Predator app: Luar-Ki Halkrath

[Jackattack41498]

Byond ID: Jackattack41498

Marine Name (so we know who you are; if you play alien mostly, state that here):
Chase Lord; I try to play aliens and marines in equal measures, but I get carried away as alien

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name):
Luar-Ki Halkrath (Moonshadow)

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?
Quite familiar; I'm quite a fan of the Predator series, and the background reading I've been alluded to or quoted the code many times.

Character background (An ADEQUATE description and story of your predators background):
Originally thought to be too weak to be of any use, Luar-Ki Halkrath was pushed around until he decided to show the other Yautja that cunning and resourcefulness could be just as useful, if not better. In an honor duel to prove himself, he defeated another Yautja who was thought to be the strongest of their age group. He showed mercy and, deciding that taking a limb would be a waste, he took the mask from the other. Still being a younger Yautja, and the early years being unremarkable, there is not much else to tell that is not standard for Yautja.

How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator)?
I intend to rely on stealth to move from place to place, choosing very few to hunt, preferring to take my time and observe before beginning the hunt proper. I will make no contact where it can be avoided, but where honor is at stake, the honorable path will be chosen.

Why should we whitelist you?
I believe that I should be whitelisted because predators seem to have less finesse of late, and I intend to use finesse as much as possible, save for those times that require force.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?
I have not been banned for as long as I can remember, and can say with a 95% certainty that I have never been banned from CM, and there is a 0% probability that i am incorrect in saying I have not been banned in the last month.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?
Not that I am aware of

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?
I understand this, and am glad of it; Yautja are held to a code, so why shouldn't their players?

[Clutch]

ima keep it real here bud....
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[Daturix]

The story is unremarkable. The way you describe how you'd play as predator isn't answered but rather saying "other predators are bad, I'm not". Your answer for your bans are not straight forward and shows a red flag there.
Overall I see a lack of detail that shows you don't genuinely want this whitelist and will not follow its rules along with never seeing you IC, or OOC once within the year.
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[ThesoldierLLJK]

Low effort application guy, you should really take a look at the others who have been accepted.
Plus your name doesn't really stick out, if you want people to know who you are I suggest you play marine more

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[Jackattack41498]

Right, input noted, and I'll be editing my next app. And also, I said that I was not banned in the past month and i doubt i have ever been banned from any SS13 server.
Side note: I do not say other predators are outright bad, I'm merely saying they all seem to blend together

[Jackattack41498]

Also, I assumed this one would be rejected, and I would use it to learn from the feedback. I will come back after more time on the server and more work on a better Yautja. Also better writing skills.

[Sailor Dave]

I'm not super strict on these, but this is a little weak. I respect you trying to be more careful than other predators, but there's not much explaining how you'll do so.
I'm not asking for a novel, but I'm not confident you'll put as much thought into your actions as you say you will.

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[Emeraldblood]

Resolved - Denied; Look at any accepted predator app and look at yours.