Bhu'ja Awu'asa (Soul Armor)

[Youbar]

I like your story. It's relatively short, and it gets to the point quickly. Personally, the only thing I look for in a background story is to demonstrate an understanding of lore and show the personality of the predator. You've done that well enough. As for your playstyle, I've never been able to play as a predator, so I have no idea how well it'll go. I won't fault you for trying something new, even if the more experienced players claim it's suicidal. If you pull it off right, Bhu'ja Awu'asa might become quite a menacing presence to marines and Xenoes alike, simply because they'll understand that as soon as you close that short distance, they're going to end up dead.

+1 from me.

[Nick123q23]

Going to have to stay on a firm neutral for now, though I wouldn't mind seeing you ingame.

[Feweh]

Re-opened after further investigation.

[Feweh]

More feedback required.

[spheretech]

I still intend to do everything I said in the app. Not sure if there's anything else I can say, but feedback is appreciated.

[Renomaki]

you are lucky to be given a second chance.

You would have lost it due to previous actions, but it seems Feweh showed you mercy.. A mercy not taken lightly.

He was right in the past, you know: Being a predator is often about making hard choices. You will have moments where you are hiding in the shadows and watching, and thinking "What should I do to keep things interesting?"

You must take great care in your actions, know who and when to kill, and when it may be better to run into the shadows to avoid needless death. And most of all, you need to be very careful to avoid powergaming. Just because a Yautja and Human gun have similar triggers and designs, doesn't mean it is ok to shoot human guns, for instance. Look at what happened to the elder who got his hands on a grenade launcher... Yeah, something to think about.

[spheretech]

you are lucky to be given a second chance.

You would have lost it due to previous actions, but it seems Feweh showed you mercy.. A mercy not taken lightly.

He was right in the past, you know: Being a predator is often about making hard choices. You will have moments where you are hiding in the shadows and watching, and thinking "What should I do to keep things interesting?"

You must take great care in your actions, know who and when to kill, and when it may be better to run into the shadows to avoid needless death. And most of all, you need to be very careful to avoid powergaming. Just because a Yautja and Human gun have similar triggers and designs, doesn't mean it is ok to shoot human guns, for instance. Look at what happened to the elder who got his hands on a grenade launcher... Yeah, something to think about.

You have a good point and I will remember this. I'll definitely have to be careful.

[ShortTemperedLeprechaun]

A fellow berserker type, I can approve of this. The play style will give you a certain kink you'll have to work with, but I think it'd be interesting. Story was decent enough, and you seem competant, I've had pretty alright experiences with you. Granted, given your history, even if you're accepted there will probably be some watching, but I think you can do it man.

+1

[Feweh]

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