Predator Application - Bhu'ja "Da'dtou-di"

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Predator Application - Bhu'ja "Da'dtou-di"

Post by Mayro678 » 07 Nov 2018, 10:16

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Marine Name (so we know who you are; if you play alien mostly, state that here): Mark Xenu mostly, but sometimes Rafe Jenner

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name): Bhu'ja "Da'dtou-di"

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?
I am familiar with the code of honor, having read over it a fair amount of times.

Character background (An ADEQUATE description and story of your predators background):
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How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator)?
Being subordinate to the clan he had been originally tresspassing upon, Bhu'ja is usually a much more relaxed hunter. He follows his active elder's orders to the letter, and thinks only of the honor he will achieve when killing his foes. Will this kill impress those back on our prime world? Will this hunting story of mine be told throughout generations of Yautja? Will a death of this grandeur be one spread across the stars? These are a few of the thoughts that drive Bhu'ja to hunt his specific way. Bhu'ja picks only those that he believes deserves a death by his hands... he will become the paragon of the hunt, a death to him is most honorable, no? Leaders of hunts to duel, leaders of serpents to kill, the elder and ancients of the serpent hive to skin. Bhu'ja is looking to achieve his goal no matter the cost to himself, but will happily retreat if his hunt turns ugly. A death ballad is honorable, but a living legend is much more so.

Bhu'ja downplays his skills due to the severity of the Ancient Councils words to him during his punishment, but it is not close to the truth. Bhu'ja is resourceful, and will think of any way possible to achieve his goal. Leading his prey into a hunting trap and gutting the now ensnared victim, for instance, is one of his most simplest tricks to ensure a outstanding victory. His prey had been outsmarted, truly a sign of his vast intelligence and honor to end the life of such a creature through his superior tactics. Bhu'ja carries much pride with him, but he understands that combat is not fair or inherently honorable.. so he gives himself few luxuries in his hunts, to keep them as honorable as possible.

Why should we whitelist you?
I've been RPing in many different places for a few years and, with some humbling of myself, I say I can at least play a good character and stay true to their values. While reading the, "how to apply for pred", it seemed that roleplay is a crucial item in playing as the predator, so I believed I might as well give it a shot.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?
I have been banned from CM in the last month, due to EORG. Accidentally shot myself with a shotgun when trying to reload it.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?
Nope. I don't really play any other servers, so no reason to get banned on them.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?
Yes, I do understand that this is fact.
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Re: Predator Application - Bhu'ja "Da'dtou-di"

Post by ThesoldierLLJK » 07 Nov 2018, 10:28

You've put up two whitelist applications within a very short time of each other. This is not really considered an acceptable practice unless your other whitelist application has been pending for almost a month.

Plus this is the hardest whitelist to get, I know your name a little bit, but if you are not well known, you won't get this one.

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Re: Predator Application - Bhu'ja "Da'dtou-di"

Post by NescauComToddy » 07 Nov 2018, 15:56

Very little activity in the community added with the publication of several applications at the same time besides being a newly created account automatically makes me -1 your app. You shouldn't create an account in the forum for the sole purpose of being whitelisted, but to participate in the community.

Your background presents a young blood defeating an elder in a manner deemed dishonorable, and instead of being killed immediately, he is welcomed and assigned to a life of 'servitude', not having his hunting rights denied neither. Also, Bhu'ja cheated on an elder and suffered no significant penalty that could jeopardize his life but brought shame to his clan while he was ignored. In addition, you could have used more paragraphs in your background for accessibility purposes.

Unfortunately, I do not remember past experiences with your character, and your moderator application makes it clear that you should improve your in-game behavior before trying for a whitelisted role. I wish you good luck, but my conclusion is a -1.
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Re: Predator Application - Bhu'ja "Da'dtou-di"

Post by DrPng » 09 Nov 2018, 12:11

Not to mention the lore inconsistency from Nescau, but you already have a currently open synthetic application + a very passive aggressive response to "having too many notes" in your mod app. I really dont think youd be a good fit for predator, and if youd put in any time into researching how and why applicants are accepted, you'd realize that they have GOOD standing with the community.
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Re: Predator Application - Bhu'ja "Da'dtou-di"

Post by Frans_Feiffer » 09 Nov 2018, 12:20

NescauComToddy wrote:
07 Nov 2018, 15:56
Very little activity in the community added with the publication of several applications at the same time besides being a newly created account automatically makes me -1 your app. You shouldn't create an account in the forum for the sole purpose of being whitelisted, but to participate in the community.

Your background presents a young blood defeating an elder in a manner deemed dishonorable, and instead of being killed immediately, he is welcomed and assigned to a life of 'servitude', not having his hunting rights denied neither. Also, Bhu'ja cheated on an elder and suffered no significant penalty that could jeopardize his life but brought shame to his clan while he was ignored. In addition, you could have used more paragraphs in your background for accessibility purposes.

Unfortunately, I do not remember past experiences with your character, and your moderator application makes it clear that you should improve your in-game behavior before trying for a whitelisted role. I wish you good luck, but my conclusion is a -1.
Literally this. Nothing against you, but I think you’re rushing through the applications. Build up a rep for not being a shitter, and take your time getting the whitelists. They’re all fun and unique, but rushing to get them will find you no success my man.

On top of that use the next few months to look into the lore and get acquainted with it. Until then they though -
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Re: Predator Application - Bhu'ja "Da'dtou-di"

Post by Karmac » 09 Nov 2018, 19:18

I honestly can't tell if this application is a joke or you just really wanted to play a bad blood without getting in trouble for it.

Either way it's a -1 and everyone else has said what needs to be said already.
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Re: Predator Application - Bhu'ja "Da'dtou-di"

Post by Mayro678 » 09 Nov 2018, 20:39

Sorry that the story communicated to you that I wanted a bad blood! That's not what the character was intended to be... he's more of a, "redeem himself from the shitty image his father gave him", character.

I've read the other replies as well and a common theme I see is that I'm too new. I understand that, but I just wanted to get the whitelist out there and test the waters a bit. I'm assuming that means mostly everything else is fine in the app? If it's not bringing much in the ways of criticism (other than DrPng and Frans commenting on my misuse of the lore, which I could use a bit of clarification on), I'll just focus on playing the game and posting some more throughout the forums.

It likely won't get through, but eh, was worth a shot. In three months time I'll try and again and with the about four months of interaction we'll see what happens.
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Re: Predator Application - Bhu'ja "Da'dtou-di"

Post by Imperator_Titan » 25 Nov 2018, 05:33

That backstory wasn't good at all, seeing as how a youngblood manages to defeat an elder with a lifetime of experience by dishonourable combat. That simply wouldn't ever happen unless you intended to become a badblood, which is just as bad.

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Re: Predator Application - Bhu'ja "Da'dtou-di"

Post by Ghostdex » 25 Nov 2018, 11:43

Imperator_Titan wrote:
25 Nov 2018, 05:33
That backstory wasn't good at all, seeing as how a youngblood manages to defeat an elder with a lifetime of experience by dishonourable combat. That simply wouldn't ever happen unless you intended to become a badblood, which is just as bad.

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Re: Predator Application - Bhu'ja "Da'dtou-di"

Post by spartanbobby » 26 Nov 2018, 17:46

ghostdex wrote:
25 Nov 2018, 11:43


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Imperator_Titan wrote:
25 Nov 2018, 05:33
That backstory wasn't good at all, seeing as how a youngblood manages to defeat an elder with a lifetime of experience by dishonourable combat. That simply wouldn't ever happen unless you intended to become a badblood, which is just as bad.

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Re: Predator Application - Bhu'ja "Da'dtou-di"

Post by ThesoldierLLJK » 26 Nov 2018, 17:57

I’m going with a negative 1 as well

You need to get a bit more well known before you try this again.

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Re: Predator Application - Bhu'ja "Da'dtou-di"

Post by Emeraldblood » 29 Nov 2018, 18:39

Resolved - Denied; we have a whitelist help channel on our discord and I'd suggest you use it in future applications.
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