R'ka Thei-de (Xenomorph Death)

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R'ka Thei-de (Xenomorph Death)

Post by pedrokullukian » 02 Jan 2017, 22:13

Byond ID: Kullukian

Marine Name (so we know who you are, if you play alien mostly, state that here): Hank Robertson

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name): R'ka Thei-de

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor? Yes, I am

Character background (A very BRIEF description of your predators background):

R'ka Thei-de lived a calm and simple life like any other yautja. He was strong and fearless, felt more pleasure from hunting then anything else. His family respected him and believed he would be the equivalent of Cetanu (The Black Hunter).

R'ka Thei-de went to LV-624 with a small group of yautjas after receiving a distress beacon from his parents. By the time he landed, he found his father's corpse surrounded by dead xenomorphs. He payd his respects and activated the bracelet.

After arriving at the ship he noticed his group did not arrived and were not awnsering his call.

Now, R'ka Thei-de is in a mission with two objectives: find his companions and kill every last one of the xenos, the hunt got personal.

How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)?

I'll respect the code of honor. I will not hunt humans unless they show skill in the battlefield. I rather not kill any soldiers who lose in the battle if they prove to be as skillfull as an yautja, after all my objective is to purge the aliens. The queen is my trophy, her servants are my obstacles. I'll try to cooperate with other yautjas and promising humans after weakening the hive. I am a nice sniper, so long range will be constant unless it violates the code of honor. If i see any cowards running and hidding from his fellow marines i will stalk and behead'em, unless they are fleeing due to injuries.

Why should we whitelist you?

I see the aliens as an overpowered faction, they are stronger then marines, faster then marines and their number won't stop going up. I know thats how it works in the movies, but it's frustrating.

I'll make things even and will let'er know that there's a predator after her. I'll make her have fear just like the marines fear her.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)? Yes, the round was over and the marines won so i tought "why not bash my friend's head with a crowbar?", we we're talking using whatsapp call, first and last time i ever commit FF.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why? No, mostly because i don't play in others servers.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor? Yes, I understand

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Re: R'ka Thei-de (Xenomorph Death)

Post by Renomaki » 02 Jan 2017, 23:04

I'm not a predator, but even I now that what you submitted is never going to get accepted.

You clearly only want to be predator due to marine bias, failing to understand that xenos are not as powerful as a predator... With heavy plasma weapons.

The Predator role is a role of challenge, of self control, and of honor. You hunt only so much in a single round, and you avoid killing off entire hives/platoons unless directly ordered to by an elder. Let alone the fact that ranged weapons are mainly used in lodge defenses more than anything due to just how deadly they can be to either marine or xeno. When hunting, you are expected to kill your target in melee, since prey is only good if it can fight back.

I could go on and on about this, but you clearly need to study the honor code and predator rules more.
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Re: R'ka Thei-de (Xenomorph Death)

Post by pedrokullukian » 02 Jan 2017, 23:42

I Tried to do this shit 4 Fucking times, had to start all over again, I got pissed and made the first thing that came to mind, rage about this Fucking game I love so much....NOW 3 FUCKING MONTHS OF WAITING

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Re: R'ka Thei-de (Xenomorph Death)

Post by Sailor Dave » 03 Jan 2017, 00:05

I'm not sure you have the right attitude to be a predator. Roleplay and creating an interesting experience for others should be your primary reason for being a pred, but it seems like you're only interested in killing xenos for the most part. Self control is definitely an important aspect.

If you're getting upset just making the application, I'm worried that you might slip up were you to actually play as one. Being a predator requires a lot of consideration for your actions, so that you don't ruin rounds for others unnecessarily, or even worse, break the honor code.

Your post could have used a lot of spellchecking, too.

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Re: R'ka Thei-de (Xenomorph Death)

Post by pedrokullukian » 03 Jan 2017, 00:12

Try doing all that after the fourth time you write this application, 4 different stories, 6 names, no coffee, 2am here in Brazil.....I'll just accept it and try again later...like...3 months from now later...thanks for the advice tough

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Re: R'ka Thei-de (Xenomorph Death)

Post by Sailor Dave » 03 Jan 2017, 00:23

Most accepted predators put a lot of consideration into their apps, probably several days or even weeks of thought put into it. If you don't manage this one and are interested in trying again next time, you should ask other accepted preds for advice on your app. Most people are on the discord, you would get a lot of help there. Or even just PMing a few here on the forums, I'm sure they'd be happy to help you work on it.

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Re: R'ka Thei-de (Xenomorph Death)

Post by Shyguychizzy » 03 Jan 2017, 00:58

After going through this app, personally I don't see this actually to be taken seriously yes you have taken this or worked very hard but not to app standards check those accepted and those denied. Anyhow, here are my key issues with this.
pedrokullukian wrote:
How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)?

I'll respect the code of honor. I will not hunt humans unless they show skill in the battlefield. I rather not kill any soldiers who lose in the battle if they prove to be as skillfull as an yautja, after all my objective is to purge the aliens. The queen is my trophy, her servants are my obstacles. I'll try to cooperate with other yautjas and promising humans after weakening the hive. I am a nice sniper, so long range will be constant unless it violates the code of honor. If i see any cowards running and hidding from his fellow marines i will stalk and behead'em, unless they are fleeing due to injuries.
As some stated you are marine biased which I see...I don't think you get it. Predators are head hunters...they hunt anything as well they take trophies despite the type of species except other predators though rare occurrence. It seems your the murderboning sort just simply want this role to freely murder no RP by the sounds just I wanna hunt and kill things plz. As well, you wanna purpsely fire at marines until it breaks rules that seem rather dickish and just fuckery. Another note, we predators are not I repeat not a balancing factor at all...its up to our judgement and our personal actions. I am quite displeased with such how you intend to play and highly against this method as it breaks the code and may lead to many reports.
pedrokullukian wrote: Why should we whitelist you?

I see the aliens as an overpowered faction, they are stronger then marines, faster then marines and their number won't stop going up. I know thats how it works in the movies, but it's frustrating.

I'll make things even and will let'er know that there's a predator after her. I'll make her have fear just like the marines fear her.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)? Yes, the round was over and the marines won so i tought "why not bash my friend's head with a crowbar?", we we're talking using whatsapp call, first and last time i ever commit FF.
You giving out Meta knowledge would be you go to yes to strike fear but really? The reason to be whitelisted just I took for a joke honestly, not generic but not even considering or serious answer. You decided to End Round Grief thinking its some other SS13 server and Meta comms communitcating with somebody out of game regarding in game which is against rules. It seems some of your decisions as well I am not liking going with a heavy -1
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Re: R'ka Thei-de (Xenomorph Death)

Post by Boltersam » 03 Jan 2017, 01:32

Look at accepted applications. Now look at your application. Now back at accepted applications again. Is your application up to standard?

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Re: R'ka Thei-de (Xenomorph Death)

Post by LordeKilly » 03 Jan 2017, 06:18

Admits to EROG and metacomms, also writes marine biased pred.

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Re: R'ka Thei-de (Xenomorph Death)

Post by coroneljones » 03 Jan 2017, 06:26

Going -1 for the reasons stated before
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Re: R'ka Thei-de (Xenomorph Death)

Post by Feweh » 03 Jan 2017, 11:07

This was bad.

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