Yutja Apply Ka'Torag-na Admeha(Lurking Meat)

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Yutja Apply Ka'Torag-na Admeha(Lurking Meat)

Post by Ocnjak20 » 05 Jun 2016, 09:47

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Marine Name (so we know who you are, if you play alien mostly, state that here): Rylan Wise, I also do play Alien quite a lot too.

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name): Ka'Torag-na Admeha

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor? Yes, I have understood and I am familiar with Predator Code Of Honor.

Character background (A very BRIEF description of your predators background):

First Hunt and arrival:
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First Encounter:
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End of the Hunt:
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Return to the Mothership:
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How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)?

My Yutja will be the one to seek the perfect prey, he will usually try to cause panic in the Marines and Xeno lines simultaneously with his plasma caster and picking off the honorable prey when he can. He will usually have someone with him to guide him as he is fresh blooded Hunter, until he finally ascends further into the clan ranks of course and is ready to act on his own. What he will do is stalk, even the odds to his favor of reaching his prey, kill his prey and observe how the things will play out.

Usually when he is about to hunt down his prey, he wont use plasma caster unless it is his last resort. It will usually be used to cause panic in the lines of where his Honorable Prey is in order to hunt it down efficiently. When he hunts it down, the Yutja will continue on hunting but it will be even so he does not mess up the balance of the game.

Yes it is entirely possible to Roleplay with Marines if they do not go trigger happy, actually I look forward to that because I know that some people in Marines seek the RP on the planet but rarely get any. Same goes with Xeno's if they want to RP and not only kill and destroy it is an possible to create some RP with them as well.

Why should we whitelist you?

Well, I am mature enough not to engage in pointless arguements, I do like to listen to people and their opinions and am active on the Chat box, forums and game as much as I can be. Feweh has told me to do that and I have taken his advice which was awesome, I am not sure if he is yet pleased with my activity but we will find out soon enough. I really do enjoy playing and the community on both forums and the game.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)? Nope.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why? Nope.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor? I understand and completely agree with it.

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Re: Yutja Apply Ka'Torag-na Admeha(Lurking Meat)

Post by coolsurf6 » 05 Jun 2016, 10:41

I am all for RPing on the planet, even though your forum account is quite new but you have 58 posts and joined on my 15 birthday so that is a plus.

So I read though it and I thinks it's a unique story. Was not cringe in the slightest. Towards the end I got a bit confused on what was going on but a lot of detail and effort was put into this.

Just some feedback from me.

+1
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Re: Yutja Apply Ka'Torag-na Admeha(Lurking Meat)

Post by SecretStamos (Joshuu) » 05 Jun 2016, 11:09

Rare to see so much effort in an application. The organization and layout of the application is really nice.

My only concern is that I don't recognize you. Otherwise a +1 from me.

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Re: Yutja Apply Ka'Torag-na Admeha(Lurking Meat)

Post by Ocnjak20 » 05 Jun 2016, 11:10

coolsurf6 wrote:I am all for RPing on the planet, even though your forum account is quite new but you have 58 posts and joined on my 15 birthday so that is a plus.

So I read though it and I thinks it's a unique story. Was not cringe in the slightest. Towards the end I got a bit confused on what was going on but a lot of detail and effort was put into this.

Just some feedback from me.

+1
Allright, thank you. Just to clear any confusion. Ka'Torag-na was sent to the planet for his first hunt. What happened to the planet was that some smart ass has opened the "Chamber of Hunters" and unleashed Xenomorphs from that chamber onto planet. Year after that the entire population was infestated and killed off while Xenomorphs were running wild around and killing, infecting and destroying anything that can be destroyed.

Why nobody has noticed it? Because the Youngbloods have been sent out to different planets to Hunt and it was just some random luck I guess for him to get that planet and two other hunters, I hate one side macho stories anyway so why not implement two more hunters and go after the Queen to cut off the root of the problem and let Xenomorph's to die out without their Queen or kill each other. Queen is big deal so I have had to made two other Yutja's as the youngblood usually go in the team of threes after the Queen.

Also I have left the future for that character opened for one reason, I did not specify how he will end and because he is newly blooded hunter I have made custom story of him leaving with his Tutor so he can learn even more by hunting and learning more from his tutor while hunting and taping until he is ready to ascend even further into ranks. When it comes to IC at least. When it comes to OOC even if I get whitelisted for predator I wont play it alone since I will be new to it and will need someone to guide me through how to properly play it, I know the code and will ask for admin permission for stuff that might be game changer if there is no Tutor to guide my character.

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Re: Yutja Apply Ka'Torag-na Admeha(Lurking Meat)

Post by Ocnjak20 » 05 Jun 2016, 11:11

SecretStamos (Joshuu) wrote:Rare to see so much effort in an application. The organization and layout of the application is really nice.

My only concern is that I don't recognize you. Otherwise a +1 from me.
Ah, allright, thank you for the thumbs up and I hope that you will meet me in the game here and then.

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Post by Feweh » 05 Jun 2016, 16:02

I honestly have no idea who you are in-game or on the forums.

Your application shows a lot of effort, which is great.
You're in the exact opposite position of some of our more well known players. You made a really good application but I don't have any idea who you are, so you're missing a crucial part for my approval.

I'll sit at neutral for probably a month and start looking out for you in-game.

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Post by Varnock » 05 Jun 2016, 16:11

If it helps I've seen them often in the wee hours when I tend to play.

From my time chatting with them in minichat they seem pretty chill too.

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Re: Yutja Apply Ka'Torag-na Admeha(Lurking Meat)

Post by Ocnjak20 » 05 Jun 2016, 16:16

Feweh wrote:I honestly have no idea who you are in-game or on the forums.

Your application shows a lot of effort, which is great.
You're in the exact opposite position of some of our more well known players. You made a really good application but I don't have any idea who you are, so you're missing a crucial part for my approval.

I'll sit at neutral for probably a month and start looking out for you in-game.
Allright, thank you for the review and reply on my application. I guess that I can blame the time zone for our lack of interaction within the game as I am in CET and you come online when I usually go to bed to rest.

I will try my best to keep on being active on forums and in the community as best as I can.

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Post by forwardslashN » 05 Jun 2016, 16:46

I'm familiar with you in game, but you need to be a little more active. Story was okay, but I would have preferred to see more about your predator's personality/who they are. You put a lot more effort into this and a lot of other people, so that's obviously a point for you. I'll come back to this later.

Edit: Going to remain neutral.
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Post by coolsurf6 » 06 Jun 2016, 00:50

http://cm-ss13.com/viewtopic.php?f=57&t=6620
I could recommend hopping on discord and talk to some people to get known on it. Even if you cant play you could hop on and chat with some admins or players.

Dont be shy its not like the admins are gonna bite you ;)
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Re: Yutja Apply Ka'Torag-na Admeha(Lurking Meat)

Post by Ocnjak20 » 06 Jun 2016, 07:15

coolsurf6 wrote:http://cm-ss13.com/viewtopic.php?f=57&t=6620
I could recommend hopping on discord and talk to some people to get known on it. Even if you cant play you could hop on and chat with some admins or players.

Dont be shy its not like the admins are gonna bite you ;)
I was there before, but people were not chatting that much. Going to activate there as well.

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Re: Yutja Apply Ka'Torag-na Admeha(Lurking Meat)

Post by Ocnjak20 » 07 Jun 2016, 04:48

Noize wrote:I'm familiar with you in game, but you need to be a little more active. Story was okay, but I would have preferred to see more about your predator's personality/who they are. You put a lot more effort into this and a lot of other people, so that's obviously a point for you. I'll come back to this later.
Sorry for not replying on it sooner, I will write a little bit more about my Yutja's personality because I want him to be somewhat neutral and have no grudges or any bad behavior when it comes to Yutja. However he has been raised in solitude so that is why he has picked up a lot of behavior from his Tutor. I could not specify anything and that is why I have written a little story about my character.

Ka'Torag-na Admeha:

Unblooded:
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Mothership:
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First Hunt:
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Ceremony:
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Re: Yutja Apply Ka'Torag-na Admeha(Lurking Meat)

Post by Feweh » 27 Jun 2016, 17:38

Further feedback needed from the Predator Community.
This application will either be denied or accepted by the end of this week.

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Re: Yutja Apply Ka'Torag-na Admeha(Lurking Meat)

Post by coolsurf6 » 29 Jun 2016, 07:38

I've seen you more ingame and on discord and your a pretty chill person. You definitly can become apart of the predator community (that i will soon join).
The FitnessGram™ Pacer Test is a multistage aerobic capacity test that progressively gets more difficult as it continues. The 20 meter pacer test will begin in 30 seconds. Line up at the start. The running speed starts slowly, but gets faster each minute after you hear this signal. [beep] A single lap should be completed each time you hear this sound. [ding] Remember to run in a straight line, and run as long as possible. The second time you fail to complete a lap before the sound, your test is over. The test will begin on the word start. On your mark, get ready, start.

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Post by Tristan63 » 30 Jun 2016, 14:18

Application is great, however like what Feweh said I do not know you ingame.
I'll give you a +1 for the good application, I hope to see you ingame soon.

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Post by Feweh » 01 Jul 2016, 18:16

See you active in-game and you're active within the community

Edit: due to recent events and note history im changing to Neutral.

Stickied for final review.

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Post by Ocnjak20 » 04 Jul 2016, 17:43

Thank you everyone, I will make sure not to let you down ^^

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Post by Sarah_U. » 13 Jul 2016, 08:30

At the moment I'm too innexperienced in actual predator gameplay, but from what I've seen your predator would most likely be pretty standard with most others.
The fact you want to roleplay is a big plus to me, and your app was quite well done...
I've seen you around, and you've generally gotten a possitive attitude, I'll pass you my support to see more of your abilities and maybe RP with you!

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Post by Boltersam » 21 Jul 2016, 10:37

-I apparently haven't posted on this one yet, I'll rectify it.

You made several stories, which many predator applications will lack, and at the same time they're all high quality, whereas apps with only one story will usually have minimal effort and spellchecking.

I can't say I know you ingame, but if you're willing to put this much effort into an app, you're probably willing to put a similar amount of effort into making the round better. +1.

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Post by Feweh » 29 Jul 2016, 16:51

Denied.

You've made some off-hand comments lately in-game and your RP has dropped.
Furthermore, you haven't passed final review.

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