Beyond ID: The_Walking_Problem
Marine Name (so we know who you are; if you play alien mostly, state that here): Ruslan 'Slav' Dautov
Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name): Nracha-dte Kv'var (Relentless Hunter)
Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?
Yes, i have read it a number of times
Character background (An ADEQUATE description and story of your predators background):
Proud blood
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This planet reminded him of his homeworld-dense jungle enveloped almost its entire surface, so that even the sunlight was barely able to penetrate the tree crowns.Soon he noticed them-small lights moving slowly across the dense jungle. with the help of the infrared mode in his mask, he was convinced finally, it was oomans, more precisely eight of them, warriors, and all are armed with their primitive weapons. The young hunter heard a lot about them: about how cowardly most of them behave, but also what great warriors some of them can become. He was very pleased, before he always had his mentor near him, always checking on his actions, telling him what to do, but now he was alone, this entire hunt was for him, and all the honor and all the trophies from it would belong only to him.
"And why the fuck we did not take the motion detectors"
"Johnson, are you an idiot? In these jungles there are so many animals that it would be nearly impossible to distinguish a false signal from a real threat "
"Sir, are you really sure that UPP was noticed in this area?"
"No, but such a thermal signature could not come out of nowhere"
The young hunter was pleased, they fell into his trap, and now all he has to do is show the arbiters a decent hunt, and he will finally be able to call himself blooded. The mere thought of arbiters wakened in him the most contradictory feelings. He knew that they were watching every step he took, remembering all the ruthless training that they have given him. And with the feeling of hatred that they instilled in him from the very beginning, he felt respect, for it was they who made him what he was now-a young hunter who had just become closer to the title of a true warrior.
"Maslow, since you have tactical binoculars, you go ahead and explore the terrain, Kennedy you go with him and cover his ass, if you find the enemy do not not engage, did you understand?"
"Sir yes sir!"
Two of the oomans separated from the group and accelerated forward. Hunter followed them, staying unseen by their fellow warriors. After some time the two oomans stopped and started overwatching the territory, by using their optical devices. For a brief second the hunter felt excitement-"Maybe they will even be able to notice me, maybe they will even be fast enough to attack me", but that didnt happen, they didnt notice him and moved on. The young hunter could not wait any longer, he used the voice emmiter, integrated in his mask to transform the clicking of his mandibles into distinguishable words.
"Maslow, get your ass over here now, Kennedy stay on position, and dont you dare question my orders",- their language was so easy to translate.
One of the oomans started heading for the alleged source of the sound. After the hunter made sure that the ooman is completely alone, he disabled his cloaking device, allowing the ooman to see him for mere moment.
"CONTACT",- sounds of gunshots followed.
The hunter was pleased with ooman's reaction, yet he was too fast for the ooman to hit him. Using his combistick he killed the ooman with one swift move. Then the others came. He was watching them and their reaction to the death of their fellow warrior: some of them were enraged, some scared and nere panic, but one of them was calm and cold blooded. From now on, the hunter knew whose had is going to be his first trophey, none of them, except that one individual had his interest. He pulled out the net gun and quickly disabled everyone but the future trophey. He then jumped down and reveal himself to the group. His voice emmiter spitted out the words:
"You fight, you die, they live, they fight you all die",- after these words he disabled the net and all other oomans were free, pointing their guns at the hunter.
"Grab Maslow and go",- said there leader "I will catch up with you after i deal with this pussy face"
Young hunter felt excitement "So there is such thing as honor among them",- he thought to himself. He then dropped the combistick next to the ooman. The ooman attacked first, the hunter dodged the strike and cut the ooman's back, but even then the prey remained silent. The true ardor flowed through the hunter's body "Finally, a worthy opponent". He then with a swift move pierced the ooman's chest, a long loud scream came out of ooman's mouth, th prey was slayed and the trophey was His, and now he can call himself the blooded. A loud, thunder like roar has jarred the jungle.
I intend to play as a stalker, an observer, who will be very parient on his way. However, that still means, that I will be hunting down the marines and xeno, I will just do it in a more stealthy manner, but towards the end of the round my character will probably lose his patience will try to find the worthiest prey as fast as possile. Also o will try to find the most worthy ooman and give it a fair, honorable duel. I will also do my best at improving my rp with other players. I hope to make sure that my character will be remembered as a honorable hunter, a true predator. And with other predators i also intent on doing rp, as my character is a very young hunter, who has only recently passed his first true hunt and he is very proud with his title of "blooded', and any other predator trying to negate his achievements will have his negative attitude, but offcource i will not be running around insulting or fighing other predators, just because they didnt like my trophey.
Why should we whitelist you?
Even though i havent played all that much on this sever, maybe about a month or so, i know all the rules, i have never been in trouble for any kind of failrp, and i am really looking foward to the predator role. Also i am quiet sure i can call myself an AvP fan, and i basically know almost everything about predators race. Overall, i am really excited about this server and opportunities that it grants to the players.
Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?
No, never
Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?
I am currently not banned from any other servers
Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor? I fully understand this, and consciously accept all the conditions
Final words:
So thank you for reading this, even if you are not going to approve it, as criticism is gonna help me develop further. And the next thing i am going to say might sound a little bit silly, but english is not my first language, so if i made any grammar, or any other kind of mistakes feel free to make me know. And when criticising please be adequate and keep in mind that this is the second story i right in my entire life.
