My First Predator Application

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Darkplasmaray
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My First Predator Application

Post by Darkplasmaray » 09 Jan 2017, 10:54

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Marine Name (so we know who you are, if you play alien mostly, state that here): Matthew Stevens

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name):yeyin ui'stbi-Brave Abomination

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor? Yes

Character background (A very BRIEF description of your predators background): Blooded predator his father was bad blooded, thus looks to restore his honour. When he was being initiated the other two young blooded predators he was with died, and he killed a xenomorph alone, running out with its head.

How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)? I will be invisible, watching possible prey, deciding whether they are worthy or not. If they are then I will either approach them visible and invite them to an honour duel, explaining the rules of the duel, offering them weapons to fight with, etc. I will try to get into honour duels, if I can not do so, I will hunt them. I may try to take on the queen to claim her head as a trophy as well as xenomorphs in general.

Why should we whitelist you? Because you would have a higher percentage chance of having a round with predator(s), making the round more interesting.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)? Nope

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why? Nope

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor? Yes

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Re: My First Predator Application

Post by Boltersam » 09 Jan 2017, 11:16

7 posts, two lines backround, intends to severely cripple the xenomorph side by killing their leader whenever possible, generic application through and through when removing the rather terrible parts.

Side note: Your Predator is called "Brave Abomination." An abomination. That is his name. His parents named him an abomination.

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Re: My First Predator Application

Post by Skane10634 » 09 Jan 2017, 11:19

Bolter said it, not much more to say, -1

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Re: My First Predator Application

Post by Shyguychizzy » 09 Jan 2017, 12:57

After reviewing your app...which usually tends to take time however with this app...it was very short one. Very generic and bland...as well reading this app was a breeze and short one to be exact. As well no idea who you are in which I am unsure will this be a good role in which I can trust you can maintain it? Never seen you ever if you were lets say mostly a xeno player I can understand but never seen your marine ever and frequently played daily. As well... what you said it seems your more xeno biased...in which you wish to cripple xenos before hand...generally that sorta is a dick move, we never always kill the queen certain instances we may hunt the queen at times but just like that bam kill the queen. Going with a heavy -1.
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Re: My First Predator Application

Post by NescauComToddy » 09 Jan 2017, 13:00

Grammar Is a big Problem Here,like your lack Of forum activity.Background Is just 2 lines...Focusing On the queen could Damage and Possibly Doom the Xenos.Your Intend to Play Is TOTALLY Generic.Please,Compare your App with the Whitelisted ones.

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Re: My First Predator Application

Post by forwardslashN » 09 Jan 2017, 13:15

Boltersam wrote:7 posts, two lines backround, intends to severely cripple the xenomorph side by killing their leader whenever possible, generic application through and through when removing the rather terrible parts.

Side note: Your Predator is called "Brave Abomination." An abomination. That is his name. His parents named him an abomination.
For these reasons, I'll have to go with a -1. You may want to read up on the lore and what some of the other applications are like, specifically the accepted ones.
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Re: My First Predator Application

Post by Feweh » 09 Jan 2017, 13:51

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