Vic'maro Ed'O-Kar - (Bloodied)

[SagaSword]

Byond ID:Sagasword

Marine Name (so we know who you are, if you play alien mostly, state that here):Saga 'Hunter' Madrik, i also play alien mostly

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name): Luar-ke Thwei

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?
Of course.

Character background (A very BRIEF description of your predators background):

Vic'maro, a new born baby in the Clan Ed'O-kar, Grew to be a fine hunter and that was his destiny. His first words learnt were Strength and Honor (thar'n-da s' yin'tekai) and he walked his path on these words to the end. Taking his first lessons, his prowess began to sharpen in time but his weakness was being reckless about learning and proving himself to the others, although it is good but it may prove him wrong in time.

Reaching his 80th, he decided to leave the planet and begin hunting on other planets, no matter what the obstacles were, Harsh Environment or Strong Prey, it never stopped him from reaching his goal. He created tools and weapons from whatever he could find and salvage, he learned how to make his prey afraid and lure it to death, his experience was his ultimate tool against the mighty preys that fought against him. Although he is smart and cunning, his recklessness almost made some preys take advantage over him sometimes and almost got killed by a Marine he was hunting.

40 Years have passed since his Training, and his first hunt has begun. His hunt was in an Ancient Temple where they send their offsprings for their Trial, he was accompanied by an Elite and another Young Blood like him, the second that their pod has landed he jumped out of it and began running to find his first kill. A Hunter, lurking infront of Vic'maro, Opening his Wrist Blades and engaging the Hunter with all his speed, cleaving his head and Marking himself with the first kill. Because of his speed and cunning he was able to kill the hordes facing him and meeting the queen before the other hunters.

His recklessness stroke again, as a praetorian Royal Guard ambushed him on the way to the queen, injuring his left arm. He Reacted fastly and slid under the praetorian, he jumped at his face from the back and swiftly cutting his head off, but he still couldn't use his left arm. Soon enough he had found the Queen of the hive, he stalked her and in the right time he jumped at the Queen with a Roar, but the Queen's speed was faster than him and was injured with the her tail attack that left him on the ground infront of her. As the Queen charged to him, he grabbed his shuriken and threw it at the leg of the Queen slicing it off.

With a Roar of Pain, The Queen began to Fluctuate and crawl all over the place. Vic'maro using all of his leftover strength to run to the Queen and parrying her attacks, striking at the right time he cut off her right hand and Sticked his Blades to the Queen's Skull While it is Fluctuating everywhere until she died of blood loss. He rose from the Ground and with a Winning Roar he shouted thar'n-da s' yin'tekai...Strength and Honor How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)?
my mission is to stalk and honorably duel those who show themself worthy for the hunt, other than that i will not hunt any marine or alien unless attacked first.

Why should we whitelist you?
I'm a good player, i may not act with anything that breaks a rule or a code of honor and i understand them very good. Plus I've been on the server since 3 or 4 months after it's release so i'm an old player but i don't hop in and play too much maybe once in a while back then.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?
Nah.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?
Nah.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?
Absolutely.

[Feweh]

4 post on the forums since aug and no idea who you are.
Having an account that long and making no attempts to really join the community is really worse than just making an account now.


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[LocalizedDownpour]

I'm aware of who you are, otherwise you application is 'okay' I say this in the sense there are some grammatical errors and people look at this when they determine which way to lean. Granted I also understand that English isn't everyone first language and mistakes can be made, otherwise I think you could be give a chance. +1

[SagaSword]

I'm aware of who you are, otherwise you application is 'okay' I say this in the sense there are some grammatical errors and people look at this when they determine which way to lean. Granted I also understand that English isn't everyone first language and mistakes can be made, otherwise I think you could be give a chance. +1

Thank you Localized, i try to be as fluent as i can with english but no one is perfect.

[SagaSword]

4 post on the forums since aug and no idea who you are.
Having an account that long and making no attempts to really join the community is really worse than just making an account now.


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I did join the community and it's not my problem that you don't know me. I'm a well known player and i even made friends. The thing is i don't really do any posting in the Forum but i talk a lot ICly.

[lucashunter608]

good player as marine, should be good as predator +1

[SagaSword]

good player as marine, should be good as predator +1

Thank you, hopefully I become a good predator

[SagaSword]

I forgot to mention that i know the Heavy responsibility of becoming a yautja, to make the round good and active with strong RP. So i may trick my prey and act with Honor, plus i'm really a very good RP player if given the chance.

[Feweh]

Need feedback on this, has actually inproved forum activity.

[forwardslashN]

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Due to a recent rule-related event.

[Feweh]

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Due to a recent rule-related event.

Explain

[forwardslashN]

Explain

Shot a person to death for little reason, punished.

[SagaSword]

Shot a person to death for little reason, punished.

i did a mistake, everyone made a mistake. Just because i broke a rule (accidentally) doesn't mean i'm a bad person and fucked up the whole server.
Plus i died 2 times in this particular round and got tased for no reason i had to make a quick decision. Not the best one though, you can read my appeal for info.
Your way of talking changed though since you became mentor, i expected you to be merciful for your punishments, and punishments have limits . Doesn't everyone need another chance?
And now you know me well feweh so no reason for you to deny me. :P
Hopefully when i get accepted i will be more and very careful and precise about my actions and rules, as i know it's a big responsibility and the preds are OPed, if i do wrong you can always deny my whitelist app after i break a rule and i can never post again, i need a chance to prove myself.

[forwardslashN]

i did a mistake, everyone made a mistake. Just because i broke a rule (accidentally) doesn't mean i'm a bad person and fucked up the whole server.
Plus i died 2 times in this particular round and got tased for no reason i had to make a quick decision. Not the best one though, you can read my appeal for info.
Your way of talking changed though since you became mentor, i expected you to be merciful for your punishments, and punishments have limits . Doesn't everyone need another chance?
And now you know me well feweh so no reason for you to deny me. :P
Hopefully when i get accepted i will be more and very careful and precise about my actions and rules, as i know it's a big responsibility and the preds are OPed, if i do wrong you can always deny my whitelist app after i break a rule and i can never post again, i need a chance to prove myself.

Mistakes are fine, and nobody is perfect. You can reapply in three months, so you are not automatically denied in the future.

[SagaSword]

Mistakes are fine, and nobody is perfect. You can reapply in three months, so you are not automatically denied in the future.

Well, thank you for looking up to me not to get denied forever in the future.

[Feweh]

Denied, application was on the border but with that recent ban its gone negative.

Severely need to boost your forum activity as well.