Drownie APP - Shaq'Klahoo

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Drownie APP - Shaq'Klahoo

Post by Drownie » 24 Jun 2018, 16:23

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Marine Name (so we know who you are; if you play alien mostly, state that here):
Sarah ‘Menace’ Dennis (I've been playing Xeno lately too).

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?
Yep, I know about the Yautja Code of Honor before even this, I'm a great fan of the AvP franchise.

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name):
Shaq’Klahoo

Character background (An ADEQUATE description and story of your predators background):
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How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator)?
Well, even if the situation changes your way of acting – we all agree that Murphy's Law is something present in the life of a Predator since an encounter with a marine can result in several actions, perhaps this is what gives magic and particularity to the encounters with Predators. I’d like to maintain a modus operandi very near to the story.
I target to be a Predator more “sociable” but not the type of Predator that helps a side of the battle at the point of be letting himself even be operated/medicated by those. I want to approach the Marines/Xenos in a way of reconnaissance and not observation – and at the most only engage aside when in a duel, avoiding murder bone that way, because we know that a good Predator can change the sides of a round.

I will avoid using such weapons as Plasma Caster/Rifle and any type of long-range equipment; it is a dishonor to use those type of weapon when your fight is not unbalanced or dishonorable, I’ll usually take meeles, such as Clan Sword, Wristblades, Whip – I don’t see myself using traps often either, because it would be against my principle of attacking only what is target as.
Talking about RP, I know that the tools the Predator use to RP are extremely scarce – and making a good RP can only be achieved through a great handling of such tools, the mime seems to be something present for this, since what the game allows us is basically /me, *emotes, and the universal translator. So my contact would always be through this, and what the situation asks for.

Three things I need to clarify:
  • Shaq is cooperative, but he’s NOT YOUR FRIEND. I’ve seen so many times Predators letting be hug by marines or helped by medics. He’s an antagonist, not a buddy boi.
  • Even though I showed myself a bit against the cloaking I’ll not waste the opportunity to use it when surrounded.
  • Playing to win is not my type of game nor use the game in my favor, usually people see me as SL, which is a role that has 90% of its principal objective is take your squad to victory - even if I play in such a way, I do not think a win is worth more than a good round.

Why should we whitelist you?
I’ve been in CM for two years and counting my lost accounts probably three. At this time, I won’t lie I had problems with the staff, between April and December of 2017 I’ve received an amount of 3 bans and 6 warnings(https://gyazo.com/a55ab0112cc5856a7976ec1fcaf3c047) – those aren’t great numbers because I joined CM with basically 10% of English learned and didn’t have any idea about the game mechanics, I also were passing for hard times.

I’m speaking this not for victimization, just to clarify for those admins that unfortunately have met with the old “me”, I’ve changed.

Lately, I’ve become more active in the community and getting some respect in my main character; I really would like to prove myself, and use my Predator in a way to complement the round such as an unknown creature that resides on the planet. I like the idea of being a Predator called “Shaq” who is dishonored by his compatriots – carrying the weight of his own birth, has the only goal of honoring his father and himself.
Being an unknown creature with only one principle to follow is something new for me, as I'm usually sticking to the rules of each role/class, because I never felt able to make my own “path” in-game.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?
According to my notes, I got banned by EORG on July 4th – accidentally.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?
As I'm aware, no.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?
Yes, It’s good to see less EA here.
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Re: Drownie APP - Shaq'Klahoo

Post by Nick123q23 » 24 Jun 2018, 23:26

This looks pretty good so far. I'll review it when I have more time.
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Re: Drownie APP - Shaq'Klahoo

Post by Drownie » 25 Jun 2018, 00:35

Nick123q23 wrote:
24 Jun 2018, 23:26
This looks pretty good so far. I'll review it when I have more time.
Thank you for saying that, that did remember me to read my story again in a way to notice mistakes which I haven't noticed before.

For some reason, the start of the proverb "Life SOME generation, but a good name forever" isn't finished, it lacks a word and the true sentence should be "Life lasts some generations, but a good name forever" - just pointing it here because I'm sure someone would warn me about that.
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Re: Drownie APP - Shaq'Klahoo

Post by Kavlo » 26 Jun 2018, 01:31

I'll start this off but saying this app looks pretty good overall.

You've done well writing the backstory, how you intend to play your predator and have given a good bit of information backing up why you should be whitelisted.
I don't really have many problems with this application that stand out overall.

+1.
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Re: Drownie APP - Shaq'Klahoo

Post by Avalanchee » 09 Jul 2018, 06:45

I saw Sarah around,
Story is great, I enjoyed reading it.

Playstyle is just for the looks, most predators change their playstyle every game.

Neutral leaning positive.
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Post by coroneljones » 09 Jul 2018, 08:20

The story is pretty good I would say, well written and with some flourish in it to add characterization and descriptions, though it has one downfall, not that big but still noticeable, being some grammatical errors.
Aside from that, decent activity, though dont think I´ve seen you ingame, likely due to timezone constraints or maybe im just forgetting.

And without talking about the rest of the app in specific detail, I would say its pretty good.

+1
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Post by Symbiosis » 09 Jul 2018, 08:41

I’m leaning towards +1. It’s well written.

I have one question, what was the “serious disorder” he was diagnosed with?

Yautja culture has various places to send Yautja. Becoming Blooded isn’t for everyone... let alone the physically or mentally weak.
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Re: Drownie APP - Shaq'Klahoo

Post by Imperator_Titan » 09 Jul 2018, 08:54

Symbiosis wrote:
09 Jul 2018, 08:41
I’m leaning towards +1. It’s well written.

I have one question, what was the “serious disorder” he was diagnosed with?

Yautja culture has various places to send Yautja. Becoming Blooded isn’t for everyone... let alone the physically or mentally weak.
Just as I finished reviewing this app, that also popped up in my head. The application itself is good, I don't mind the fact that you have trouble speaking English as long as you give your best attempt in doing so.

Neutral until that question is answered, what was his serious disorder?

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Re: Drownie APP - Shaq'Klahoo

Post by Drownie » 09 Jul 2018, 17:32

Symbiosis wrote:
09 Jul 2018, 08:41
I’m leaning towards +1. It’s well written.

I have one question, what was the “serious disorder” he was diagnosed with?

Yautja culture has various places to send Yautja. Becoming Blooded isn’t for everyone... let alone the physically or mentally weak.
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09 Jul 2018, 08:54
Just as I finished reviewing this app, that also popped up in my head. The application itself is good, I don't mind the fact that you have trouble speaking English as long as you give your best attempt in doing so.

Neutral until that question is answered, what was his serious disorder?
Oh yes, the disorder was done to add a specific attribute to my character that would have an immense influence on his journey giving this masked warrior a story above "Killing, Honoring, and Dying". I do not have make it very clear but the "disorder" is about a mental illness preventing him from taking actions with such mastery as most predators, making him "weak and useless" (that's the reason I did the Predator so tanky, because that way he don't need to fight against his mental disabilities).
The disorder was meant to be a sort of Alice in Wonderland Syndrome with a heavy influence of ADHD.

coroneljones wrote:
09 Jul 2018, 08:20
The story is pretty good I would say, well written and with some flourish in it to add characterization and descriptions, though it has one downfall, not that big but still noticeable, being some grammatical errors.
Aside from that, decent activity, though dont think I´ve seen you ingame, likely due to timezone constraints or maybe im just forgetting.

And without talking about the rest of the app in specific detail, I would say its pretty good.

+1
Kavlo wrote:
26 Jun 2018, 01:31
I'll start this off but saying this app looks pretty good overall.

You've done well writing the backstory, how you intend to play your predator and have given a good bit of information backing up why you should be whitelisted.
I don't really have many problems with this application that stand out overall.

+1.
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09 Jul 2018, 06:45
I saw Sarah around,
Story is great, I enjoyed reading it.

Playstyle is just for the looks, most predators change their playstyle every game.

Neutral leaning positive.
Thank you all!! and I'm sorry for the grammatical mistakes you can find in some sentences, if someone see a "huge" grammatical error please warn me.
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Post by Imperator_Titan » 10 Jul 2018, 00:00

Drownie wrote:
09 Jul 2018, 17:32
Oh yes, the disorder was done to add a specific attribute to my character that would have an immense influence on his journey giving this masked warrior a story above "Killing, Honoring, and Dying". I do not have make it very clear but the "disorder" is about a mental illness preventing him from taking actions with such mastery as most predators, making him "weak and useless" (that's the reason I did the Predator so tanky, because that way he don't need to fight against his mental disabilities).
The disorder was meant to be a sort of Alice in Wonderland Syndrome with a heavy influence of ADHD.

Thank you all!! and I'm sorry for the grammatical mistakes you can find in some sentences, if someone see a "huge" grammatical error please warn me.
Generally speaking, the mentally/physically disabled really are culled or turned into slaves. I suppose an exception could indeed be made however, seeing as how in the backstory, the father did indeed train him harder than a normal Yaujta and at the expense of the ridicule of his peers.

Changing my vote to a +1, everything looks good on my end.

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Post by TheMaskedMan2 » 11 Jul 2018, 19:39

Looks good to me, I remember seeing you ingame a few times, and while nothing particular sticks out, it's enough for me to know you're fairly active. Backstory is good, well written, bit interesting, no real major flaws I can think of. Playstyle looks neato and you seem to have a general understanding and at least a good mindset going in, i'll give this a....

+1
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Post by HBlokkum » 12 Jul 2018, 11:53

Will be nice to see Shaq dunk on some xenos

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Post by Aceluke123 » 12 Jul 2018, 18:57

I would have to agree with the other comments, your application is really well done. The code of honor is something all predators are to follow above all else or whitelist will be removed. From the overall answers in the application, I can tell that while your predator style is slightly different but not completely new as you merely need to follow the code of honor and make sure to fight worthy prey with correct weapons, but hope you would not abuse plasma weaponry as you have stated on unworthy prey. Your predator's backstory is unique enough that I find nothing problematic with you getting a whitelist even knowing as other's have said that those with weaknesses/disabilities are typically culled or slaved. The aspect of your predator having a blooded predator with a disability may give you and other predators in a round a type of roleplay that isn't seen very often, though that is just my take on your application.

Reading your story I would have to say it has a slight bit of awkward english used which could have used some improvement if I'm honest with the way you described some of the environment and actions your predator did to chase down your prey. Though the point comes across alright enough that I can get a feel of how you plan to roleplay as a predator and it shows how you plan to roleplay in your story.

I'll give this a +1 as I believe you to seem like a competent roleplayer who will focus on roleplay rather than trying to get the thrill of the kill as an antagonist.
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Re: Drownie APP - Shaq'Klahoo

Post by ThesoldierLLJK » 26 Jul 2018, 23:29

Good player, good back story, good application, what more can I say

+1

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Post by Sneakyr » 27 Jul 2018, 06:53

HBlokkum wrote:
12 Jul 2018, 11:53
Will be nice to see Shaq dunk on some xenos

+1
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Post by Drownie » 27 Jul 2018, 08:29

Thanks for the support !
Imperator_Titan wrote:
10 Jul 2018, 00:00
Changing my vote to a +1, everything looks good on my end.
TheMaskedMan2 wrote:
11 Jul 2018, 19:39
i'll give this a.... +1
HBlokkum wrote:
12 Jul 2018, 11:53
Will be nice to see Shaq dunk on some xenos +1
Aceluke123 wrote:
12 Jul 2018, 18:57
I'll give this a +1 as I believe you to seem like a competent roleplayer who will focus on roleplay rather than trying to get the thrill of the kill as an antagonist.
Thesoldier wrote:
26 Jul 2018, 23:29
Good player, good back story, good application, what more can I say
+1
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27 Jul 2018, 06:53
I knew I wasn't the only one thinking this.
Also, I'd like to make an addendum here that the name "Shaq" is not inspired in any Basketball player, where do you people get these ideas from?
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Post by HBlokkum » 27 Jul 2018, 17:34

Also, I'd like to make an addendum here that the name "Shaq" is not inspired in any Basketball player, where do you people get these ideas from?
Probably from the fact that in Yautja it translates to destroyer of hoops

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Post by frozentsbgg » 29 Jul 2018, 21:28

+1 I'd be happy to see this on the whitelist.

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Post by Karmac » 07 Aug 2018, 03:27

I can't honestly plus one anyone using the name 'shaq' for their predator

you need to get up earlier in the morning to sneak that one past me
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Re: Drownie APP - Shaq'Klahoo

Post by Ghostdex » 19 Aug 2018, 23:47

The application is good and I like the explanations you've provided. You're conduct ICly is good as well, and honestly the only slight qualm I have with this app is the name but I don't think you chose it for the meme appeal. +1 from me.
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Post by Drownie » 21 Aug 2018, 00:35

ghostdex wrote:
19 Aug 2018, 23:47
The application is good and I like the explanations you've provided. You're conduct ICly is good as well, and honestly the only slight qualm I have with this app is the name but I don't think you chose it for the meme appeal. +1 from me.
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29 Jul 2018, 21:28
+1 I'd be happy to see this on the whitelist.
Thanks for the support, also thanks for +3 from the Seniors that I don't believe it is being counted as two left *cry.
Also, yes - the meme wasn't in purpose.
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Re: Drownie APP - Shaq'Klahoo

Post by spartanbobby » 02 Sep 2018, 03:31

Drownie wrote:
24 Jun 2018, 16:23

SKRRRRRRRR
+1

Liked the app, the playstyle from what I can tell you're active (at least in discord.) But your avatar is kinda trash, like come on what even is it?
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Re: Drownie APP - Shaq'Klahoo

Post by DriedMilk » 02 Sep 2018, 03:38

The story and playstyle are nice.

Dwownie's also a good RPer and overall player

yeah ok retard

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Post by Symbiosis » 02 Sep 2018, 05:51

Seeing as the player responded to my question regarding their disorder and the app other than that looks solid to me, going to +1 as well!
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Post by Emeraldblood » 02 Sep 2018, 14:07

Resolved - Accepted; Whitelist will be updated shortly.
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