Lokiki - Moor'Tcha

[Lokiki_01]

Byond ID:

Lokiki

Marine Name (so we know who you are; if you play alien mostly, state that here):

Yaroslav 'Yaro' Arkanov

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name):

Moor'Tcha

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?

Yes, I've read it and I understand it.

Character background (An ADEQUATE description and story of your predators background):

Moor'Tcha is stocky compared to other Yautja, as tall as some humans he's bulkier than most of his kind. One of his lower mandibles is maimed, broken in half, leaving ugly scar. Other part of his face is ritually marked with rune meaning "Vision" right under his cheeckbone. Even though he was always mockered about his height, physical strength and cunning allowed him to survive through young age.

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-Do I see that you are nervous, Shorty? - Asked tall figure in dull clan armor. - Ease the grip on your spear, Moor, do not show them any fear. For you shall become Blooded today.
Big Yautja with face so scarred that it became just a mess of flesh took circualr object from his waist and passed it to Unblooded. Moor'Tcha looked at whip, feeling edges of ancient weapon so filled with blood of serpents that it's color become dull yellow. The Unfolder. Young Yautja tasted the word in his mouth. It tasted of rancid, pain and something more, something he could not..
Floor vibrated a bit when shuttle landed. Different trophies crackled on their racks, long dead they laughed at him. Empty eyes looked with a sneer, waiting for mistake, waiting to strike Moor, ready to kill.
- I am greatly honored to wear this weapon today, master. I will add blood of my prey to the great blend of Unfolder collected by it's previous holders. - Moor'Tcha opened external airlock and stepped out without looking back, leaving all fears with old bones and silent teacher.

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Moor'Tcha rolled away from raging tail of beast, tossing aside his now-useless mask. Yautja scrolled last moments in his mind, trying to find where the serpent came from. This distraction costed him. Hunter with saliva dripping from his jaws jumped forward and knocked the spear from Moor's hands, leaving deep scar in his palm. Trying to develop success serpent crashed into bulky Yautja. Moor'Tcha roared, with all his strength containing hunter from escaping. With the speed of bullet inner jaw shot out of serpent's maw biting lower mandibule off. Green blood sprayed from wound, pain made Moor to loose control of his temper. With tribal rage he slammed his head into xenomorph's scull again and again untill confused serpent broke out of his grasp. It hissed, circling around Yautja, trying to find new angle of attack. Moor'Tcha unrolled his ancient whip not daring to sweep off blood from his eyes. The hunt continues.

How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator)?

Predator rounds should be special one, more intresting and challenging than normal ones. I've seen so many strange and boring lounge fights so I for sure won't make them on crucial map positions. Mostly I want to make little stories here and there with marines and serpents alike(Letting robust hunter notice me stalking it. Confusing small groups of marines with gibberish, leading them to/away from xenos. Etc...). My main objective will be still to find and fight strongest of both sides when I can be sure that their deaths won't change much in this exact moment. Moor'Tcha here not only for hunt, he want to learn and understand ways of combat of marines and xenos, it's not that common to be in the middle of war and he will try to see as much as he can.

Why should we whitelist you?

I might be a known powergamer, but I think it's a good thing for predator in some way. I know maps, marines equipment, xenos. And I can be quite sure that my roleplaying scene that I want to present won't be ended in shootout leading to self-destruct. Map knowlege with timings will allow me to catch exact prey I want. Also I can't understand why after making pretty good apps most pred encounters are still pretty much the same: Exit from cloak -> *roar -> slash-slash-slash. I think predators as community in CM need to grow and *maybe* make set of mini-events for players to choose and use in rounds.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?

I was banned around end of January for backtalking to Admin and having quite a big pile of notes at that moment.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?

No

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor

Yes, I understand that I always need to match Pred standarts or be done for.

[TheMusician321]

Yaro, I like you a lot and you're like one of my closest friends on CM but right now, your background needs a lot more work, it doesn't have to be absurdly long but as it stands it really doesn't tell us much about your pred's character, what he's like and how he acts, his personality and stuff like that, your playstyle it pretty generic too, try adding on it.
For now i'm going with a neutral.

[AccointNaim]

I've seen you alot, you make memorable moments for yourself, but like Musician said, you didn't put enough time into your background, the playstyle is generic

Neutral leaning towards a -1

I'm waiting on some more votes until I vote.

[ArrancarX5]

I'm...Neutral as well, Leaning -1 here also, Just saying that I've never seen you much in game....but, hey...

[AverageSpitter]

Neutral leaning towards -1, Too few forum activity for the age of your account and your background seems to lack effort.

[NGGJamie]

Denied. Poor application.

I recommend brushing up on your writing skills and reviewing other biographies on accepted applications to get a baseline for how the story should be written. As-is I can't tell what is meant to be a quote, what isn't, or who is saying it. The gimmick itself isn't the worst, but I would recommend retooling it before submitting another application.