Ikthya-de Luar-ke (Young Blood)
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Ikthya-de Luar-ke (Young Blood)
Round three, FIGHT.
Byond ID:
ParadoxSpace
Marine Name (so we know who you are, if you play alien mostly, state that here):
Vera Crux (Although let me clarify I've mostly been playing xeno since prealpha)
Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name):
Ikthya-de Luar-ke
Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?
I've been studying it since you posted it.
Character background (A very BRIEF description of your predators background):
"Who are you, young one?"
The elders looked to her, yellow eyes displaying no clear emotion.
"Umbra. Umbra Moon."
The young female stared back. She felt hope. She felt fear. She felt a strong desire. A desire for the Hunt.
"You tell us you wish to hunt. Why is this?"
She felt no strong desire to stay home. To spend her life raising children. This would not be her fate. She said this, as clear and as direct as she could.
The elders spoke amongst themselves. "She knows the risk, Mei'hswe. She knows what she wants. I have seen her training. I have seen her growing powerful."
A series of nods confirmed this. She was ready.
A task was given to her. The most exhilarating part of her life at the time.
Umbra stalked through the forest. Leaping from tree branch to tree branch, only making the quietest of rustles she could manage. She knew they would see everything. Her mask recorded it all. Sent it to her ship. They would review the Hunt.
At last, she found it. The Serpent they spoke of. It lacked the dorsal tubes they spoke of. It's head was smooth. Skin, red. Claws and teeth, metallic and sharp. She looked to an adjacent branch. Some life changing words were signed at her. "Get it, Mei-jadhi." She found herself overwhelmed with the pleasure of danger. The thrill of the Hunt her elders spoke of. It all happened in slow motion for her. Her bio-mask switching to a vision mode equipped to see it well. Her wrist-blades extending from her left arm. Cloak de-activating. Her powerful legs propelling her from the branch. A mighty roar coming from her mouth. At last, she came to it. It hissed at her and pounced, razor sharp tail flailing behind it, ready to impale her if she were not paying attention. She rolled to the side, pouncing at the Dragon and quickly cutting the beast's tail away. Her blades sizzled and weakened. They were not as good as some the Honoured would have. The Serpent spat and shrieked, blood hissing and bubbling on the underbrush below. It rushed forth on all four legs. Faster than anything she had ever seen. Her partner would not be helping her. The Code would be rendered broken. She ducked as it leaped into the air, as she growled loudly and extended her other set of blades straight up. The Serpent twitched, spit, hissed, but it died down. It was slain. She dropped it quickly to the ground, blades again melting away slowly. A rush of wind and a sound behind her confirmed. Her partner had seen it all. Her elders would see it all. She would finally become a young blood. One of the best, she hoped.
How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)?
My main goal is to facilitate better RP between myself, Marines, and xenos, instead of being the faceless headhunter that offers not much more than a roar. Perhaps some banter between I and the human prey, granted it's now easier for predators to speak to other people. This will also come with some 'fear-making' RP is how I'll call it, tapping on windows with my wristblades, playing back to Marines the last words of their comrades the type of shit we saw in the movies. Overall I'll try my best to be an unbiased accountable party, not exclusively going after or helping any one single team unless I owe it to them as a favor.
Why should we whitelist you?
I'd think I'm a pretty cool guy, and I've been a fan of the AvP mythos for some time. (Plus I've been on the server since pre-alpha). I've never really had any confrontations with the staff team, and I'm a pretty good marine and xeno player all around.
Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?
Absolutely not.
Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?
I'm not banned from any other servers.
Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?
I understand and I wholeheartedly accept your conditions and terms.
Byond ID:
ParadoxSpace
Marine Name (so we know who you are, if you play alien mostly, state that here):
Vera Crux (Although let me clarify I've mostly been playing xeno since prealpha)
Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name):
Ikthya-de Luar-ke
Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?
I've been studying it since you posted it.
Character background (A very BRIEF description of your predators background):
"Who are you, young one?"
The elders looked to her, yellow eyes displaying no clear emotion.
"Umbra. Umbra Moon."
The young female stared back. She felt hope. She felt fear. She felt a strong desire. A desire for the Hunt.
"You tell us you wish to hunt. Why is this?"
She felt no strong desire to stay home. To spend her life raising children. This would not be her fate. She said this, as clear and as direct as she could.
The elders spoke amongst themselves. "She knows the risk, Mei'hswe. She knows what she wants. I have seen her training. I have seen her growing powerful."
A series of nods confirmed this. She was ready.
A task was given to her. The most exhilarating part of her life at the time.
Umbra stalked through the forest. Leaping from tree branch to tree branch, only making the quietest of rustles she could manage. She knew they would see everything. Her mask recorded it all. Sent it to her ship. They would review the Hunt.
At last, she found it. The Serpent they spoke of. It lacked the dorsal tubes they spoke of. It's head was smooth. Skin, red. Claws and teeth, metallic and sharp. She looked to an adjacent branch. Some life changing words were signed at her. "Get it, Mei-jadhi." She found herself overwhelmed with the pleasure of danger. The thrill of the Hunt her elders spoke of. It all happened in slow motion for her. Her bio-mask switching to a vision mode equipped to see it well. Her wrist-blades extending from her left arm. Cloak de-activating. Her powerful legs propelling her from the branch. A mighty roar coming from her mouth. At last, she came to it. It hissed at her and pounced, razor sharp tail flailing behind it, ready to impale her if she were not paying attention. She rolled to the side, pouncing at the Dragon and quickly cutting the beast's tail away. Her blades sizzled and weakened. They were not as good as some the Honoured would have. The Serpent spat and shrieked, blood hissing and bubbling on the underbrush below. It rushed forth on all four legs. Faster than anything she had ever seen. Her partner would not be helping her. The Code would be rendered broken. She ducked as it leaped into the air, as she growled loudly and extended her other set of blades straight up. The Serpent twitched, spit, hissed, but it died down. It was slain. She dropped it quickly to the ground, blades again melting away slowly. A rush of wind and a sound behind her confirmed. Her partner had seen it all. Her elders would see it all. She would finally become a young blood. One of the best, she hoped.
How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)?
My main goal is to facilitate better RP between myself, Marines, and xenos, instead of being the faceless headhunter that offers not much more than a roar. Perhaps some banter between I and the human prey, granted it's now easier for predators to speak to other people. This will also come with some 'fear-making' RP is how I'll call it, tapping on windows with my wristblades, playing back to Marines the last words of their comrades the type of shit we saw in the movies. Overall I'll try my best to be an unbiased accountable party, not exclusively going after or helping any one single team unless I owe it to them as a favor.
Why should we whitelist you?
I'd think I'm a pretty cool guy, and I've been a fan of the AvP mythos for some time. (Plus I've been on the server since pre-alpha). I've never really had any confrontations with the staff team, and I'm a pretty good marine and xeno player all around.
Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?
Absolutely not.
Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?
I'm not banned from any other servers.
Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?
I understand and I wholeheartedly accept your conditions and terms.
- Logi99
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Re: Ikthya-de Luar-ke (Young Blood)
This was wasn't as bad. ENjoyed the first part of the story. Reminds me of the star wars force awakens trailer. Anyways I'm gonna give this +1
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Marine vs Predator Duels:
Predator Wins: 0
Predator Ties: 1 [Pred bleeded to death and decap'd me at the last sec. Had no AP ]
Predator Lost: 0
Marine vs Predator Duels:
Predator Wins: 0
Predator Ties: 1 [Pred bleeded to death and decap'd me at the last sec. Had no AP ]
Predator Lost: 0
- Feweh
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Re: Ikthya-de Luar-ke (Young Blood)
I'm Neutral on this, you're a known player and don't overly cause any issues.... I'll get back to this later.
- Feweh
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Re: Ikthya-de Luar-ke (Young Blood)
Need more feedback on this from the predator community.
- forwardslashN
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Re: Ikthya-de Luar-ke (Young Blood)
+1
I don't see any problems with your app, and it shows a pretty decent knowledge of the role. You're a pretty long time community member too, so no problems there either.
I don't see any problems with your app, and it shows a pretty decent knowledge of the role. You're a pretty long time community member too, so no problems there either.
The ambivalent giant white baldie in a jungle near you.
- Tristan63
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Re: Ikthya-de Luar-ke (Young Blood)
+1
I feel with your story alone you would make a great addition to the Pred family. I found your story was pretty great (Almost better than mine).
I feel with your story alone you would make a great addition to the Pred family. I found your story was pretty great (Almost better than mine).
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- ShortTemperedLeprechaun
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Re: Ikthya-de Luar-ke (Young Blood)
+1. Good story, good player, good premise for a character.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9dA6plQFKzY Scotty Hardy: Resident loud mouth, smart assed Irishman. Gahn'tha-cte Bhu'ja: Honorable duelist, beserker charger, jungle hunter.
- Boltersam
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Re: Ikthya-de Luar-ke (Young Blood)
+1. The story, to be honest, is excellent, and accurately portrays why Predators see Xenos as the worthiest prey.
- oprayx73
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Re: Ikthya-de Luar-ke (Young Blood)
+1 Vera Crux is a nice player, and this pred app convinces me personally.
Cut them xenos up with yer machete!
Muhrene Name : Boris Bourbon
Synthetic Name : Abraham
Predator Name : Cuthun Dak'te
Muhrene Name : Boris Bourbon
Synthetic Name : Abraham
Predator Name : Cuthun Dak'te
- Gentlemanly_headcrab
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Re: Ikthya-de Luar-ke (Young Blood)
+1 Played with this person on both alien, and marine, very respectful, very nice, a fun person to duel with (most of the time when RNG doesn't knock my mask right off.) when playing some pred. Even will stop and allow us two to exchange some proper RP and dialogue before the fight begins. All around, I'd think they'd be a good addition.
Best russian cheeki/breeki
Sexy squad.
- Feweh
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Re: Ikthya-de Luar-ke (Young Blood)
+1
Stickied for Final Review.
Stickied for Final Review.
- TR-BlackDragon
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Re: Ikthya-de Luar-ke (Young Blood)
Ill go ahead and give my +1.
- Rahlzel
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Re: Ikthya-de Luar-ke (Young Blood)
Good stuff. Nice little action story, and I like that you seem interested in RP more than carnage.
+1
+1
- Rahlzel
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Re: Ikthya-de Luar-ke (Young Blood)
Processed. Welcome to The Hunt!