Zanziku'ja Nakuj'aku (Unblooded)

[Nickmun]

Byond ID:Main one is MasterOfTracking pretty much unused one is Nickmun.

Marine Name:For both of my accounts i mainly go by John Wright and Oli Goodwin.

Name of the character you want whitelisted:Zanziku'ja Nakuj'aku

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?:Yes Please let me know in game if something changes as im not always on the forum.

Character background:Zanziku'ja Nakuj'aku Would walk through bush and jungle to fine fair game with the goal of beating a predator a duel of honor,Or collecting more kills then the rest of the predators to be seen as higher up then equal or by a duel of the highest honor Zanziku'ja Nakuj'aku knows that it will require him to kill a predator in an agreed battle to the death.

How do you intend to play your predator?:i intend on finding fair game and haveing one on one duels where i fight my prey away from any other fair game and will only end the duel when one of us falls or someone decides to stop is in hostile interaction to me ill only see fair game as full condition or with enough will power man power or fire power to fight fairly if this is breaking a rule let me know

Why should we whitelist you?:well i feel like i could bring alot to the table in rp game events and coin flipping hunts

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason?:No i am only 75% sure i would prefer you check the logs knowing that if you do or if you dont i probs got banned in the last month

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?:No

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?:I understand as admins and donors are not above rules and if they are they are unbalancing a system where as long as theres proof of a broken rule anyone can be banned or have their status revoked in any form.

[Feweh]

Bad application, 1st post on the forums and no idea who you are.

-1

[LordeKilly]

Feweh did a good job of summing it up. This isn't anywhere close to what majority of the standards are for an application. -1.

[Nickmun]

Wtf i spent so much time on this only cause you havent seen me and this is my "first" post,i have applyed before i had not a single reply this is the best i can do now i have to wait a week before i can apply again and your gonna say the same thing cause i cant improve unlike others i try to rp as marines but no one else trys to rp all they do is run around flailing guns shooting aliens on sight before they attack or are confirmed hostile by others and im the worst on the forum.

[Feweh]

Wtf i spent so much time on this only cause you havent seen me and this is my "first" post,i have applyed before i had not a single reply this is the best i can do now i have to wait a week before i can apply again and your gonna say the same thing cause i cant improve unlike others i try to rp as marines but no one else trys to rp all they do is run around flailing guns shooting aliens on sight before they attack or are confirmed hostile by others and im the worst on the forum.

The fact that this is your response to criticism is the EXACT reason you'll most likely never be a Predator.

[Adjective]

Yeah I would normally sit neutral, but Feweh tends to near the negative side of staff criticism and we do look at how people respond to judgment. One vote does not justify a denial, but all the votes as a collective do influence the heads.

Your application is sub-par, you aren't really well social in either of your forum accounts, and your response to criticism isn't the best.

-1 from me

[LordeKilly]

Wtf i spent so much time on this only cause you havent seen me and this is my "first" post,i have applyed before i had not a single reply this is the best i can do now i have to wait a week before i can apply again and your gonna say the same thing cause i cant improve unlike others i try to rp as marines but no one else trys to rp all they do is run around flailing guns shooting aliens on sight before they attack or are confirmed hostile by others and im the worst on the forum.

The fact that you claim you can roleplay, yet you put "so much time and effort" into writing down a poorly constructed sentence for each answer isn't what the standards are for a predator application. You can either improve, or not apply. Simple as that.

[Nickmun]

This is the shit that pisses me off i always get told im not good and my app is bad but for fucking real the day i heard preds where in the game i wanted to be one i asked how and i was told by white listing that was the moment a noticed im fucked im not gonna get it i want to play pred and i dont mind the RP part but you guys are just flipping the middle finger at me and telling me that is poor quality how high are the damn standards? you have to be an ace at writing lie about what you can offer in rp and if you get white listed little do you know so many of everyone who applys just wants pred but does not wanna say the truth im not gonna lie im shit with writing typeing and thinking what to type and even shit at anger managing but at least i read the rules the code of honor and know its going to be rp if i get banned from it i get banned admins too i just want a chance at being pred instead of being shut down through out every time i have tried,i quote i may not be the best at typing or the one with the most redeeming qualitys that people look for for pred white listing but i at least read and understand the rules to pred end quote

[LordeKilly]

This is the shit that pisses me off i always get told im not good and my app is bad but for fucking real the day i heard preds where in the game i wanted to be one i asked how and i was told by white listing that was the moment a noticed im fucked im not gonna get it i want to play pred and i dont mind the RP part but you guys are just flipping the middle finger at me and telling me that is poor quality how high are the damn standards? you have to be an ace at writing lie about what you can offer in rp and if you get white listed little do you know so many of everyone who applys just wants pred but does not wanna say the truth im not gonna lie im shit with writing typeing and thinking what to type and even shit at anger managing but at least i read the rules the code of honor and know its going to be rp if i get banned from it i get banned admins too i just want a chance at being pred instead of being shut down through out every time i have tried,i quote i may not be the best at typing or the one with the most redeeming qualitys that people look for for pred white listing but i at least read and understand the rules to pred end quote

To be able to roleplay as a predator, you have to show you understand the lore and what predators value. Look at other applications. Your should look something like those, not something you did in like 5 minutes.

[Adjective]

If you really feel an application is not ready to be submitted, try showing it around to other people so that they can assist you with advice that doesn't come from your final submitted document. BEFORE you submit a document and get frustrated because it is not a quality that the staff desire to see in predator applications. As said before, the purpose of these applications is to show you have an in-depth understanding of predators and how we prefer to see them played on our server.

[LocalizedDownpour]

I'd like to point out you don't have to be regular poster in the forums or anything like that. Just having a month old forum account does the trick.

However I will agree with Feweh in the regard that you application doesn't seem to have alot of effort put into it, and I know with anything I see on a game changing role like this. Telling us in detail how you plan to play the rule and answering all our questions listed in the format above is super important. While reading other applications might help I recommend brushing up on some of the lore and writing a paragraph or two for a backstory as it doesn't have to be a light novel, however two sentences does not cut it. I'd also like to point out we take many things into account you wouldn't think of like grammar and the like, and while none of us are perfect you didn't seem to try, punctuation is key. Choosing to be a predator, and being selected to be among them is a big deal, and the Head Staff make a pretty big deal of selecting applicants, so much so that not everyone can be selected, and even those among staff are denied. So you app really has to stand out. I recommend that in this time that you have a block on your app you draw up a REALLY fleshed out backstory and play style. I am doing the same thing as I have to wait three months before I can reapply and I want to insure I have the best app available when that time comes.

I hope this constructive criticism helps you see what went wrong here, and how you can possibly improve.

[Nickmun]

please someone tell me why i tried to go and do something on the forums im terrible with this shit

[Nickmun]

Wtf i have a 1 month old account last time i checked it was made in 2015!!! and no it took me an hour and yes im takeing this personaly

[Boltersam]

Wtf i have a 1 month old account last time i checked it was made in 2015!!! and no it took me an hour and yes im takeing this personaly

Just adding my two cents, an hour is not a lot of time, and I quote:

"Wtf I spent so much time on this"

The people who get accepted put weeks, months even, of effort into their applications. Something you cobble together in an hour will not meet the standards set for the predator applications. Don't take it personally, and get angry, when your application is denied because of the lack of time and effort put into it.

[Nickmun]

At this point nothing i say will change shit so first of all fuck you guys second of all bolter get me fucking proof

[LordeKilly]

At this point nothing i say will change shit so first of all fuck you guys second of all bolter get me fucking proof

Toxic. I'd just tell you to not even re-apply when this one gets denied.

[Boltersam]

At this point nothing i say will change shit so first of all fuck you guys second of all bolter get me fucking proof

Proof of what?

[lucashunter608]

At this point nothing i say will change shit so first of all fuck you guys second of all bolter get me fucking proof

you should control yourself, i got an old account and still didn't got accepted, saw what apophis said? almost everyone will try to get whitelisted, thats why you need to put some effort in your app, i did a pretty bad app and i've saw the errors that i've made, try to post more, and be less toxic, re-think of you story, make it big, if you got anger problems, at least try to not say bad words, it just makes you reputation low.

[Ocnjak20]

Thats not the way to go bro. You are showing them why they should not pick you, not why they should pick you. Besides work on the form, add some colors and sum it up again some time. Read it few times and such things, Pred's are strong and hence why the admin team does not want someone who has no clue what they can do or how to use them inside of the game and outside of game.

[Adjective]

Thank you everyone for any constructive criticism, however I feel I should remind everyone this is an application. If at all possible avoid arguments if anything becomes disagreeable.

[TeknoKot]

I know this guy back from Aurora. Any kind of negativity triggers him. I wouldn't give him ANY whitelist at all, his 'characters' aren't even characters at all, he messes around a lot.

Everything is just poorly written and doesn't look as if much dedication was given either. -1, this guy isn't trustable with whitelists either.

[apophis775]

Due to the toxicity presented in response to criticism, I have to deny this.


DENIED - DATE OF DENIAL: 12MAY16

Feel free to re-apply in 3 months. I would suggest, between now and then, trying to get to know the player-base and community a bit more.