AccointNaims Application, Jal'hu Neh'ien

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AccointNaims Application, Jal'hu Neh'ien

Post by AccointNaim » 19 Jan 2018, 05:23

Byond ID: AccointNaim

Marine Name (so we know who you are; if you play alien mostly, state that here): Jasmine 'Angel' Bullard (I mostly play Alien though.)

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name): Jal'hu Neh'ien

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor? Yes, very.

Character background (An ADEQUATE description and story of your predators background):
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How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator)? I would be very honorable, explode when I am about to die, follow the PCoH very strictly, and really only fight the winning side. I would also engage in Honor Duels more often than others, I would mostly use a Ceremonial Dagger for duels. And if I do not think a Human is honorable enough, I'd breed a Serpent.

Why should we whitelist you? I am not very sure, since my Predator is very Honorable, I guess I would be balancing the game by killing the winning side.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)? No, I do not think so.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why? No.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor? Yes.
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Re: AccointNaims Application, Jal'hu Neh'ien

Post by Redikalzip » 19 Jan 2018, 06:40

So, I can say only one, very bad application.
You should read more Accepted Apps, story is very bad and very short, forum activity too. 7 posts, eh. Very bad.

And, really. Just read another apps, please.

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Re: AccointNaims Application, Jal'hu Neh'ien

Post by AccointNaim » 19 Jan 2018, 06:48

Yeah, I expected as much, I'm not very creative, thus not very good at stories..
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Re: AccointNaims Application, Jal'hu Neh'ien

Post by James5734 » 19 Jan 2018, 09:14

Story was short, not much to say about it. The playstyle was very generic, while play styles are difficult to come up with. All predators are meant to hunt the winning side and be honorable to begin with. Also, 7 posts is far too little for a pred app. I'd expect at least 30 posts before attempting a pred app. -1, be more active
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Re: AccointNaims Application, Jal'hu Neh'ien

Post by Ghostdex » 19 Jan 2018, 12:08

Okay to start with, very low forum activity. The backstory is short, not very sweet and doesn’t tell us much at all about your pred. I’m not even sure who your marine is, even more so your RP.

Your playstyle is generic, nothing much more to say to that except if you didn’t find a human worthy, why go through the effort of capturing it and breeding a xeno? It’s a somewhat long waiting game for you, and the marine.

Your reason for whitelist is just...you don’t know why you should be whitelisted aside from guessing that you can balance the round?

Look at accepted apps and then back at yours, -1 from me.
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Re: AccointNaims Application, Jal'hu Neh'ien

Post by TheMusician321 » 19 Jan 2018, 21:42

-1, I've seen you like once or twice, playstyle is very VERY generic, reason to whitelist is completely uncreative, and since you state that you mostly play alien, that's another big negative since aliens don't generally roleplay.
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Re: AccointNaims Application, Jal'hu Neh'ien

Post by AccointNaim » 20 Jan 2018, 04:33

Not sure why I even applied...
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Re: AccointNaims Application, Jal'hu Neh'ien

Post by TehSpoderman » 20 Jan 2018, 05:24

AccointNaim wrote:
20 Jan 2018, 04:33
Not sure why I even applied...
were you drunk
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Re: AccointNaims Application, Jal'hu Neh'ien

Post by AccointNaim » 20 Jan 2018, 22:49

TehSpoderman wrote:
20 Jan 2018, 05:24
were you drunk
Maybe..
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Re: AccointNaims Application, Jal'hu Neh'ien

Post by Feweh » 23 Jan 2018, 15:09

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