Driecg36 Predator app- Kha'bj-te Zazin (Reckless Pride)

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Driecg36 Predator app- Kha'bj-te Zazin (Reckless Pride)

Post by driecg36 » 29 Apr 2018, 19:35

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Marine Name (so we know who you are; if you play alien mostly, state that here): Pierre 'Jackass' Martin, Synth Name: Oscar

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name):
Kha'bj-te Zazin (Reckless Conceit/Pride, pronounced "Kah juh teh Zah zin")

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?
Yes, I am.

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How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator)?

I intend to play a very cocky, brash, and proud predator. Instead of spending most of the round hiding while looking for suitable prey, I'd make my presence announced and let the enemy come to me. I will do this by approaching potential prey uncloaked, and performing various threatening emotes and showing them my weapons, in a effort to lure them out and provoke them to fight. This doesn't mean murderboneing, mind you; I will still pick prey carefully and thoughtfully. On top of that, I will usually bait enemies into engaging me rather than attacking them outright. Due to the nature of my character, he will naturally be partisan towards attacking those that disrespect him, and only reserve honor duels for enemies who really target his ego. On top of that, he will be very much a show off who prefers style over efficiency in combat (unless his life depends on it, of course). He will openly taunt and mock his enemies, often times placing himself at unnecessary risk.

I also will not tolerate players that act LRP with my predator; if you try to push him out of the way or hug him, he will most likely cut off one of your limbs as a lesson.

He may occasionally have minor spats with other predators, as they consider him reckless and conceited (as seen by his name), but he has no interest in interfering with their hunts or breaking the honor code ICly. He still has a lot of respect for those he thinks superior to him, and would be willing to temporarily put aside his excessive personal pride if an elder ordered him to.

Before you say anything, yes I know this play-style will get me killed a lot and is far from optimal. Zazin is far from an ideal predator. I don't particularly mind, and I think that the will be more than fun enough to play (and hopefully interact with) to make up for it.

Why should we whitelist you?

I've played on this server for over a year now (with a long hiatus over winter), and I'd like to think that over that time I've been a positive asset to the community. I'm more than capable of many different types of RP, and I believe I would be capable of enhancing the rounds I am in as predator; partially thanks to my more unique playstyle, as well as the accumulation of rounds I've interacted with predators on. I also have an accepted synth whitelist, which I think should somewhat help prove I'm a good rp-er and capable of handling an important whitelisted role.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)? Nope.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why? No current bans on any other servers.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor? Yes, I do.
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Post by Weaselburg » 29 Apr 2018, 20:52

Nice story, been here a while, and a moderator. Gonna gave to give this a plus one.
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Post by edda » 29 Apr 2018, 21:30

You know, I almost never see you outside of msay. What times and roles do you play, besides Oscar?
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Post by driecg36 » 29 Apr 2018, 21:34

Really depends on my schedule (evening EST typically), but recently I've been playing quite a bit of PFC, SO, and SL.

This past week I had midterms so I didnt really play all that much.
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Post by edda » 29 Apr 2018, 22:06

Two criticisms: One, you're not using semicolons correctly in your story, and two, your play-style is generic. However, you are a mod, and you have a clear concept in your head. Your story may be short, but it is not at all poorly written, and it flows well.

It's hard for me to know how well you RP without seeing you in action, though, so I'll be keeping an eye out. Nonetheless, I'm leaning on a +1, which should not change unless I see you do something super wonky IC.

Good luck.

Just a note: Short stories and generic personalities don't bother me nearly as much as I know it bothers some regulars, so in the event you aren't accepted, I would work on improving those two.
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Post by Kerek » 29 Apr 2018, 22:18

I've had really good interactions with Piere, playstyles don't matter at all since most of them get thrown out the window and its hard to think of any sort of real gimic for a murderbone machine. Uber aggressive predators are more special than the stalky ones and honestly I think this will bring a lot of RP between my character and his since our pred personalities would clash HARD. Total +1
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Post by Sleepy Retard » 29 Apr 2018, 22:47

Besides using semi-colons wrong three times out of five (good job loser)

I think the story, while short, isn't mostly garbage fluff and shows off your predators personality. Your play style is not generic, in fact, considering most of the preds are pussy footing around killing marines. While this is mostly fine, I can think of several occasions where preds should've engaged marines, and if what you say is true in your story - you won't be murderboning but killing when necessary.

I like how you're loud and risk taking. This is the exact opposite of everyone else. They all *laugh1/2/3 while cloaked and saying things in the shadow. You'll die, a lot, but if you stick to it, it'll be enjoyable.

Given that I'm not a predator, I won't give a +1 or -1. I know you're a good player, even if that's biased coming from me. Your potential for quality RP is there, having seen you on Aurora station.

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Post by edda » 29 Apr 2018, 22:53

I'm glad to hear this directness in play-style is actually rare. Also, I just remembered that you're the synth Oscar, so I've no doubt you're a good RPer.
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Post by driecg36 » 29 Apr 2018, 23:07

El Defaultio wrote:
29 Apr 2018, 22:47
Besides using semi-colons wrong three times out of five (good job loser)

I think the story, while short, isn't mostly garbage fluff and shows off your predators personality. Your play style is not generic, in fact, considering most of the preds are pussy footing around killing marines. While this is mostly fine, I can think of several occasions where preds should've engaged marines, and if what you say is true in your story - you won't be murderboning but killing when necessary.

I like how you're loud and risk taking. This is the exact opposite of everyone else. They all *laugh1/2/3 while cloaked and saying things in the shadow. You'll die, a lot, but if you stick to it, it'll be enjoyable.

Given that I'm not a predator, I won't give a +1 or -1. I know you're a good player, even if that's biased coming from me. Your potential for quality RP is there, having seen you on Aurora station.

Good luck
Thanks fella; ill take it; into; consideration; for the; future.

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I'm glad to hear this directness in play-style is actually rare. Also, I just remembered that you're the synth Oscar, so I've no doubt you're a good RPer.
Thanks, Oscar's a lot of fun, and I like playing as him a lot.
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Post by awan » 30 Apr 2018, 03:50

I think I can +1 this without issue. I have seen the player roleplay and do not have any objections to it. Nor does it raise any red flags so far. The story is good but a bit short indeed.
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Post by Karmac » 30 Apr 2018, 03:54

I have no criticism, I only spotted one grammatical error and I'm not gonna point it out, the story flows well and is probably the only story I've read in a long time that actually tells me about your predator in detail, the playstyle is anything but generic, considering 9/10 pred apps nowadays will be some variation of "I observe my prey and then kill it". +1, good application. But I'm gonna have to throw in a small -1 because you gave your text colour and put the backstory in a spoiler button, I hate it when people do that, it's annoying to look at and its more effort to look through than I'd consider worthwhile.
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Post by Lukey111 » 30 Apr 2018, 09:24

As predator, I believe it is not that big of a deal about his grammar, as it is in synthetic apps. He is already a mod/synth and this was a pretty well made app. My one problem was the backstory. It was a bit short, but it did tell the personality of your pred.

Therefore, I believe this app deserves a +1.

EDIT: I don't think that a person who put their text in spoiler with colors, going with all the extra effort to do so, should have to wait 3 more months, even though everything else is good. Just my perspective/opinion.
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Post by driecg36 » 30 Apr 2018, 11:26

Karmac wrote:
30 Apr 2018, 03:54
I have no criticism, I only spotted one grammatical error and I'm not gonna point it out, the story flows well and is probably the only story I've read in a long time that actually tells me about your predator in detail, the playstyle is anything but generic, considering 9/10 pred apps nowadays will be some variation of "I observe my prey and then kill it". +1, good application. But I'm gonna have to throw in a small -1 because you gave your text colour and put the backstory in a spoiler button, I hate it when people do that, it's annoying to look at and its more effort to look through than I'd consider worthwhile.
Teal is a good color fella, but ty!
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As predator, I believe it is not that big of a deal about his grammar, as it is in synthetic apps. He is already a mod/synth and this was a pretty well made app. My one problem was the backstory. It was a bit short, but it did tell the personality of your pred.

Therefore, I believe this app deserves a +1.
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I think I can +1 this without issue. I have seen the player roleplay and do not have any objections to it. Nor does it raise any red flags so far. The story is good but a bit short indeed.
I specifically tried to go for a more concise short story; I think a backstory should more so be about giving people a snapshot of your character rather than being a long, full biography. And besides, who wants to read a 5 page google doc? *coughs. Anyway, I'm glad you liked it!
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Post by Lukey111 » 30 Apr 2018, 11:39

driecg36 wrote:
30 Apr 2018, 11:26
Teal is a good color fella, but ty!





I specifically tried to go for a more concise short story; I think a backstory should more so be about giving people a snapshot of your character rather than being a long, full biography. And besides, who wants to read a 5 page google doc? *coughs. Anyway, I'm glad you liked it!
A lot of people have those kinds of snapshots, but they have about 2 or 3 of them, just to make their story look pretty big.
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Post by driecg36 » 30 Apr 2018, 11:53

Lukey111 wrote:
30 Apr 2018, 11:39
A lot of people have those kinds of snapshots, but they have about 2 or 3 of them, just to make their story look pretty big.
If there's anything more you want to know about my character that I didn't include because the story was too short, I'd love to answer any questions you have! I just personally don't see the point in making people read pages when you can tell them what you need to (which I hope I did) in just a few paragraphs.
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Post by Kavlo » 03 May 2018, 13:16

Driecg is more then able to manage this role, wheter it be from a roleplay standpoint, robustness standpoint, rule knowledge standpoint you name it. The backstory ain't the longest but it gets the job done and the rest of the app is pretty decent.
I'd bet a lot of people think of driecg as kind of a memey shitposter but trust me he can be serious when he wants to and hopefully will when he plays predator because I mean if he doesn't he probably won't last long.

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Post by driecg36 » 03 May 2018, 13:22

Kavlo wrote:
03 May 2018, 13:16
Driecg is more then able to manage this role, wheter it be from a roleplay standpoint, robustness standpoint, rule knowledge standpoint you name it. The backstory ain't the longest but it gets the job done and the rest of the app is pretty decent.
I'd bet a lot of people think of driecg as kind of a memey shitposter but trust me he can be serious when he wants to and hopefully will when he plays predator because I mean if he doesn't he probably won't last long.

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Post by Ghostdex » 03 May 2018, 16:00

Since everyone else has pretty much touched on the application itself and everything else, I’m just gonna toss my +1 in here and say that you’re a pretty enjoyable person ICly.
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Post by driecg36 » 03 May 2018, 16:19

ghostdex wrote:
03 May 2018, 16:00
Since everyone else has pretty much touched on the application itself and everything else, I’m just gonna toss my +1 in here and say that you’re a pretty enjoyable person ICly.
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Post by z a n e b o t » 04 May 2018, 23:06

I've seen you play ingame, you're good in every role I've seen have a +1

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Post by Imperator_Titan » 05 May 2018, 18:24

I thought you were joking when you said you were going to make a pred app...

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Post by Adralimas » 15 May 2018, 20:35

Best moderator in the world applying for breadnerds?, Yes +1.
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Post by NescauComToddy » 16 May 2018, 17:36

In the old days, I had many positive experiences with Pierre, but especially with Oscar, and since others have reviewed most of this app, there is not much to comment. +1

Hope to see you on the hunting grounds.
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Post by driecg36 » 18 May 2018, 09:10

adralimas wrote:
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Best moderator in the world applying for breadnerds?, Yes +1.
Ty bestmin, i look forward to your adminbus help
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In the old days, I had many positive experiences with Pierre, but especially with Oscar, and since others have reviewed most of this app, there is not much to comment. +1

Hope to see you on the hunting grounds.
Thanks Nesceau!
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Post by NoahKirchner » 10 Jun 2018, 09:47

I certainly like the idea, I don't think it's ever actually been properly done before. Predators, when they mess with a round, tend to be irritating and mess with the round from a shadows. From what I can tell from this, you plan on directly interacting through cockiness and whatnot, I think it could be interesting. As long as you stick to this and don't do the normal pred thing of randomly yoinking people, then +1 for sure, since your story was good. Just dont become another *laugh pred please.

Also you're a mod so you won't abuse probably.
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