S'yuitde Thwei (Pathetic Blood)

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S'yuitde Thwei (Pathetic Blood)

Post by Caryl » 24 Mar 2017, 14:59

Byond ID: Caryl

Marine Name (so we know who you are, if you play alien mostly, state that here): Caryl 'Hail' Bernhaben

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name): S'yuitde Thwei

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor? Yes, I am.

Character background (A very BRIEF description of your predators background):

(I tried to compress it as much as I could, sorry if it became too short guys!)
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How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)? Due to a burning desire to prove himself worthy in a hunt, despite his frail image and stature, S'yuitde Thwei would observe, carefully analyzing each prey, and only pick the strongest and most worthy of them all, to be his prey. His burning desire is coupled with his passion for melee weapons, he shuns plasma casters, and hopes he never gets to use one.

Why should we whitelist you? I have played as a Predator before the whitelist was implemented. So far, I haven't recalled doing any dishonorable hunts and I have adhered to the Predator's Code of Honor.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)? No. Not that I know of.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why? No, I am not.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor? Yes, I understand completely.
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Re: S'yuitde Thwei (Pathetic Blood)

Post by XenonDragneel » 24 Mar 2017, 15:04

It sounds interesting, he was a fun and chill ex-admin, a very competent Squad Leader, good Commander, he can Roleplay very well during the firefight.

I'll give him a +1 though this app seem short... it still sounds interesting.
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Re: S'yuitde Thwei (Pathetic Blood)

Post by Boltersam » 24 Mar 2017, 15:07

Right.

The backstory is short and tells us jack shit about your character except that he's a runt.
The "How to play" is something that almost every Predator does, barring the shunning Plasma Casters.

You may have played a Predator before, but you certainly aren't suitable for one now.

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Re: S'yuitde Thwei (Pathetic Blood)

Post by Dolth » 24 Mar 2017, 15:08

One of the oldest CM member, excellent RP pretty much all the time. He desserve it heavily.

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Re: S'yuitde Thwei (Pathetic Blood)

Post by Caryl » 24 Mar 2017, 15:09

Boltersam wrote:Right.

The backstory is short and tells us jack shit about your character except that he's a runt.
The "How to play" is something that almost every Predator does, barring the shunning Plasma Casters.

You may have played a Predator before, but you certainly aren't suitable for one now.
Guess that means I should make my backstory longer and my How To Play part more immersive.

Still good for an edit, Bolter?
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Re: S'yuitde Thwei (Pathetic Blood)

Post by Boltersam » 24 Mar 2017, 15:10

Caryl wrote:Guess that means I should make my backstory longer and my How To Play part more immersive.

Still good for an edit, Bolter?

No. Your initial try at this app was incredibly poor and you only decided to put in effort once I pointed it out.
I'm going to stick with a -1.

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Re: S'yuitde Thwei (Pathetic Blood)

Post by Rain7x » 24 Mar 2017, 15:12

I'm of the same opinion of Bolter, and I'm not really a fan of you as from what I've experienced you have a pretty poor attitude. Your story is pretty much nothing and it doesn't look like you tried. -1
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Re: S'yuitde Thwei (Pathetic Blood)

Post by Scrat505 » 24 Mar 2017, 15:20

As Bolter said, you've been here a long fucking time and don't cause trouble but the effort (or at minimum, the necessary information) just isn't there.

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Re: S'yuitde Thwei (Pathetic Blood)

Post by Feweh » 24 Mar 2017, 15:27

This is awful, even with the extra edit thrown in.

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