yeyin thwei (brave blood) 2nd app

[BobaFett07]

Byond ID:

BobaFett12.

Marine Name (so we know who you are, if you play alien mostly, state that here):

Klaus Brandao/Ezekiel Bell, but I will mostly be playing as alien.

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name):

Yeyin Thwei.

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?

Yes, I just read it a 2nd time today and I'm very aware of the consequences of betraying the code of honor.

Character background (A very BRIEF description of your predators background):

Yeyin thwei was a scared youngblood, although not showing it, he was frightened of his first battle, but he was ready for it, it was a subtle fear, a simple feeling and thought of what could go wrong, he ignored it and continued going to the planet where he would hunt his first serpents, a group of hunters. A hunter for him was not a big opponent but one that could kill you if you weren't cautious, Yeyin was right a hunter could be dangerous for a youngblood, but if he wanted to be a real hunter someday he needed to kill the serpents.
When he arrived in the planet his father sent him out of the ship and to the jungle, he knew the elders were watching every movement he made, he wanted to be sure that he would show honor, and not even a bit of the fear he felt on the ship, the fear just increased he had heard the serpent's hiss, but could not see it, when the first serpent revealed itself he was ready, in a fast and vicious strike the serpent jumped on him he threw it onto a tree ready to give it the final blow, the serpent attacked him with it's tail, the youngblood used it's wristblades to cut the serpent tails off, with a delicate and well positioned strike the serpent fell on the ground bleeding, the youngblood cut it's head off and kept it's skull as a trophy. With joy and pride the youngblood was holding his first serpent skull all the fear that he had felt before the fight was over he was finally a real hunter.
Now with the trophy the young hunter went deeper into the forest and found a group of 3 hunters and a runner. The runner charges his position and pounces on him and he attacks the serpent with delicacy and strength, the runner falls on the ground as it becomes a new trophy for the young hunter he kills the runner but a hunter grabs the young hunter and shows it's inner mouth, the young hunter uses his wristblades on the hunter's inner mouth the hunter falls on the ground whimpering while it's sisters retreat after seeing what the young hunter is capable of.
After that the hunter's challenge is done he gets back to the ship and is awarded by the elders with a plasma caster, he now knows that he is ready to hunt for the rest of his life, although not a fully skilled hunter he is good enough to be a real hunter. He knew that when his father said to him "you are now blooded. Be prepared for the hunts that will come."

How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)?

A stealth and honorable hunter, one that does not fear even the greatest of enemies, but knows when to engage and who to engage.
A hunter who will fight even the fastest of runners, the most robust marines and will not flinch at any moment, but will also use the plasma caster at times to remove groups and disperse my prey, as a 1v1 fight is essential, but when fighting a group he will not fear fighting 3 or 4 aliens or even marines if needed, and never breaking the code of honor, I want to show my prey what I'm capable of, I want the xenos to know that I'm not playing games with them and same goes to the marines.

Why should we whitelist you?

I have been playing CM for a long time, and I have learned how to be a good roleplaying player, although I am always learning more and discovering, and learning better ways to act, I will never ignore a warning I have done things that broke the rules but they were because I didn't know any better, and I think I'm finally ready to be a predator.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?

no, I have not.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?

no, I don't usually play in many other servers.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?

Yes, I'm fully aware of what might happen if I let myself go in a bloody, and dishonorable hunt.

[BobaFett07]

I'm sorry for any grammatical errors, I'm not a native speakers so I ask you to not judge this too heavily.

[shyshadow]

Okay, this application, had effort put in, but umm, aren't like all Yautja suppose to be fierce? I mean, If I'm not mistaken, (Brave Blood) was a name previously used, which is fine, but there's a point I'm trying to make, I have never seen you in game, the backstory, really isn't a "Back-Story" it's more or less just describing a fight scene, which really doesn't give me any reason to believe you genuinely care for this role. I also read how you mostly play alien, which kinda is a bit of a ehhh, in my book, I mean, if you play both regularly that's fine. Though considering I've never seen you as a marine, and I don't feel as the backstory is up to standards, I feel you aren't qualified for this role. My most sincere apologies, but -1.

[Casany]

I have to agree with shy here, he pointed out most of the flaws in my eyes.

I do think the grammar is an issue, as a predator is a roleplay heavy role which requires one to have a good grip on the English language

-1

[forwardslashN]

You are not very active from what I've seen, and your predator backstory doesn't really describe your character. Your method of play is okay, but I can't really say this is outstanding. So, -1

[CrimsonAerospace]

Cookie-Cutter Predator application in my eyes. I agree with Shy's statement on effort, I see some effort in this, but I just don't think this is up to standards when compared to what's accepted, and what's been denied. Your predators seems, no offence, bland.

If this is denied, I'd spend some time as Marine, get your names known a little better. Also, go read the accepted Pred Applications, they really do good on giving you an idea of what you may want to do, and show you how to write an amazing one.

Neutral, leaning -1.

[northcote4]

I'll preface this by saying that there is another, accepted predator with the name Yeyin'Thwei.

Specifically, Dto’Yeyin’Thwei (Forest Brave Blood) by Jay Burns. If this were to be accepted I think the naming should bear some consideration.

As for the app itself, I find it to be fairly well average in all respects. The story isn't bad, and though normally the spelling and grammar would irritate me you specified that English wasn't your first language, so I'm happy to let it slide.

For now I'll have to sit at a firm neutral. I'll try and keep an eye out on your in-game exploits to get a better feel for you as a player.

[Feweh]

Denied, this isnt good