Lar'ja Khujte (Dark Void)

[Logi99]

Byond ID:Logi99

Marine Name (so we know who you are, if you play alien mostly, state that here):Lewis Richardson

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name): Lar'ja Kjuhte

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?Yes

Character background (A very BRIEF description of your predators background):
Lar'ja Kjuhte. A yautja from a clan of hunters, which the name is unknown. Lar'ja wasn't the best of yautja but was certainly not the worst. He always liked spending alone time picturing what it feels like to be in a hunt without getting help at all. When his clan sent him with some other youngblood, two rather, he had began his hunt. Going to what looks like a pyramid, met his weapons there. There 1 of each weapons so there weren't many to choose from. Sadly the other youngbloods rushed in and got their weapons first leaving Lar'ja behind. Everyone was meant to have a bio mask and some body armor with them so they provided some inside the pyramid. There was also was the wrist-gauntlet you were meant to bring because those were very important for the hunt. If he wanted to cloak he needed that. Especially if something went wrong and failed his hunt he would self destruct like a honored hunter rather than be captured.

The weapons what were left were the most basic weapons. The wrist blade and the ceremonial dagger. Equipping these, putting the ceremonial dagger in the shin and the wrist blade attached on him, he has now began his hunt.

The hunt has began

Going through what looks like a jungle structured planet, he has searched for what he heard was good prey. What all yautja called... Serpents. Exploring through it he has found what he has been looking for using his biomask. Heh. It was one of the serpents. Probably lurking around finding hosts for it's hive. Lar'ja took this chance to begin the fight, cloaking himself he was so excited that his cloaking made it more easily noticable. Being noticed by the serpent he had turned off his cloaking, it then lashes it tail at Lar'ja injuring him. But this was no time to give up. Whilst his back arched and mandibles flared, he started wielding his wristblades as he kicks off the serpent and slashes it fiercly. But the serpent was still lively and ready to fight. He got pushed onto the ground as his death had came closer. Once again, his mandibles flared and shot his wristblades into the serpent's chest. Surprising him,the serpent wasn't able to fight him, spraying acid on the floor. He then did the finisher!

dtai'k-dte sa-de nav'g-kon dtain'aun bpide/Nau'gkon dtain'aun bpi-de.

This meant "The fight that begun would not end until the end."

Pulling out his ceremonial dagger he had taken his trophy and began his blooded hunts. He had traveled to the LV-624. Stories saying that serpents have been sighted there. He was there to go look for himself.


How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)?A honorable hunter, always interested in killing prey without getting caught but often probably fail. He'd probably want to seek what side would win if a worthy prey of some differnet species fought another but different species, who would win?


Why should we whitelist you? I have played since pre-alpha. I've seen how a lot of predators play where I saw someone stealthily kill a medic without getting caught. That was amazing. Predators seem fun and unreliable on others. Which sounds like rambo marine but you're free to do it.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)? I'm not really sure. I don't really remember which month it was, but I have been banned once . Probably this February. I really don't know. Might needa check up on that.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why? I have been banned from Yogstation for some reason i'm unknown about. But at the moment not any other servers.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor? Yes. Paying for the server helps, but that doesn't not protect you from getting banned or job-banned from stuff. Donors have got their rewards which was their custom equipments.

[Feweh]

Byond ID:Logi99

Marine Name (so we know who you are, if you play alien mostly, state that here):Lewis Richardson

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name): Lar'ja Kjuhte

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?Yes

Character background (A very BRIEF description of your predators background):
Lar'ja Kjuhte. A yautja from a clan of hunters, which the name is unknown. Lar'ja wasn't the best of yautja but was certainly not the worst. He always liked spending alone time picturing what it feels like to be in a hunt without getting help at all. When his clan sent him with some other youngblood, two rather, he had began his hunt. Going to what looks like a pyramid, met his weapons there. There 1 of each weapons so there weren't many to choose from. Sadly the other youngbloods rushed in and got their weapons first leaving Lar'ja behind. Everyone was meant to have a bio mask and some body armor with them so they provided some inside the pyramid. There was also was the wrist-gauntlet you were meant to bring because those were very important for the hunt. If he wanted to cloak he needed that. Especially if something went wrong and failed his hunt he would self destruct like a honored hunter rather than be captured.

The weapons what were left were the most basic weapons. The wrist blade and the ceremonial dagger. Equipping these, putting the ceremonial dagger in the shin and the wrist blade attached on him, he has now began his hunt.

The hunt has began

Going through what looks like a jungle structured planet, he has searched for what he heard was good prey. What all yautja called... Serpents. Exploring through it he has found what he has been looking for using his biomask. Heh. It was one of the serpents. Probably lurking around finding hosts for it's hive. Lar'ja took this chance to begin the fight, cloaking himself he was so excited that his cloaking made it more easily noticable. Being noticed by the serpent he had turned off his cloaking, it then lashes it tail at Lar'ja injuring him. But this was no time to give up. Whilst his back arched and mandibles flared, he started wielding his wristblades as he kicks off the serpent and slashes it fiercly. But the serpent was still lively and ready to fight. He got pushed onto the ground as his death had came closer. Once again, his mandibles flared and shot his wristblades into the serpent's chest. Surprising him,the serpent wasn't able to fight him, spraying acid on the floor. He then did the finisher!

dtai'k-dte sa-de nav'g-kon dtain'aun bpide/Nau'gkon dtain'aun bpi-de.

This meant "The fight that begun would not end until the end."

Pulling out his ceremonial dagger he had taken his trophy and began his blooded hunts. He had traveled to the LV-624. Stories saying that serpents have been sighted there. He was there to go look for himself.


How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)?A honorable hunter, always interested in killing prey without getting caught but often probably fail. He'd probably want to seek what side would win if a worthy prey of some differnet species fought another but different species, who would win?


Why should we whitelist you? I have played since pre-alpha. I've seen how a lot of predators play where I saw someone stealthily kill a medic without getting caught. That was amazing. Predators seem fun and unreliable on others. Which sounds like rambo marine but you're free to do it.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)? I'm not really sure. I don't really remember which month it was, but I have been banned once . Probably this February. I really don't know. Might needa check up on that.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why? I have been banned from Yogstation for some reason i'm unknown about. But at the moment not any other servers.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor? Yes. Paying for the server helps, but that doesn't not protect you from getting banned or job-banned from stuff. Donors have got their rewards which was their custom equipments.

Sorry, but this application isn't very good and just the basic writing and story is poor. The over-all application and things you wrote made it very poor compared to the current other's achieving +1's. I quoted your initial post in case you edit it based off of what I'm criticizing you on.

There's a few cringe worthy things in here that really show you don't understand the lore or real idea behind Predators.
These are a few things that are serious issues with you playing Predator on the server.
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"Why should we whitelist you? I have played since pre-alpha. I've seen how a lot of predators play where I saw someone stealthily kill a medic without getting caught. That was amazing. Predators seem fun and unreliable on others. Which sounds like rambo marine but you're free to do it."

The rambo marine part is concerning, because that's not at all what they should be related to.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why? I have been banned from Yogstation for some reason i'm unknown about. But at the moment not any other servers.

A server ban from Yog doesn't look that great, especially given how lenient they are with rules.

How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)?A honorable hunter, always interested in killing prey without getting caught but often probably fail.

This doesn't really make sense either.

Anyways, -1

[Logi99]

Sorry, but this application isn't very good and just the basic writing and story is poor. The over-all application and things you wrote made it very poor compared to the current other's achieving +1's. I quoted your initial post in case you edit it based off of what I'm criticizing you on.

There's a few cringe worthy things in here that really show you don't understand the lore or real idea behind Predators.
These are a few things that are serious issues with you playing Predator on the server.
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"Why should we whitelist you? I have played since pre-alpha. I've seen how a lot of predators play where I saw someone stealthily kill a medic without getting caught. That was amazing. Predators seem fun and unreliable on others. Which sounds like rambo marine but you're free to do it."

The rambo marine part is concerning, because that's not at all what they should be related to.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why? I have been banned from Yogstation for some reason i'm unknown about. But at the moment not any other servers.

A server ban from Yog doesn't look that great, especially given how lenient they are with rules.

How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)?A honorable hunter, always interested in killing prey without getting caught but often probably fail.

This doesn't really make sense either.

Anyways, -1

By the way I've been beginning to edit this. You replied during I edited.
I don't think you get to see me play is either we don't get in the same squad and we don't get see same activities or I have to go through schoolwork.

It's not that I don't know the lore and all. I'm just worried of how people will judge how I use it.

[Logi99]

Sorry, but this application isn't very good and just the basic writing and story is poor. The over-all application and things you wrote made it very poor compared to the current other's achieving +1's. I quoted your initial post in case you edit it based off of what I'm criticizing you on.

There's a few cringe worthy things in here that really show you don't understand the lore or real idea behind Predators.
These are a few things that are serious issues with you playing Predator on the server.
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"Why should we whitelist you? I have played since pre-alpha. I've seen how a lot of predators play where I saw someone stealthily kill a medic without getting caught. That was amazing. Predators seem fun and unreliable on others. Which sounds like rambo marine but you're free to do it."

The rambo marine part is concerning, because that's not at all what they should be related to.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why? I have been banned from Yogstation for some reason i'm unknown about. But at the moment not any other servers.

A server ban from Yog doesn't look that great, especially given how lenient they are with rules.

How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)?A honorable hunter, always interested in killing prey without getting caught but often probably fail.

This doesn't really make sense either.

Anyways, -1

I also compared it to a rambo marine is because you're not teaming with anybody.
Also I told you I don't know why I got banned from yogstation. I've only played it once before or something.
The reason why I said often probably fail is because it isn't gonna be easy playing a new type of characters using new things. So at the moment i'm keeping it at that point.
Also I would like you to point out what I done wrong with my story. I've been reading applications and people didn't base it off lore much? What is wrong with mine? I would like you to state it out because i'm not a very easy observant things of my creations. This would push me further to see what i'm doing wrong.

[LordeKilly]

You have a wrong interpretation of the lore, I think. Predators are there to stalk, hunt, and engage in single combat. "Not getting caught" is pretty much the opposite of what a predator would want. The element of surprise is a tool they use often, but other than that, they engage in open combat.

And I can also assure you, almost every other person has based their predators off the lore. You should go back and do some reading.

-1.

[Feweh]

I should of waited the 1 hour behind edits were disabled.
However going by your initial post it's clear you don't understand the Lore or Predators in general.
I also don't play Marine, I'm always observing which gives me a grand view on things.

[Tristan63]

-1

To be completely honest, even if you have good intentions you sound like a greifer.

[Logi99]

You have a wrong interpretation of the lore, I think. Predators are there to stalk, hunt, and engage in single combat. "Not getting caught" is pretty much the opposite of what a predator would want. The element of surprise is a tool they use often, but other than that, they engage in open combat.

And I can also assure you, almost every other person has based their predators off the lore. You should go back and do some reading.

-1.

I only said that is because I want it to be more easier for me to go through the code of honor. Having to get teamed means you might not be able to follow it as I have seen a predator cloaking and attacking at the same time. In other words he wants a duel.

[LordeKilly]

yeah, rereading this apllication, its still not very good. Its a bland character, qnd i honestly see no incentive to roleplay, only to murderbone. -1 still

[Logi99]

yeah, rereading this apllication, its still not very good. Its a bland character, qnd i honestly see no incentive to roleplay, only to murderbone. -1 still

Well if I was never here to RP I would of not play most servers on ss13. If I murderbone I get removed from predators. Right?

[TR-BlackDragon]

Sorry mate but from the sounds of this app your not really understanding the purpose of the Preds. So I am going to have to give you a
-1

[Logi99]

Sorry mate but from the sounds of this app your not really understanding the purpose of the Preds. So I am going to have to give you a
-1

Since I know this application won't stand a chance. You might just deny this and let me wait till I can actually think of a good app. If adminruns were something I would love to do that. Maybe that could just be a suggestion and a whitelist challenge. I'm not very good at making backgrounds and yes, that is my excuse. I'm being honest here, I really don't know how I can use something to put it into my background without it making sense.

[apophis775]

DENIED - DATE OF DENIAL: 12MAY16

We may eventually do the "admin-runs" thing, where we spawn people in as a pred to learn about, and see how they work. But probably not for a bit on time.