Yautza S'krakos (Spine Crusher)

[lucashunter608]

Byond ID:lucashunte

Marine Name (so we know who you are, if you play alien mostly, state that here):
Lucas Oliveira

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name):
Yautza S'krakos

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?
Yes

Character background (A very BRIEF description of your predators background):
Yautza started hunting with his tribe since he was little, majority of his tribe was killed because of a hunt, since then Yautza started to hunt too, becoming the best of his remaining tribe, Yautza started to grow, and so his ability to hunt, his next objetive is to hunt the queen, many have died from her.

How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)?
I would like to only hunt only aliens, they are more dangerous than marines and hunting humans doesn't offer much honor, they use disrespectful and dangerous weapons, i would only hunt marines when there was no aliens around

Why should we whitelist you?
I like to try new experiences, its pretty boring playing only with two races, i play the game since it launched so i already saw majority of the alien race, what is more interesting is the human race, you guys keep adding more weapons and armors, so it doesn't become too boring.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?
No

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?
Only from hippie, i was trying to teach my friend how to play ss13 and he started to murder everyone, i was involved and got banned

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?
Break of rules can be repaired, predator code of honor is more serious

[NoShamNoWow]

-1. Format is messy, and this is your only post. Get more active.

[lucashunter608]

-1. Format is messy, and this is your only post. Get more active.

this is my first time posting something like this, i only used this account to get unbanned from the old colonial marines, that was ages ago, i'll try my best to fix the format

[Feweh]

All around bad.

-1

[Adjective]

-1 Your account is only a month old as of yesterday, the only posts you have are the two here in this document and this application is feeble at best. There is no girth to this document and your "Character Background" consisted of two sentences.

[LordeKilly]

this is my first time posting something like this, i only used this account to get unbanned from the old colonial marines, that was ages ago, i'll try my best to fix the format

This was a blatant lie, the application was really crap, showed no knowledge of lore or anything. Even misspelled Yautja.

[lucashunter608]

-1 Your account is only a month old as of yesterday, the only posts you have are the two here in this document and this application is feeble at best. There is no girth to this document and your "Character Background" consisted of two sentences.

Why do i need to have some time in the forums and why i need to have lots of posts? its not like i don't play colonial marines since it released, i'm not saying i am a good player or a good RPer but having more posts make me a better player? i think majority of you guys already know Lucas Oliveira, i play a lot to not recognize me, i didn't posted that much in the forums because i was a little busy in lifeweb forums instead, but overall people can recognize me from the game without any posts, i just wanted to try something diferent playing as predator, because i like going melee with aliens and because predators can make honorable duels with marines.

[lucashunter608]

This was a blatant lie, the application was really crap, showed no knowledge of lore or anything. Even misspelled Yautja.

Sir, i didn't spell anything wrong, my character name wasn't to be yautja, its yautza

[Adjective]

Well in response to your need for more posts and forum time is that it shows how active you are in the community. It shows you share your opinion in decisions and on ways to improve the game, as well as report toxic players and bugs when you come across them. Players on the forums have a higher community reputation than players that just play in the server; thus is the 1 month forum account rule. I for instance have never heard of your marine "Luca Oliveira", although that can easily be accounted for as timezone differentiation.

[NoShamNoWow]

Sir, i didn't spell anything wrong, my character name wasn't to be yautja, its yautza

Well in the end it doesn't really matter. You BARELY put any effort at all in this app. Look at other peoples apps, do you see how much they put in it? Getting whitelisted as a pred isn't going to be just handed to you by simply making a app.

[forwardslashN]

Why do i need to have some time in the forums and why i need to have lots of posts? its not like i don't play colonial marines since it released, i'm not saying i am a good player or a good RPer but having more posts make me a better player? i think majority of you guys already know Lucas Oliveira, i play a lot to not recognize me, i didn't posted that much in the forums because i was a little busy in lifeweb forums instead, but overall people can recognize me from the game without any posts, i just wanted to try something diferent playing as predator, because i like going melee with aliens and because predators can make honorable duels with marines.

Generally speaking, I think you should be active on the forums a little before applying. I'm honestly not that familiar with your character in CM, and forum activity really makes it easy to stick an identity to someone. "This guy posts a lot on the forums, yeah, I know who he is."

[lucashunter608]

Well in the end it doesn't really matter. You BARELY put any effort at all in this app. Look at other peoples apps, do you see how much they put in it? Getting whitelisted as a pred isn't going to be just handed to you by simply making a app.

as i said before, i would like to have new experiences, i could go for a more detailed description of my predator but i don't think i can change it now, and english is not my primary language, fatal gramatic errors may occur in big texts, i gotta say, i am a little dissapointed with my pred description too, maybe i can change it?

[TR-BlackDragon]

Im sorry to say Im not very impressed with this application, Your post length and account creation isnt that great either. Also lieing to staff is a good way to get instant denied.

Im going to have to give this application my......

-1

[Boltersam]

I've had experience with you, in game Lucas is very bitchy regarding attachments and reserving them, and once stopped the entire line at Cargo because the RO didn't reserve a barrel charger for his smartgun. My personal opinion of him isn't very high, and the application is very short, even being brief. The writing is poor, and he's said he's going to exclusively hunt aliens. It's been said before that predators need to be flexible, and a predator solely hunting one side is very crippling.

I'm going to give a -1.

[SagaSword]

You are an OK player. but your story is bad and you are not active ICly or OOCly. sorry m8 -1

[lucashunter608]

I've had experience with you, in game Lucas is very bitchy regarding attachments and reserving them, and once stopped the entire line at Cargo because the RO didn't reserve a barrel charger for his smartgun. My personal opinion of him isn't very high, and the application is very short, even being brief. The writing is poor, and he's said he's going to exclusively hunt aliens. It's been said before that predators need to be flexible, and a predator solely hunting one side is very crippling.

I'm going to give a -1.

about the cargo thing, i wasn't realy serious, i was just making a scene realy, i think it looked like i was stressed over the situation and all, but to be fair, i was just joking, anyway, i'm a pretty chill dude in the game, never got in a bad situation over a year playing, i feel very confident in my next app, i'm sure this is gonna be denied soon, so i will make a bigger story, sorry if i made some people a little dissapointed with me, i'll improve, i promise!

[apophis775]

I'm not the biggest fan with the grammar/wording.
One of the things I personally look for, is that people put thought and care into their applications, and while I'll usually ignore some grammar mistakes, so many works against you.

To clarify, Predators are basically super-powered death machines. They need players, who are going to take it more seriously. For now, I'm going to say denied.

I would suggest, that for your next application you put more thought into it, not necessarily the backstory, but the answers you give and detailing how you'll play.

DENIED - DATE OF DENIAL: 11MAY16