Ka'Torag-na'Setg'in ( Lurking Danger ) 2.0

[Nightwolf901]

Byond ID: Nightwolf901

Marine Name (so we know who you are, if you play alien mostly, state that here): Nyxia 'Fifty' Cals, Tsara Kamilia

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name): Ka'Torag-na'Setg'in / Nyxia 'Fifty' Cals - Previously stated in my last post, I have talked with Biolock who was the person to do the Clan and got his permission to use the name.

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor? Yes, Very much so I've been reading it time and time again over the three months I was denied.

Character background (A very BRIEF description of your predators background):

Ka'Torag-na was a careful hunter. She leaned towards learning all of her prey and selecting a choice of which to hunt when she would hunt. Although never having killed a worthy prey herself she had spotted a few worthy prey that would bring her to a Blooded level in her clan. Ka’Torag-Na grew up with her father learning of his hunts and journeys. Listening to him as he told her stories. Taking a more nature of studying and learning everything over hunting. Learning her options and possibilities were her priority over hunting prey. Over her years of growing up her father had taught her his techniques of using the wrist scimitars, Harshly training her with the scimitars until she was lastly taught and handed his Clan Sword. Telling her ways to use it, with some examples being parrying and powerful overhead slashes. Later on in her age she was tasked with exploring and gathering information of a planet that had been infested by R’ka, while not knowing of the infestation she accepted the task with speed and she equipped herself. Being sent with two other Yautja to the planet they had started their interstellar travel towards the planet. Swiftly with decent Ka’Torag-na landed her ship amongst the plant’s surface. There was a clearing where she had chose that was surrounded by towering trees. Standing taller than what she had even seen. She had began to do her exploration of the planet, Learning of its nature and how it inhabited the fertile life on it. On her exploration she had spotted a figure on her visor that looked to be a serpent. Curious to gather more information on it she braced herself to go closer before noticing the R’ka. It was a worthy prey, It was bulky and heavy. Resembling nothing of a Young nature. She had an overwhelming feel rush over as she dashed towards it. This would be her chance to prove herself to the others in her clan. To become a blooded as well. Ka’Torag-na ejected her wrist scimatars from her bracelet and gripped them tightly as she approached the serpent. She roared in anticipation and was revered a roar back from the serpent. Cackling under her mask she went into battle with the serpent. Using a Hit and Dash strategy on the serpent, using various attacks along the lower half of the serpent to cause it to lose half of it’s mobility. Easily dodging the serpent’s repent and stagger. She continued her assault along the serpent with only a few scratches and bleeding wounds before finally causing the serpent to fall with a screech. A laughter followed as she mutilated and took her trophy to return to her Clan and show her hunt.


How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)?

Although this may have been thawed out by many others trying this, I plan to play Ka'Torag-na as a study hunter over a Hunting Hunter. I will mainly play with out my cloak using the darkness. It's in a way more training and a harder thought to play around with out using cloak to easier sneak up among others and play with them. If found the prey that she has or is studying more than a worthy target, She will take a step to engage in a hunt among the prey. Using Hit and Dash tactics to out wit her opponent. She depends on studying both sides and doesn't plan to use range or her Clan sword unless the time has called for it.

Why should we whitelist you?
I've been playing for almost a year now or so. I've shown my bad and I've shown my good. I take a great attitude towards role playing than I do with normal game play. I've been noted on my role playing as well. Over all I would love a heavy role play category that isn't CL. I prefer not to mess with CL due to well my character hating W-Y

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?
No, I have not been banned in any way. If something does come up it was due to a mistake with wrong names.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why? No, I do not believe I am banned from other servers, Rarely do i play on other servers but Urist Mcstation.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?
Yes, I understand this completely, due to anything can happen and will happen. No one is safe from breaking the rules.

[Katsukai]

Background story is solid, the way you intend to play it tho isn't anything new, maybe a tad more annoying to deal with. But on overall, pretty solid app, not much typos either or lore issues.

[Caryl]

is this... Nyxia Cals? I guess Pred-Cals is gonna happen. +1, No story from child-hood though, would have loved to read that.

[Nightwolf901]

is this... Nyxia Cals? I guess Pred-Cals is gonna happen. +1, No story from child-hood though, would have loved to read that.

I couldn't think of much of a story for her Childhood. Also doesn't help that I've been up for 24 hours but I wouldn't know how to word it. Also PredaCals has been made a post =p viewtopic.php?f=135&t=11323

[Katsukai]

I personally find childhood stories to be very iffy, since they are pretty unknown territory even in expanded media.

[Sarah_U.]

Well, I did review the background and playstyle methods and found them relatively bland, but 'okay'. I'm not gonna try to force myself as a grammar nazi, but a step up in the language could be something you'd consider. You use the same words quite a lot. Even sometimes repeating them twice or thrice in the same sentence.

Overall, it was proper, but I heard you have a good roleplay and that you wish to get better at what you do, so I won't mind much the backstory and playstyle. Anyway, they're not lore-breaking so there's no big issues there.
Personally, I'd have prefered you suffering hardships and captivating my attention as a reader, but you managed to make an average story...

As a whole, what I'm trying to say, is that the entire app looks just like that, average.
It's not a con, but I feel like you could've put some more into it. Perhaps I've grown harsh on my reviews and way of see'ing after going to school, but I'll pass you with a +1 due to your goodwill and I feel like you'll try to uphold my expectations if you pass.

Good luck with that, see you around.

[Kerek]

Nothing I can say that everyone else hasn't. I think I have seen you around a few times and have had positive interactions with you in the past.

+1

[forwardslashN]

-1 I've seen you in-game, and I wasn't very impressed by what I saw. I did see this though:

Nyxia 'Fifty' Cals/Nightwolf901 : You just got your daily dose of....CUCKSHOT!

Followed by an ahelp about you salting in LOOC about being nested. The background didn't really describe the character you want to play, so I don't think it's a good time to whitelist you.

[Nightwolf901]

-1 I've seen you in-game, and I wasn't very impressed by what I saw. I did see this though: Followed by an ahelp about you salting in LOOC about being nested. The background didn't really describe the character you want to play, so I don't think it's a good time to whitelist you.

The Cuckshot, is my Pump Macro, I perfer to have a bit of fun in my words when I'm in the Midst of battle and well, It is true about the salt in LOOC but that was because of a horrible day ontop of being guarded permanently and how marines were that game. No one wanted to do anything like always. I understand that being salty will weigh heavy on your -1, but I will attempt to upkeep on no Salt. I don't mean anything by this but reading Accepted pred app and reading a bit of lore doesn't really flood the mind how to perfectly describe my character, I've been told many times in the path I have a horrible writing style when it comes to a Main Topic. Thank you for commenting although waking up into the morning.

[Feweh]

Youre notoriously salty in deadchat and LOOC.

[Xurphorus]

@ Feweh, isn't everyone?

I think the story was good, and I know the player. I have good experiences with them as a Marine or playing as a predator. I'm all for them joining the ranks.

+1

[Feweh]

Denied, your actions in Deadchat/LOOC don't reflect what we want from high rp players.