dhi'rauta-halkrath (Cunning Shadow)

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dhi'rauta-halkrath (Cunning Shadow)

Post by mizolo » 27 Feb 2017, 03:49

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Marine Name (so we know who you are, if you play alien mostly, state that here): Anekcahap Volkov (it's russian)

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name): dhi'rauta-halkrath (cunning shadow)

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor? Yes, yes I am, I have been deliberately watching predators IG for ways that they follow, and sometimes don't follow, the code of honor.

Character background (A very BRIEF description of your predators background): He just didn't see the reason. Even as a kid, why his people were obsessed with hunting. He enjoyed it, but didn't thrall in it like they did, and he liked watching, observing, learning they ways of humans and the creatures alike. Since his first hunt being a considered "failure" because he caught MUCH less than the others, he was considered not worthy enough for a plasma caster, but he didn't even WANT a plasma caster, he considered himself careful enough to not even need one, but never boasted about it. He never even got close to being killed like his other friends, as they came back with scars on their armor and some not even returning at all. He continued to study prey movements, why the did what they did, it entertained him, and he liked to take apart human weapons, as he considered them more dangerous than the other creatures, unlike the rest of his clan. He grew up having mixed feelings all the time, about whether he should be proud of himself for not even getting close to being killed, or be despaired by the risks the rest of his kin took that he didn't. He even played games with the humans' minds and started noticing that they were attracted to the sounds that he made or when he showed himself, but they weren't afraid, and they started chasing after him, like any honorable prey should, but he noticed that others stood back, like they were there for a reason and that the others seemed expendable, which made the ones who followed him not seem worthy of prey. When he realized that these were the most important targets, he started luring the humans away from the other more important ones, circled around, and hunted the more important ones, as they felt secure, and he noticed that they feared more from surprise of being in security and getting threatened suddenly, than what the other predators did, which was making what they considered "scary sounds". He grew up to be more intelligent, and more rejected by his kin. He liked his friends, his family, his kind, but they seemed to not like him. He just couldn't understand why. Were they disapproving of his hunting ways? Were they disapproving of his NON enthrallment to the hunt? He didn't know, but wanted to find out, and soon.

How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)? I intend to strike when they least expect it, with no warning and kind of scare the shit out of the humans when they least expect it.

Why should we whitelist you? Personally, you have no reason to, you've probably never heard of me. But I personally think I would be a cool predator.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)? I HAVE, I have been reprimanded for EORG, when i didn't know about it (it's not an excuse I know) and i've been apprehended for other things like self-antaging as a CL

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why? NO I am not currently, but i AM job banned from AI on yogstation for severely fucking up because someone fucked up a law and i screwed up the interpretation of it, THIS WILL NOT HAPPEN IN CM AS PREDATOR.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor? Yes, I do understand that very clearly
Anekcahap Volkov
never abandons a patient as a medic, even when a ravager is on him 1 v 1
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Re: dhi'rauta-halkrath (Cunning Shadow)

Post by Boltersam » 27 Feb 2017, 11:37

Fourteen posts, subpar story, minor grammar problems. -1.

PS: Work harder and do some research into english grammar, I understand english may not be your first language, but that just means you need to work harder than everyone else.

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Re: dhi'rauta-halkrath (Cunning Shadow)

Post by mizolo » 27 Feb 2017, 12:21

Boltersam wrote:Fourteen posts, subpar story, minor grammar problems. -1.

PS: Work harder and do some research into english grammar, I understand english may not be your first language, but that just means you need to work harder than everyone else.
I am mentally challenged with aspergers forgive me if I have sub-par grammar and things like that. But I DO wish to go by the rules strictly, it's ok that you -1'ed i understand
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Re: dhi'rauta-halkrath (Cunning Shadow)

Post by NescauComToddy » 27 Feb 2017, 12:54

Hey there!

I Am just coming Back to CM so, I won't judge your Activity In-game, either your Grammar.

The Background could receive some improvements, It Is pretty simple If you compare It to the approved ones! You can check out the others and take you own result.

The way you would play Is a bit unnecessary, every Predator/Yautja can Interact with the Marines In such way, unless It Interferes With the Code-of-Honor, so that could be changed too!

About this one, we need to know Who you are! You might have the potential to be a Cool Pred, yet, we Need to make sure you Know what you will be doing, and, the only way to make sure Is knowing you at least Ockly, In the Forums!

If you can Improve your activity here, It will be great already. Just Try to do some replies, posts and etc here, It will compensate some of the Mistakes you did and, If you don't manage to be whitelisted this time, In the Next you will have much More chance! I will Be learning to -1.

You should check out the Approved apps, you will see what you missed here!

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Re: dhi'rauta-halkrath (Cunning Shadow)

Post by Feweh » 27 Feb 2017, 16:49

This doesnt meet our standards.

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