Cetanu Bhu'ja(Black Warrior Ghost) - Xur's App
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Cetanu Bhu'ja(Black Warrior Ghost) - Xur's App
Byond ID: Xurphorus
Marine Name (so we know who you are, if you play alien mostly, state that here): Xur''Ghost''Dergens
Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name): Cetanu Bhu'ja ( Black Warrior Ghost)
Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?
I've grown up watching the predator movies, Watched how whitelisted players handle themselves, and have found myself lucky to be apart of the events that have taken place in the past. I am very aware of what should and should not be done. I'm familiar.
Character background (A very BRIEF description of your predators background):
Still young, and filled with determination, Cetanu Bhu'ja has aspirations to reach the level of elite amongst his clansman. His goal is to become a Wolf, a Yuatja that hunts the R'ka, and is also tasked with ''cleaning''. Covering up the mistakes of others, and making sure nothing is left of their presence so that foreign species don't know of them. He matured by surviving along the outskirts of a world where the strongest, and most skilled may be called powerful. The time came where he was ready for the trials, he trained endlessly to perfect his skill, he honed his mind and body for the obstacles that may come his way. Bhu'ja came across many different creatures that posed to be worth the hunt but he found the feeling to be lack luster, something was missing. He wanted to hunt something that would prove to be the righteous kill. He wanted face something that would not only make him known amongst the ranks of his fellow Yuatja, but give him the yearning satisfaction to be a full-fledged hunter. The trials were his pathway towards this desire, the way he stalked his prey in the cover of night, not making a sound, quickly earned him the right to hunt amongst the others as a young-blood. With this his clan leader bestowed the name Bhu'ja or Ghost in the language of the Oomans. He began to excel with pointed weapons such as combi-sticks, and glaives, but he preferred his own straight spear his fashioned out of the teeth of his first kill. The day for the ''Rite'' drew closer, knowing this Bhu'ja waited patiently for the time to prove himself to the elders that he is more than just a Young Blood.
How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)? I intend to play my predator much how I play my CM character. I intend to play as a Wolf, as noted in my background. If the elders see fit that Aliens or Humans need to be cleansed then that is what I shall do. I will respect my Clan elders, and follow their ways as a youngling/unblooded should, but I intend to raise up the ranks. My play style will lean more towards the stealthy killer, choosing those who are either worthy prey, or come across stolen Yuatja artifacts. I will use scare tactics, and mind games RP wise to add spice to any situation. I wont hunt any aliens unless they are Mature t2 and above unless that's against the rules. I'm gonna stick to the shadows and only hunt on the grounds of the Jungle temple or the Tomb of the elders, if I find myself outside any of these areas only means that I have found some worthy prey or something has peaked my curiosity.
Why should we whitelist you?
I'm a known player, I'm somewhat opinionated, but I'm respectful. I wont cause any trouble as a predator unless trouble finds me. I will respectfully uphold the code of honor, and diligently follow the orders of the elders and rules. I intend on being the kind of predator the RPs, and only acts if the Elder commanders it. I don't want to be whitelisted on reputation alone, but the elements I can bring to a round with other players.
Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?None that I can think of at this moment.
Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why? N/A
Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor? Yes, I'm aware. I will do all that I can to follow proper rules and procedure as a whitelisted player.
Marine Name (so we know who you are, if you play alien mostly, state that here): Xur''Ghost''Dergens
Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name): Cetanu Bhu'ja ( Black Warrior Ghost)
Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?
I've grown up watching the predator movies, Watched how whitelisted players handle themselves, and have found myself lucky to be apart of the events that have taken place in the past. I am very aware of what should and should not be done. I'm familiar.
Character background (A very BRIEF description of your predators background):
Still young, and filled with determination, Cetanu Bhu'ja has aspirations to reach the level of elite amongst his clansman. His goal is to become a Wolf, a Yuatja that hunts the R'ka, and is also tasked with ''cleaning''. Covering up the mistakes of others, and making sure nothing is left of their presence so that foreign species don't know of them. He matured by surviving along the outskirts of a world where the strongest, and most skilled may be called powerful. The time came where he was ready for the trials, he trained endlessly to perfect his skill, he honed his mind and body for the obstacles that may come his way. Bhu'ja came across many different creatures that posed to be worth the hunt but he found the feeling to be lack luster, something was missing. He wanted to hunt something that would prove to be the righteous kill. He wanted face something that would not only make him known amongst the ranks of his fellow Yuatja, but give him the yearning satisfaction to be a full-fledged hunter. The trials were his pathway towards this desire, the way he stalked his prey in the cover of night, not making a sound, quickly earned him the right to hunt amongst the others as a young-blood. With this his clan leader bestowed the name Bhu'ja or Ghost in the language of the Oomans. He began to excel with pointed weapons such as combi-sticks, and glaives, but he preferred his own straight spear his fashioned out of the teeth of his first kill. The day for the ''Rite'' drew closer, knowing this Bhu'ja waited patiently for the time to prove himself to the elders that he is more than just a Young Blood.
How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)? I intend to play my predator much how I play my CM character. I intend to play as a Wolf, as noted in my background. If the elders see fit that Aliens or Humans need to be cleansed then that is what I shall do. I will respect my Clan elders, and follow their ways as a youngling/unblooded should, but I intend to raise up the ranks. My play style will lean more towards the stealthy killer, choosing those who are either worthy prey, or come across stolen Yuatja artifacts. I will use scare tactics, and mind games RP wise to add spice to any situation. I wont hunt any aliens unless they are Mature t2 and above unless that's against the rules. I'm gonna stick to the shadows and only hunt on the grounds of the Jungle temple or the Tomb of the elders, if I find myself outside any of these areas only means that I have found some worthy prey or something has peaked my curiosity.
Why should we whitelist you?
I'm a known player, I'm somewhat opinionated, but I'm respectful. I wont cause any trouble as a predator unless trouble finds me. I will respectfully uphold the code of honor, and diligently follow the orders of the elders and rules. I intend on being the kind of predator the RPs, and only acts if the Elder commanders it. I don't want to be whitelisted on reputation alone, but the elements I can bring to a round with other players.
Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?None that I can think of at this moment.
Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why? N/A
Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor? Yes, I'm aware. I will do all that I can to follow proper rules and procedure as a whitelisted player.
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Re: Cetanu Bhu'ja(Black Warrior Ghost) - Xur's App
You're a good player, and active in the community. The main thing I see is that you have the same last name/clan name as another whitelisted pred, and you'll need to get permission to use that name.
I also think that preds need to be more aggressively neutral, and be comfortable with getting a trophy and then largely being passive or simply defending the lodge the rest of the round. While in the movies they attempt to eradicate all the xenos, for the purposes of our server it's better if you make it interesting but aren't majorly involved in the flow of the round.
I'm currently at neutral but will move to +1 if you get permission from the other pred(s) whose clan is Bhu'ja
I also think that preds need to be more aggressively neutral, and be comfortable with getting a trophy and then largely being passive or simply defending the lodge the rest of the round. While in the movies they attempt to eradicate all the xenos, for the purposes of our server it's better if you make it interesting but aren't majorly involved in the flow of the round.
I'm currently at neutral but will move to +1 if you get permission from the other pred(s) whose clan is Bhu'ja
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Re: Cetanu Bhu'ja(Black Warrior Ghost) - Xur's App
Very active and a realy cool player to be around, robust as a marine and should be robust as a predator, only thing that doesn't feel right is the story, its too short, but overall great app +1
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Re: Cetanu Bhu'ja(Black Warrior Ghost) - Xur's App
There a two different preds with the Bhu'ja in their names, but Im guessing I would have to ask ShortTemp because he was the first with the name correct?
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Re: Cetanu Bhu'ja(Black Warrior Ghost) - Xur's App
I would contact both, as it is likely to play into your interactions, but STL's permission should be sufficient. I don't see it being an issue in any case.Xurphorus wrote:There a two different preds with the Bhu'ja in their names, but Im guessing I would have to ask ShortTemp because he was the first with the name correct?
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Re: Cetanu Bhu'ja(Black Warrior Ghost) - Xur's App
+1 from a moderators perspective.
Although my input doesn't matter much and you need +1s from preds.
Although my input doesn't matter much and you need +1s from preds.
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Re: Cetanu Bhu'ja(Black Warrior Ghost) - Xur's App
Black Warrior Ghost.
Lmao
Lmao
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Re: Cetanu Bhu'ja(Black Warrior Ghost) - Xur's App
I know you're a good player, I've seen you often on the server, and you're liked by many people. The application is average, and the choice of name is...Strange.
You're either Black Warrior Ghost
Or, the much edgier, Death Ghost. The Black Warrior being Death in Yautja culture.
To edge, or not to edge? Zat, is ze question!
+1.
You're either Black Warrior Ghost
Or, the much edgier, Death Ghost. The Black Warrior being Death in Yautja culture.
To edge, or not to edge? Zat, is ze question!
+1.
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Re: Cetanu Bhu'ja(Black Warrior Ghost) - Xur's App
I wanted it to be the Booty Warrior but that seems to have been taken elsewhere.
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Re: Cetanu Bhu'ja(Black Warrior Ghost) - Xur's App
Black
Warrior
Death
Is this Xur?
Warrior
Death
Is this Xur?
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Re: Cetanu Bhu'ja(Black Warrior Ghost) - Xur's App
DeadLantern wrote:Black
Warrior
Death
Is this Xur?
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Re: Cetanu Bhu'ja(Black Warrior Ghost) - Xur's App
Black Warrior is also Death. Bhu'ja means Ghost.DeadLantern wrote:Black
Warrior
Death
Is this Xur?
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Re: Cetanu Bhu'ja(Black Warrior Ghost) - Xur's App
+1
That name... I would prefer that your predator wasn't Xur "Ghost" Durgens, or in this case the literal god of death, but someone completely different. This is still a lot better than your previous app, and I'm willing to give you a shot.
That name... I would prefer that your predator wasn't Xur "Ghost" Durgens, or in this case the literal god of death, but someone completely different. This is still a lot better than your previous app, and I'm willing to give you a shot.
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Re: Cetanu Bhu'ja(Black Warrior Ghost) - Xur's App
+1. Why the hell not. He got my permission to use the Bhu'ja name, willing to give him a shot, long as your not a knock off paya, because then we WILL have issues.
Best of luck xur.
Best of luck xur.
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Re: Cetanu Bhu'ja(Black Warrior Ghost) - Xur's App
Should've said this sooner, you've got my permission too.
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Re: Cetanu Bhu'ja(Black Warrior Ghost) - Xur's App
My biggest issue with you is how fucking slow you type.
RPing with you sucks at times because it takes you awhilr to type.
I think I remember you saying it was a keyboard/mouse issue? Has this been fixed yet? I ask because Predators needs to be quick with RP, standing around causes a lot of conflict.
RPing with you sucks at times because it takes you awhilr to type.
I think I remember you saying it was a keyboard/mouse issue? Has this been fixed yet? I ask because Predators needs to be quick with RP, standing around causes a lot of conflict.
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Re: Cetanu Bhu'ja(Black Warrior Ghost) - Xur's App
I think you mean you prefer it's not a PredaXur.forwardslashN wrote:+1
That name... I would prefer that your predator wasn't Xur "Ghost" Durgens, or in this case the literal god of death, but someone completely different. This is still a lot better than your previous app, and I'm willing to give you a shot.
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Re: Cetanu Bhu'ja(Black Warrior Ghost) - Xur's App
Keyboard issue is fixed, its the mouse that needs to be replaced now, I just have to hard click most of the time. I wont let it get in the way of RP between the others.Feweh wrote:My biggest issue with you is how fucking slow you type.
RPing with you sucks at times because it takes you awhilr to type.
I think I remember you saying it was a keyboard/mouse issue? Has this been fixed yet? I ask because Predators needs to be quick with RP, standing around causes a lot of conflict.
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good. you have to type fast, and be ready to run faster.Xurphorus wrote: Keyboard issue is fixed, its the mouse that needs to be replaced now, I just have to hard click most of the time. I wont let it get in the way of RP between the others.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9dA6plQFKzY Scotty Hardy: Resident loud mouth, smart assed Irishman. Gahn'tha-cte Bhu'ja: Honorable duelist, beserker charger, jungle hunter.
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Re: Cetanu Bhu'ja(Black Warrior Ghost) - Xur's App
Pred'a'Xur.Toroic wrote: I think you mean you prefer it's not a PredaXur.
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+1, the app was decent. He is a very well known player, that is exceptional at RP. This app being more refined than his last shows his effort and dedication. Pred'a'Xur kicking ass and taking names? The name is bit wonky though in my opinion.
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Re: Cetanu Bhu'ja(Black Warrior Ghost) - Xur's App
I'm pretty alright with it and I'd like to see you as a predator. Not entirely because I deem you a super special person for it, but because I deem you worth the title and you've the ancestry to actually uphold the spot and try to do something. Furthermore, I'm good with your app and allowing you this role would most likely offer you chances to take a new type of role and relax if you still play SL-Xur.
All in all, I'm alright with it, and want to see the Pred'a'Xur, even supporting the motion that we rename it to that (Bhu'ja such common word now-a-day) .
All in all, I'm alright with it, and want to see the Pred'a'Xur, even supporting the motion that we rename it to that (Bhu'ja such common word now-a-day) .
CM was obviously inspired by Starcraft: Ghost opening. At least when marines takes too long to deploy.
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Re: Cetanu Bhu'ja(Black Warrior Ghost) - Xur's App
Stickied for final review.
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Re: Cetanu Bhu'ja(Black Warrior Ghost) - Xur's App
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Re: Cetanu Bhu'ja(Black Warrior Ghost) - Xur's App
+1 I've met Xur's character a few times. He's a great and capable squad leader who can deal with the stress of managing many marines at the same time. I wouldn't mind seeing him as a predator.
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