Predator application

[Raph]

Byond ID:Raph8

Marine Name (so we know who you are; if you play alien mostly, state that here):Lance copper

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name): La'cksa Lo'art

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor? I have read it yes.

Character background (An ADEQUATE description and story of your predators background):when he was born he was raised with a hard hand ,and was teached to honor his clan to the very end.
he found out that a species in particular fought honorably called humans,he seeks to further understand the species and to better himself.
although he is a youngblood he feels he can become something great.

How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator)?I would look for worthy pray and fight them honorably,fighting worthy humans and some xenos here and there.

Why should we whitelist you?I im confident i would make a good predator.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?Negative.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?no.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?I understand

[Mvp777]

This is way, way too generic and poor quality. -1

[ThesoldierLLJK]

You haven’t reached a month yet on your forum membership and can’t apply until your account has been a month old.

Also bare effort app can’t tell if this is a meme or serious
-1

[ThePiachu]

No

-1

[Ghostdex]

Okay yeah no -1

[Frans_Feiffer]

-1

Coming from experience, this is pretty much everything you don’t want to do in an app. I don’t say this to be a dick, but it’s about as truth as the truth can get.

I’m not the best to say what to do, and what not to do when applying for Predator, however I can at least give you some tips to get you on track next time, as I don’t see this being accepted.

The first and most important thing i’d say is to read the Honor Code as many times as you need in order for you to understand it and abide by it, as it dictates your interactions with other players while on the hunt. Look at past accepted/denied apps, as well as the currently pending ones and their comments so you can get a feel for what does and doesn’t work in regards to a successful app. Not only that, but look into the lore and gather as much information you can from it. Knowing the lore is very important for both Roleplayimg your character, and for appreciating it. That’s in my opinion the groundwork you should do in order to get yourself prepared for applying to become a Predator. I could go into detail or explain more about making the app, but I really don’t see myself fit to do so, and that’s not what this commenting system is for. I hope what I’ve said helps, and better luck next time my guy, just cause this doesn’t get accepted doesn’t mean you can’t try again in 3 months or so when you’re ready.

[Loco52]

Practically null activity on forums, and the most poorly written app I've seen posted for the hardest whitelist to get right now. Sorry pal, it's another -1 here.

[Sambalu]

Your forum account isn't even a month old, you have no other posts, and the app comes across as minimum effort. I reccomend reading other apps that have been accepted.

so yeah, big -1

[z a n e b o t]

ok -1

[Bancrose]

Why should we whitelist you?I im confident i would make a good predator.

Haha no. -1

[Survivor]

I'm tempted to make a joke, but I can't bring myself to do it. Its so bad, its bad.


-1

[Drownie]

No, just no - read Frans reply and you'll know why.

-1

[David Stormwell]

I've been here been here for 3 months and i'm even not thinking about making a pred app right now too small and it seems like a meme
-1

[Avalanchee]

N-No
-1

[DefinitelyAlone0309]

The app isn't even valid lul.

-1

[TheMaskedMan2]

Please put more effort into your applications. I would recommend reading over previously accepted applications, and even denied applications. Look at what they did right, look at what they did wrong, work on that and apply again in the future.

For now, -1

[Symbiosis]

Sorry bud! Next time around take what you’ve learned here and apply it to your next app!

-1 from me.

[spartanbobby]

Not much else really needs to be said

-1

[Emeraldblood]

Resolved - Denied; You can make a new app in three months from now.