Thekii ravelrper{savage one}

[Thatnewguy01]

Byond ID:Thatnewguy1

Marine Name (so we know who you are, if you play alien mostly, state that here):Ivan 'heart' soklov

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name):Thekii ravlerper-savage one.

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?yep, wounded hardly make for good trophies, i will chase the wounded and medics away from my traps as to not have them activate them.

Character background (A very BRIEF description of your predators background):He was born smaller then most of the other predators, his father was ashamed of him and when he was barely growing he was ordered to be executed. through an fortunate turn of events involving a bridge that was not built properly the young predator escaped his fate. his executioners believed he had died from the accident and left, not knowing that the young-ling survived by landing on many leaves on the way down. The young predator was very weak but refused to die. he barley got by at first living off the remains of dead animals and bugs. but as the years went on he became smarter and began to see patterns in the predatory animals of the jungle. over time he changed from a scavenger to top of the food chain when he reached adult hood. he crafted his own weapons out of animal bone, and devised floor traps as he had seen spiders use to trap his prey. he even became friends with a animal that looked alot like a saber-cat. the two of them together dominated the jungle and its prey. one day during a routine hunt he noticed his pet wasn't there to meet him at morning so he went searching for the lost animal and spotted 2 other predators standing above a bloody pulp of what used to be the saber cat. overcome with rage he readied his spear and threw it with pinpoint accuracy and hit one of the predators in the shoulder, the wounded one fell, unable to move and the other cloaked him self and dispersed. Thekii approached the wounded predator and readied his knife for the killing blow and-WHACKhe was pinned to the tree by a net of another predator nearby. it took a whole group of adjudicators to transport the rowdy predator to the chief for judgment. The chief had other plans, he asked the predator who he was but received only a incoherent jabber from Thekii{he never learned to speak} as the chief planed on what to do with him a the wounded predator's partner came in with a 7 full pouches of animal bones. the chief was impressed how the upstart was able to do what he had done without any formal training. the chief ordered that Thekii be educated and under go an initiation which Thekii passed with out any problems, he was later set loose to hunt for bigger game and to bring honor to his new tribe. his true identity was never revealed to the chief or the clan but now Thekii had defied the odds and now walks the path of a true huntsman.

How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)?his main source of food was not from his spear, rather from his crafty traps. he will use traps to start the fight and finish off his prey with a trusty spear in toe. he also misses his pet spear cat greatly and might occanisly pick a strong xeno or human to make his new pet, this is of course if the xeno/human doesnt just shoot him. so basicly just a traper who will relocate every once in a while where the game seems more prominet

Why should we whitelist you?i have been playing ss13 for around 8 months and 7 months for cm, i hope to be able to 'attempt' communcation with the marnies and xenos particualry the honorable ones{if i see one crusher decemate a squad he gets a trophy or if a marnine takes down a t-3 or even a t-4 alone spec weapons dont apply they will get a reward} perhaps giveing a honarable xeno a captured human or protecting a honorable human from a horde of hunters. i think if im added to the round i would keep the flow of battle going because my traps would be off the beaten path and keep the marnies and xenos in a head on head conflict which i would prosper from. the heart nickname came from me showing heart and pulling a hacksaw ridge running and grabing wounded from xeno territorty, got 5 bodies before a crusher rocked me. ive never seen a predator take on an apprentice before on this server and i wonder myself how it will go down. all in all i hope that i would be able to keep the round from reaching a stand still. like if the lz is getting ravaged by a xeno horde i would rush in to help the marnies so they could heal wounded and bring me more game to hunt, or to protect the honored xenos if the marnies start rushing the caves by placeing mines all around the caves to slow them to a halt

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?nope

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?nope

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?yes

[NescauComToddy]

Ivan,You should be more active In the Forums Before doing A App.Also,I Don't think that If your Predator almost Killed another Predator would be...Accepted By the Honor code.This could mean That you Didn't "Got" the Ideia of The limits Of this role.About the way You would play Is..+ Or -.Also,I think Your name Was pretty Random.Just because You robusted a Rav It doesn't Means you could be Accepted.A Predator Isn't about robustness,It Is About RPing to make The other players Experiences fun.I would give a 1- For now.

[Thatnewguy01]

question,am i allowed to change it or is my application set in stone?

[NescauComToddy]

question,am i allowed to change it or is my application set in stone?

Yes...You still can Change It.

[Thatnewguy01]

all the improvements to the back story i was makeing, my time has run out!

[Shyguychizzy]

From my understanding, you were a bad blood based off your previous history or your background. In which isn't not the sort you want to start with. It also kills me seeing this Grammer though some Grammer issues are fine but it's just too much for me. I won't specify on those Grammer issues however it is highly noticeable. Other things I have notice I reckon you gotta at least brush on a little bit of predator Lore it seems rather randomness as well just looking at how you intend to play I can't take seriously or think it is serious in general. From how you intend to play it seems you are more marine biased and acting as a balancing factor. To be clear we Predators aren't a balancing factor what so ever...we hunt which ever side we see fit. If one side loses we don't just go help them and you intended on fighting for the marines I find that it bring dishonorable to a certain point yes but the sort you are aiming for isn't exactly it. Sorry but I reckon perhaps next time after the 3 months to reapply I did like or in a way get what you tried saying In your story. However gonna have to go with a -1.

[Thatnewguy01]

I believe I know what I have done wrong in this appeal, but just before I got off I followed a predator via ghost and I'm sure I want to be able to interact the way he does with people,I'm still gonna keep the pet idea. Until my next appeal, you can move this to denied feweh

[Feweh]

Denied

Applicationl isnt very good.