Simonset55's pred app - Rhae'Gar

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Simonset55's pred app - Rhae'Gar

Post by simonset55 » 07 Nov 2018, 15:36

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Simonset55

Marine Name (so we know who you are; if you play alien mostly, state that here):

Mudder Plantagenet

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name):

Rhae'Gar

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?

Yes of course

Character background (An ADEQUATE description and story of your predators background):
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How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator)?

I intend to play my predator as an "artist" of some sort, amongst hunting he will often paint rooms with blood. You can call him a blood painter/lover/enthusiast My intention with this gimmick is to make a kind of horror atmosphere in the game, so that marines (or xenos i guess) can hopefully get a bit more RP in their rounds when they stumble upon my "art". It also seems fitting to the lore of predators as seen in the first movie where they would skin people and hang them from a tree, my gimmick is similar to that.

And if i were to ever duel someone i would cut my hand to spill some of my own blood, since my pred has this little tradition of spilling a bit of his blood before fighting. When the situation allows me to of course.

When i say hunt, i do mean the generic predator running around, observing to find a worthy prey to fight, and perhaps making a trophy of them if they are truly worthy. Something i can imagine doing, is making sound to attract potential prey into an area where i have painted my artwork, to see their reactions to this. It is what i believe, that a pred should be doing like in the movie. This creepy stalking creature who finds happiness by stalking people and scaring them, ish.

This is all doable ingame i believe, Painting a room can be done by dragging a corpse around and slashing it to spill blood, so that will be done when i get my hands on a corpse in some way.

Why should we whitelist you?

I have not really contributed in any real useful way to the server, that is true. But i am a person who is capable of holding myself up to any standard of RP really. I am a regular who does not cause trouble and i am active-ish on the forums and pretty active on the discord. These are not really good reasons to whitelist me tbh. The only real reason i can come up with is that my gimmick could potentially be fun for players on the server, and hopefully encourage some kind of RP. All i can say is, if i knew how to code or something like that then i'd contribute in a useful way. But alas, i only play here like the scrub i am.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?

Never been banned

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?

Not banned anywhere, nope

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?

Naturally, that's common sense.
I play "Mudder Plantagenet" and that's it, no fancy quotes or anything.
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Re: Simonset55's pred app - Rhae'Gar

Post by NescauComToddy » 07 Nov 2018, 16:05

Definitely interesting, good quality background, but it does not tell us much about Rhae'Gar's personality beyond his artistic 'spirit'. You could have provided us with another in-depth peek of your character's personality, but I do not see its lack as a big issue.

The way you intend to play is original, and a good example of what to fill this part of the application.

I have not had many experiences with you, but I know that you are active in Discord and in general, a good player. As long as other whitelisted players have no problem with you, I believe you would be a good addition to the hunt, good luck +1.
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Re: Simonset55's pred app - Rhae'Gar

Post by Survivor » 07 Nov 2018, 16:16

Definite +1.

The playstyle/Gimmick is original, as is with the story. I personally really liked it, mainly because you weren't scared to use certain controversial topics within it.
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Re: Simonset55's pred app - Rhae'Gar

Post by Karmac » 07 Nov 2018, 19:38

I cannot find a single thing wrong with this application, the play-style is original and works within the confines of the game's mechanics. The backstory perfectly portrays the personality while providing an example of how you intend to play and stays accurate to what you'd defined as his play-style. Activity is presumably a non-issue if you are active on the discord as Nescau suggests, this is never really something that bothers me unless a predator app is your first post but it definitely helps.

It's a big +1 from me.
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Re: Simonset55's pred app - Rhae'Gar

Post by Frans_Feiffer » 07 Nov 2018, 22:19

It’s not often that I feel hyped reading an application, however there are exceptions, this being one of em’. Not much that I can add that wasn’t said by Survivor or Karmac already. At first when I saw the mentioning of the Ku klux I was a little worried, however in the context of your story, the execution was very well done, and by the end that original fear was replaced with as stated, HYPE to the what you do as Pred. Overall i’m excited to hunt alongside you and see the art you conceive.

+1, paint me like one of your Jamaican girls.
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Re: Simonset55's pred app - Rhae'Gar

Post by Audi_Gzz » 08 Nov 2018, 00:56

This is honestly a really unique play style, gimmick, and a interesting story though. But I wish it would explain more of your predator and not of his actions and what he does. You can pull this gimmick off with the mobs that are spawned into the map I'm pretty sure. I'll give this a big 1+, although I would wish you would talk and describe about your pred's personality and why he does this "artistic" gimmick, is it to please Paya? Or one of the Yautja gods? Thats about the only questions I have. Overall very nice app.
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Re: Simonset55's pred app - Rhae'Gar

Post by MattAtlas » 08 Nov 2018, 01:23

Big +1. Very active on discord, cool guy, and the playstyle and story are both good.
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Re: Simonset55's pred app - Rhae'Gar

Post by Avalanchee » 08 Nov 2018, 01:51

Yeah, fuck yeah.
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Re: Simonset55's pred app - Rhae'Gar

Post by smudgels » 08 Nov 2018, 02:29

I love the potential your proposed play style have, and the story was GREAT, language use was appropriate and you set the scene very well.
Active discord player, nice dude, you'd make for a great Pred.
+1

(As said prior as well, I would like to see your predator developed personality wise, but even with what you have now, it wouldn't be too hard to make one I'm sure)

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Re: Simonset55's pred app - Rhae'Gar

Post by ThesoldierLLJK » 08 Nov 2018, 07:04

Application is fine and the player isn’t a shitlord
+1

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Re: Simonset55's pred app - Rhae'Gar

Post by simonset55 » 08 Nov 2018, 08:39

Thanks for all the nice comments, i'm glad you enjoyed the story and how i'm planning on playing.
Audi wrote:
08 Nov 2018, 00:56
This is honestly a really unique play style, gimmick, and a interesting story though. But I wish it would explain more of your predator and not of his actions and what he does. You can pull this gimmick off with the mobs that are spawned into the map I'm pretty sure. I'll give this a big 1+, although I would wish you would talk and describe about your pred's personality and why he does this "artistic" gimmick, is it to please Paya? Or one of the Yautja gods? Thats about the only questions I have. Overall very nice app.
As for why my pred is artistic, it is not exactly a spiritual thing i had in mind for him. I believe that my pred does serve to please Paya, but that is done through the hunt. His artwork is merely a personal hobby of his, which he enjoys doing as the thrill of seeing humans react to his gruesome pieces, would please him before battling. It also has to do with his obsession of blood, as can be seen in a paragraph where the different kinds of blood are described, my pred loves to spill it and make use of it in his "artwork".

In short, Rhae'Gar is just obsessed with blood. That is what i had in mind for him when writing the story.
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Post by Griffith78 » 08 Nov 2018, 17:13

I've interacted with this character a few times and he seems to have a good head on his shoulders and knows his way around the server.

+1
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Post by KittyHawkpilot019 » 09 Nov 2018, 00:45

Predator movie esque story, good player and a new gimmick that could refresh yautja encounters. +1
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Post by Bancrose » 09 Nov 2018, 16:35

MFW I am going to +1 this story for killing the KKK

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Re: Simonset55's pred app - Rhae'Gar

Post by Vampmare » 12 Nov 2018, 02:13

Good story. Good application. No outer glow and spoiler for the story. There really isn't much to say here.

I've played with you here and there for a bit and you definitely know how to RP. I also happen to like the gimmick and I believe you can pull it off to make the rounds more interesting.

One thing, why do you want to be a predator?

You have earned the +1.
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Re: Simonset55's pred app - Rhae'Gar

Post by simonset55 » 12 Nov 2018, 02:36

Vampmare wrote:
12 Nov 2018, 02:13
Good story. Good application. No outer glow and spoiler for the story. There really isn't much to say here.

I've played with you here and there for a bit and you definitely know how to RP. I also happen to like the gimmick and I believe you can pull it off to make the rounds more interesting.

One thing, why do you want to be a predator?

You have earned the +1.
I'd like to be a pred since it'd be cool to be something other than aliens and marines for once. It also gives me a bit more freedom to play around and even RP in an interesting way, due to getting more tools to play around with.

Also, who doesn't want to be one of 5 cool ass, roaring, click clack sound making, warrior aliens in a round. I generally just want to be a pred because it seems fun.
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Re: Simonset55's pred app - Rhae'Gar

Post by Avalanchee » 12 Nov 2018, 03:45

simonset55 wrote:
12 Nov 2018, 02:36
Who doesn't want to be one of 5 cool ass, roaring, click clack sound making, warrior aliens in a round.
Yeah, fuck yeah.
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Post by Ghostdex » 12 Nov 2018, 06:25

Good application overall, I liked the story and as you said, you don't cause issues. +1 from me.
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Post by spartanbobby » 12 Nov 2018, 08:31

ghostdex wrote:
12 Nov 2018, 06:25
Good application overall, I liked the story and as you said, you don't cause issues. +1 from me.
Karmac wrote:
07 Nov 2018, 19:38
I cannot find a single thing wrong with this application, the play-style is original and works within the confines of the game's mechanics. The backstory perfectly portrays the personality while providing an example of how you intend to play and stays accurate to what you'd defined as his play-style. Activity is presumably a non-issue if you are active on the discord as Nescau suggests, this is never really something that bothers me unless a predator app is your first post but it definitely helps.

It's a big +1 from me.
Pretty much echoing these two boys, Good in-game/discord activity, Good story and playstyle, Ok avatar. +1
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Post by Imperator_Titan » 17 Nov 2018, 02:51

Good backstory, cool and unique playstyle.

+1

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Post by Symbiosis » 17 Nov 2018, 03:29

Imperator_Titan wrote:
17 Nov 2018, 02:51
Good backstory, cool and unique playstyle.

+1
Plus everything everyone else has already said! You’re at 4, Chief!

+1 from me!
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