Byond ID:
ElDefaultio
Marine Name:
Vanechka ‘Sleepy’ Penkina
Name of the character you want whitelisted:
Pa’Thun Thar’n (Paya’s Strength. I have Bobby’s permission for the clan name.)
Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?
Yes. I’ve read it extensively. I’ve also listened to Bobby ramble about a reworked one.
Character background:
I'll put two, one is a short excerpt of a hunt within, engaging a creature called a Karyar, the other is a full on story, interlinking with Kavlo's Ke'Thun story. As a disclaimer, this story has my Predator already bloodied! (Which, for whatever reason, is young bloods in game. Go figure.)
A Karyar Duel:
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Pa'Thun stomped down the hallway, leaving his brothers behind as the red alarms blared around the facility. There was no need for stealth at this time, there was only blood shed and honour to be restored. He turned the corner and watched several humans wearing lab coats board up in their own rooms, a panic washing over every single person in the facility. He rounded a corner and stared down a set of stairs, the sounds of a fight was evident even at a distance.
A set of wooden doors was all that was in his way, a low grunt was let out as he barreled down the staircase, smashing through the two wooden doors that were in his way. The room was dark, and the fighting had died down in the few moments it took to get there. He gazed around as he flicked on his thermals. Something wasn’t right in the room, there was something definitely in there with him. Something that was coming right for him at this moment….
A large, bipedal furried creature. It had long tentacles in place for a mouth and was drooling profusely, known as a Karyar, it charged straight at Pa'Thun with a loud and ear shattering shriek. It picked up speed at an almost unnatural rate, and with a powerful leap it lunged its body at Pa'Thun, attacking with a bloodlust that he had not seen before.
Unholstering his war glaive, Pa'Thun sidestepped as much as he could, swinging his weapon at the beast that was flying through the air straight at him. They both let out fearsome roars, as the glaive was hacked into the beast’s shoulder, causing it to crash into the ground with a quick recovery. Bashing Pa'Thun in the chest with its oversized fists, Pa'Thun was knocked back as he watched the beast rip the glaive from its own shoulder, and wield it. The Karyar, while not sapient was definitely smart, wielded his weapon with both hands and charged once more at Pa'Thun.
Scrambling to his feet, he bolted in the opposite direction, quickly pulling out a harpoon from his hunting pouch. Skidding to a halt, he turned around and hurled the harpoon at the creature. Roaring in pain, the beast slightly lowered the war glaive, as Pa’Thun slammed into it. Crumbling to the floor, the war glaive clinked loudly as Pa’Thun pulled himself closer to it. With a swift jerk, Pa’Thun slid the war glaive away from the beast as it grabbed his leg. Stomping the Karyar in the mouth, he dove towards the weapon and grasped it. Pushing himself off the ground with the aid of the handle of the war glaive, he watched the beast across from him.
Desperate. Exhausted. Enraged. Once more, it propelled itself through the air at Pa’Thun in a frantic attack. Kneeling down, he angled the war glaive up towards the Karyar. As it closed in through the air, Pa’Thun looked into its eyes. Fear. The realization that it leaped onto a brandished polearm. With one great thrust, Pa’Thun impaled the Karyar through the stomach and lifted it up in the air.
“Smile, beast, for Paya considers you a good hunt. Your pathetic life brings honour upon me.”
Throwing it onto the ground, he dislodges the glaive, shoving his fist into the wound. Lathering his hand in blood, he imprints his hand mark onto the face of the Karyar.
A Retrieval of Strength, in Paya's Name (Full Story):
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For simplicity sakes, I will leave a google doc link here. This looks much nicer than lines after lines on the CM forums. I hope you enjoy the joint venture between Kavlo and I, if you do choose to read it! Be warned - it's long.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1G9g ... sp=sharing
How do you intend to play your predator:
I plan to play my predator as a heavy and efficient Thar’n Ritualist. In practice, this means I will brand my trophies by shoving a gauntlet into their gut, leaving a bloodied hand mark on their face before skinning and gutting them fully. That is, if they were a worthy opponent...
Additionally, if I recover a fallen Yautja (and if it’s applicable) I would bring them back to the scout ship, and brand their mask with a hand print of Paya - an urn of ‘sacred’ xeno blood, which means I won’t actually go out and kill a xeno for this blood, but something I would always have on me (in an RP fashion, as there is no item for this.) Alongside a little ‘musical’ beating of some RP drums, again, just a fluff thing I’ll RP having, as there is no item for it.
Of course, I would still bring them to the planet and detonate them, to fully give them an honourable death. Because blowing them up on the ship isn’t actually a good idea.
Why should we whitelist you?
I like to think I’m a capable RPer. I try to add to the rounds where I’m not a straight unga PFC. I currently have a synthetic whitelist, as well being on the synth council, and a Commander whitelist. I feel like I’d be able to add to the round with a bit more unique actions, alongside unique RP with fellow Yautja
Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason?
Nah.
Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?
Don’t think so.
Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?
Yup!