Halkrath - Ju'dha (Shadow Water)

[Mook476]

Byond ID: Mook476

Marine Name (so we know who you are, if you play alien mostly, state that here): Bryant Harding

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name) Halkrath - Ju'dha (Shadow Water)

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?: Yes I am and I will follow it devoutly

Character background (A very BRIEF description of your predators background): Halkrath - Ju'dha (Shadow Water) Was born in a unknown village unblooded and without a clan however his father was well known for his use of throwing weapons and his honorable but simple way of hunting. Halkrath - Ju'dha wasn't born to a special family but rather he was deemed average often under thought of due to his particular love of "Harpoons" and Spears specifically using them as throwing weapons Halkrath - Ju'dha also liked using the Combi-Stick which some predators did not like as most Predators he knew preferred close ranged combat and as did he except he found a certain fascination with these weapons.

Halkrath - Ju'dha on their first "mission" or as some call it "Trials" was sent to a wet jungled area as he landed with two other unblooded he quickly went for the entrance. excited to finally become blooded. He waited for his fellow unblooded to catch up and when they finally did he opened up the temple and entered they split up immediately searching for their prey the honorable serpents. Halkrath - Ju'dha walked subtly opening up his senses to hear any prey. Halkrath - Ju'dha could hear when they breathed heavily.. when they would drool they were not the stealthiest of creatures yet, however he still couldn't find them... When finally he heard them coming he could feel them waiting to pounce on him he stopped and sharpened his senses specifically hearing listening to the environment to tell if it was one or more Serpents however his senses needed training and experience so he quickly grabbed another one of his spears and waited, listening. He could hear
the Serpent noisily crawling slowly towards him he made his mind up marking a spot he threw his spear... it skid along the wall and it fell hitting nothing but his imagination, and when the Serpent pounced on him in the blink of an eye he activated his wrist blades and stabbed into the Serpent the acid blood pelting his wrists and chest armor as the Serpent loomed over him he observed the Serpent closer it seemed to be of the "Hunter Caste" and as he observed he snapped backed into reality realizing it clawed at him scratching up his chest and mask while drooling over him. Halkrath - Ju'dha used all his strength to throw the Serpent off it got up and lashed at Halkrath - Ju'dha using it's tail to slice his right arm open and it crawled back into the darkness Halkrath - Ju'dha barely able to see it due to his unblooded gear however before he could throw a spear the Serpent pounced at Halkrath except this time he was prepared and he tumbled with the Serpent wrestling with it at first the struggle seemed like a stalemate but Halkrath Ju'dha punched it constantly in the spot it was originally stabbed and as he punched he activated his wrist blades stabbing into the spot constantly causing it to ooze acid blood all over the place the pain caused the serpent to screech the serpents blood pelted on his chest burning for a short time but it didn't stop Halkrath - Ju'dha.. finally as the serpent loomed over him seeming as if it would never die or give up he used all his power and stabbed into the serpents jaw again and again until the serpents jaw looked dislocated and it finally fell with it's pressurized blood spewing everywhere but Halkrath didn't care he only kept stabbing at it untill it no longer moved then he took off his burning armor looking over his body his blood cancelled out the acid, and with the Serpent finally dead he took the Serpents skull ripping it off from the body and than he ripped out the tongue, and with the tongue in hand he slowly took off his mask and gave himself the mark of a Blooded Predator.. Halkrath Ju'dha was the only one surviving that day.. and he walked out with his head high knowing that he had completed his task and proven the other predators wrong. Halkrath - Ju'dha walked back to the elites showing his trophy and his blooded mark and they finally accepted him... his name? it was Shadow Water also known as Halkrath - Ju'dha in the Yautja Tongue for his attacks were as smooth as oceans and rough as waves crashing down on rocks often he would tread in the shadows alone... stalking his prey...

During his other hunts in which his name Halkrath - Ju'dha (Shadow Water) came into true realization he went up against a rather large band of mercenaries maybe numbering fifty or so he slowly picked each of them off with his spears throwing them at range and at close distances to keep the kill stealthy and quick... he would constantly stalk the mercenaries learning their "routines" watching them as they ate.. learning of their patterns learning of when they would go to the restroom alone or when they would go to sleep as they seemed to do it at certain times. Halkrath - Ju'dha would sneak up to the mercenary camp into the "leaders" tent and throw a spear through the tent piercing the heart of the mercenary leader it opened up a hole in the tent which he ripped open and dragged the mercenary leader out silently looking out for the merc lookouts who were up guarding the camp at night he would drag the Leader back to the woods and skin him ripping his spine and skull out keeping it as a trophy shining it as his first worthy "Ooman" trophy after that he skirmished around the camp throwing spears and harpoons as he did not want to use more advanced weapons against such opponents eventually after days passed it drove the mercenaries mad and they shot constantly in the woods and eventually betrayed eachother.. he found they were no longer good game and left them to be. This hunt may not have been the most exciting or dangerous hunt, but it was his first time he got a taste of the Oomans... United, Intelligent, But susceptible to fear and other things alike he agreed with the other predators in that Oomans were not as worthy prey as Serpents.

How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)?: I intend to not go for the losing side ooc wise as it's not fair to always beat up marines or xenos, and I intend to stalk alot and scout out my prey deeming if they're worthy for a duel or deeming if they're actually prey before fighting them as well as trying to single them out as my character does not like being crowded, and does not like lots of things ganging up on him be it people insects etc. I also want to enforce lots of roleplay on myself and anyone else I come across as I love roleplay and it really improves the atmosphere and general round for me and the player and anyone involved

Why should we whitelist you?: Not to toot my own horn but I'm a great roleplayer and I'm fairly robust depending on the situation I believe I can fill the role of a predator, and follow the code of honor, and I can improve the roleplay experience not only for my self but for other players and for other predators alike.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?: Not in the past month no but I have been in the past and I believe it was a admin or a mod by the name of jay something and it was handled you can check my past histories it was a misunderstanding and he got the wrong Ckey

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?: Nope

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?: Mhm and I prefer it like this.

[Boltersam]

I'll be honest.

I stopped reading about a third of the way through the story, because the grammar is frankly horrible. You should have had it spellchecked, and when I read further, the story itself would be entertaining the imagination to call mediocre. It's dull, killed around twenty or so puppies through misuse of apostrophes, and killed many more kittens by having zero punctuation other than full stops, which were largely misused.

Secondly, your account does NOT fit the one month age requirement, you only joined recently and have a very low post count.

How you intend to play your Predator is simple, short, and unimaginative, and still managing to misuse grammar.

And when I reread the app, though I skipped the story section, you intend to make full use of mostly ranged weapons, with very little melee. This is dishonourable.

As well as, did you get permission to use the Halkrath name from the original owner?

-1.

[Scrat505]

I've seen you ingame and know you as a more or less competent player.

However, as mentioned above, the backstory was very difficult to read due to run-on sentences and gigantic world-walls that make it unappealing to pick up. With regards to the other fields, I personally don't have a problem with using thrown weapons because, well, you still need to engage in melee to retrieve them if you didn't scare off the target, but also as noted the listed playstyle besides weapon use sounds quite bland.

Going to have to go with -1.

[Feweh]

Denied