from all of you!

Currently, I'm noticing that there are some other players using my original surname "Hoffman". Because of this, I will be using the name; "Heinrick Archsier" to ensure my reputation is not affected without my knowledge.

Again, I would like to say thank you for your criticism. I'm glad there are not as many issues in my application as I originally expected!

Peace!

[Te Matei Cego]

I really enjoyed the story and the way you intend to play with it.

to me +1

[Lukey111]

Alright, first of all you put in a TON of work effort, which I like, and this is not just a 'standard' app.

My one problem is that, a few weeks ago, the Almayer captured a dead, non exploded pred, and the CO sayd to leave it dead it. But, you decided to keep helping it (In which, I would probably be angry if that was an order also). It would be an IC issue IF you were not a synth that round, which is against the synth rules, and, after the CO sayd to kill you, you also did not want to and did not carry the order out without keeping a few paces away from the marines, but did not run off, and and told the marines to let him talk to the CO, and you got C4ed. After, you Ahelped saying why it happened, and a mod sayd that was against the synth rules, and gave you a warning.

Fortunately, you got about 10 1+'s from the work effort in this, so I will give you a neutral for now. Still, that warning is the ONLY reason I haven't given you a 1+ yet. And synth is a pretty big thing.

[NescauComToddy]

My one problem is that, a few weeks ago, the Almayer captured a dead, non exploded pred, and the CO sayd to leave it dead it. But, you decided to keep helping it (In which, I would probably be angry if that was an order also). It would be an IC issue IF you were not a synth that round, which is against the synth rules, and, after the CO sayd to kill you, you also did not want to and did not carry the order out without keeping a few paces away from the marines, but did not run off, and and told the marines to let him talk to the CO, and you got C4ed. After, you Ahelped saying why it happened, and a mod sayd that was against the synth rules, and gave you a warning.

I thank you for your feedback, I really appreciate it, but what you said about this problem I had a few weeks ago is wrong, even more the part where you say I got a warning.

To explain what had happened, I had begun to heal the body of the predator by orders of Medbay until the commander had made an announcement specifically saying to stop trying to revive the strange creature. I, understood the orders of the commander (SolidFury) and stopped curing the pred and began to drag his body to the research wing. I believe that the Marines who were looting the body of the pred, suspected that I was actually intending to continue to heal him, and therefore misinformed the commander, saying that I was disobeying his orders.

In no way did I disobey the orders that were given to me, and I accepted the 'deactivation' by C4 that a random MT tried to do on me multiple times.

In fact, I had made an ahelp, which Tharinoma, I believe, or an admin, informed me that was an IC issue. I did not break the synthetic guidelines in any way, but I was punished (ICkly) because of disinformation. When I said that I would like to speak with the commander I would've simply liked to explain to him what actually happened, but because of such rumors spreading at an absurd rate, I decided to simply try to deal with it in an OOC way, which I ended up explaining what really happened after the end of the round.

I sincerely hope to have explained to you what actually happened. I would like to remind you that I have never broken or will break the guidelines of my whitelist as a synthetic and that I have not questioned the commander's orders at all during this accident.

I understand your issue and I honestly hope you can truly understand what happened. I will be excellently happy to explain in detail to you if you prefer.

Peace!

[Lukey111]

I did not see you dragging him to upper, just near cryo pods... but, it looks like you sincerly learned from your mistake, and I could've sworn he sayd that he gave you a warning...

No matter, a mod will eventually look at this and examine your notes.

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