Par'Tash Colmn - Predator Application
- Arcanist23
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Par'Tash Colmn - Predator Application
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Arcanist23
Marine Name (so we know who you are; if you play alien mostly, state that here):
Kavalan 'Guardian' Ward
Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name):
Par'Tash Colmn
Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?
Yes. I read it when i first encountered a predator and reread it just like every wiki about the squad classes.
Character background (An ADEQUATE description and story of your predators background):
Par'Tash represents the nobility of the predatorial race, but to horrible extents. The expectancy of his actions passed down from his heritage have made him look bad in the eyes of other predators, but not due to him being unable to perform his tasks, but because of how he does it. His unorthodox methods have lead the other predators to have an innate disrespect when hunting alongside him. He is a capable warrior indeed, but an unconventional one at that. He however wishes to protect all the other predators he hunts alongside. He is affected by the trust issues other have towards him and wishes to make up for it through self sacrifice.
How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator)?
I wish to stalk the humans and engage in combat with them only when threatened. Stray bullets won't be an issue since i am not a kid that will throw a tantrum because of two ticks of damage. I will test Marines to some degree and enter a duel of sorts with them. if they are unable to properly wound me, then they are not worthy to die by the hand of a predator and as such will be left to live a humiliating life. I will defend other predators from harm, if need be, but i will only fight the humans i observe to be well rounded in battle. For example, if X killed an ambiguous number of Xenos, then he is worthy prey. Xenos however are known by the predators to be rare in challenge and as such, will fight them only if they seem persistent in their engages against me. If a human does happen to save my life from the enemy, then he is my protege until the end of the round. I'll play a pretty normal predator, in short.
Why should we whitelist you?
Because i love this game. I won't make up some long story, but when i enjoy a game, i wish to be the best at it and know everything about it.
Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?
I have been not.
Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?
I am not.
Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?
Of course i do.
Arcanist23
Marine Name (so we know who you are; if you play alien mostly, state that here):
Kavalan 'Guardian' Ward
Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name):
Par'Tash Colmn
Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?
Yes. I read it when i first encountered a predator and reread it just like every wiki about the squad classes.
Character background (An ADEQUATE description and story of your predators background):
Par'Tash represents the nobility of the predatorial race, but to horrible extents. The expectancy of his actions passed down from his heritage have made him look bad in the eyes of other predators, but not due to him being unable to perform his tasks, but because of how he does it. His unorthodox methods have lead the other predators to have an innate disrespect when hunting alongside him. He is a capable warrior indeed, but an unconventional one at that. He however wishes to protect all the other predators he hunts alongside. He is affected by the trust issues other have towards him and wishes to make up for it through self sacrifice.
How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator)?
I wish to stalk the humans and engage in combat with them only when threatened. Stray bullets won't be an issue since i am not a kid that will throw a tantrum because of two ticks of damage. I will test Marines to some degree and enter a duel of sorts with them. if they are unable to properly wound me, then they are not worthy to die by the hand of a predator and as such will be left to live a humiliating life. I will defend other predators from harm, if need be, but i will only fight the humans i observe to be well rounded in battle. For example, if X killed an ambiguous number of Xenos, then he is worthy prey. Xenos however are known by the predators to be rare in challenge and as such, will fight them only if they seem persistent in their engages against me. If a human does happen to save my life from the enemy, then he is my protege until the end of the round. I'll play a pretty normal predator, in short.
Why should we whitelist you?
Because i love this game. I won't make up some long story, but when i enjoy a game, i wish to be the best at it and know everything about it.
Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?
I have been not.
Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?
I am not.
Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?
Of course i do.
- Imperator_Titan
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Re: Par'Tash Colmn - Predator Application
Terrible backstory, generic playstyle. Never seen you around,
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Just some funny moments.
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- Avalanchee
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Re: Par'Tash Colmn - Predator Application
Check the other apps and try again.
Phillip 'Avalanche' Murray
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- Arcanist23
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Re: Par'Tash Colmn - Predator Application
If you could explain what i could improve upon, it would help a lot. Thanks for the feedback, however.
- Karmac
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Re: Par'Tash Colmn - Predator Application
Look at an accepted application, then look back at yours, you have neither a decent backstory or an interesting playstyle.
Garth Pawolski, or is it Powalski?
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- ThesoldierLLJK
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Re: Par'Tash Colmn - Predator Application
There’s no back story at all.
We don’t expect a novel but your backstory shows us if you can roleplay.
I suggest you try harder next time and use the discord whitelist help channel.
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We don’t expect a novel but your backstory shows us if you can roleplay.
I suggest you try harder next time and use the discord whitelist help channel.
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- spartanbobby
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Re: Par'Tash Colmn - Predator Application
Imperator_Titan wrote: ↑02 Dec 2018, 08:04Terrible backstory, generic playstyle. Never seen you around,
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- Ghostdex
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Re: Par'Tash Colmn - Predator Application
What is this
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Kara Walsh
Kjuhte-Teer
Part of the Yautja Council with SpartanBobby, Imperator_Titan, Sailor Dave and Symbiosis. Feel free to PM any of us with questions about Predator
Something a bit funny: http://i.imgur.com/lKfpvwd.png
The story of Operative Delta: https://imgur.com/Go3VIhs https://imgur.com/4K8AqdA
- Emeraldblood
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Re: Par'Tash Colmn - Predator Application
I'd suggest you join the CM Discord and use the whitelist application help channel we have open, they could have easily told you this would be denied in a heartbeat.
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