Setg'in Ikthya-de (Deadly Umbra) Riqpley_dagasd (Lorenzo_lol) pred app

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Setg'in Ikthya-de (Deadly Umbra) Riqpley_dagasd (Lorenzo_lol) pred app

Post by UNKNOWN » 09 Oct 2016, 16:31

Byond ID:
Riqpley_dagasd (my first account was Lorenzo_lol)

Marine Name (so we know who you are, if you play alien mostly, state that here):
i play as Jamari Thomlingson, i played a long time ago as Robert Phillips and Hamilton Kenway.


Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name):
Segt'in Ikthya-de

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?
Yes, i readed it a lot of times and i will have it ALWAYS next to me, written in a paper, and i will see it before planning in hunting a prey.

Character background (A very BRIEF description of your predators background):
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How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)?

My goal is make the round funnier making some fear on the marines, example: I see that marines are bored on the FOB. I plan something to make the round funny for them, like appearing, then disappearing, speaking to them on the darkness, i can hunt a marine, stalk him for a while, record some of his phrases, kill it, and then play it back to his partners, etc. Something i want to do is, with the staff approval, try to board the Sulaco cloaked and Roleplay with the medical, command, engineering personnel, (not killing innocent people, of course).

Why should we whitelist you?

As i said before, i want to make the round funnier, Roleplaying with the bored marines, and xenos. I don't want to be that Yautja that just kills, i want to be that Yautja that helps the marines sometimes, i would like so much to RP as a pred because i will not just kill, hunt, kill, hunt, i will try to play as passive as i can, trying to speak with the marines, helping them, teaching them about the xenos, etc.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?
Nopey nope.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?

Well, i was perma-banned from the Hippie station for gibbing people by no reason, but this was when i was new on the SS13 and i didn't knew it had RP.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?

Yes, i understand.

I'm sorry if you guys find any gramatical errors, in really, i'm not north american.

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Re: Setg'in Ikthya-de (Deadly Umbra) Riqpley_dagasd (Lorenzo_lol) pred app

Post by username123 » 09 Oct 2016, 16:44

Ayyy lmao auto denied.

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Re: Setg'in Ikthya-de (Deadly Umbra) Riqpley_dagasd (Lorenzo_lol) pred app

Post by SecretStamos (Joshuu) » 09 Oct 2016, 16:56

As i said before, i want to make the round funnier, Roleplaying with the bored marines, and xenos. I don't want to be that Yautja that just kills,
You've got this part right at least. So I think you're on the right track with this fundamentally.

Though I think your application could, in general, use a bit more content, formatting and overall polish. Proper punctuation and spelling are something you should spend a little more time on.
You should also probably work on forum activity a bit more. I do recognize one of your names, though I can't exactly recall your actions in game. Having only a single post on your account is not a very good sign, so I'd recommend improving that.

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Re: Setg'in Ikthya-de (Deadly Umbra) Riqpley_dagasd (Lorenzo_lol) pred app

Post by Sarah_U. » 09 Oct 2016, 17:44

I'll comment on this when activity and grammar improve. I'm North American (Canadian) too and I try my best to make the text enjoyable for the readers. With a role heavely focused on RP (To some degrees) perhaps you may want to have that part improved as it will come to be used frequently compared to a xeno/marine spamming-fest... 'cause we don't need grammar to garble the translators when they're already that garbled ;P

(Hope you take no offense to that, I've been studying english for years on english-only communities to educate myself and I've become relatively eased in the language... I just want to pass the word that grammar is important too and that if you improve I may review my judgement).
CM was obviously inspired by Starcraft: Ghost opening. At least when marines takes too long to deploy.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F4JSohL ... e=youtu.be
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Re: Setg'in Ikthya-de (Deadly Umbra) Riqpley_dagasd (Lorenzo_lol) pred app

Post by freemysoul » 14 Oct 2016, 17:37

Haven't a good clue who you are on the server (which can be a good thing and a bad thing), You've posted ONE post and that being this pred app. I'm going to with a -1 leaning towards a Neutral.

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Re: Setg'in Ikthya-de (Deadly Umbra) Riqpley_dagasd (Lorenzo_lol) pred app

Post by Boltersam » 14 Oct 2016, 17:49

Short, grammar is a problem, don't know who you are though I vaguely remember Lorenzo, a playstyle solely intent on interacting with one side, completely ignoring the other and due to having only a single post it appears as if you made this account solely to become a Predator.

-1.

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Re: Setg'in Ikthya-de (Deadly Umbra) Riqpley_dagasd (Lorenzo_lol) pred app

Post by Feweh » 14 Oct 2016, 18:10

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