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A Short Fanmade Inspirational Story - Part 1

Post by UnknownMurder » 14 May 2017, 22:17

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The Incident at Big Red

I understand that there is no elevator in Lambda Lab. I understand that Alpha Squad is too little. I understand that Telecommunication and Power can be turned on easily. This is really all just for the sake of the story, I'm trying to be J.J. Abrams here. This story is entirely fictitious and has no relevance with the real life events.

Something bizarre is happening on Big Red, distress signal was sent, no clue why. USCM Sulaco of the 501st Legion, arriving at the colony, Bravo, Charlie, and Delta Squads goes to investigate more on the situation to Big Red. The squads have gone under complete blackout, telecommunications were down and could not be set up. Alpha Squad positioned at the FoB, sent in to find out what is going on. The team, comprised of Alpha Squad Leader William Crimson, Engineer Alex Graves, Medic Alex Crossman, Squad Marine Oosala Wooki, and Squad Marine Axel Strife. They find strange mysterious goings on. There are outlandish reports of marines being attacked by a group of about ten creatures. Victims... apparently have a hole on their chest. including the blood trails to the Chapel and finding several remains on the altar, scalped. William Crimson realized, we're not alone. They retreat into Lambda Lab where the horror and terror begins.

HISSSSSS! SCREEE! SCREEE! ROAR! ROAR! *dance*

"Close the door and make sure it's secured long enough to stall them from coming to us!" declared Crimson!

Alex Graves, welding the airlocks together while sweating as Oosala Wooki and Axel Strife takes point, Alex Crossman being in the back wih Graves "I can't believe we just abandoned the rest of the Alpha Squad just for our own survival," muttered Crossman.

Axel Strife suddenly blurts out, "That's it!"

replied Wooki, "What's up, Strife?"

Strife exlaimed, "I've come up with a new recipe!"

"I can't wait to try it," chuckled Graves.

Crimson barked, "You three shut the hell up! Crossman, their sacrifices weren't in vain! Come on, let's keep moving! We need to find a way out right now!" Everyone could hear, they were being followed down the hallway stealthily by the black creatures reptilians, Xenomorphs.

"Go! I'll take care of them, " cried Wooki.

Crossman replied, "We can't afford to lose you, Wooki! You're too smart for this! We can sacrifice someone else!" Crossman pulled Axel Strife by his collar and pushed him in toward of the Xenomorphs, "YOU BASTAAA-"

"Well, that's another red shirt down, let's keep moving while he sacrificed himself," Crimson uttered. They approached to an elevator and got into the elevator, but something is missing but didn't hit the Squad Leader right. Graves said, "What's the matter, Crimson?" inspects the APC,

"Where's the power, Graves?"

"Power? Commander Carson told said the power was Bravo's job."

"Don't listen to Carson, Graves. "

". . . I was told that the power was o-"

"No, Graves. The Bravo Squad is dead. We're climbing now."

Crimson, Wooki, Graves, and Crossman pulled a feat of teamwork of jumping through the trapdoor on the ceiling. A large hissing noise was heard all over the lambda lab. That second, mankind received a grim reminder. We cowered in fear of the Queen and were disgraced to live in these cages we called barricades. Get to the rappels and start rappelling down before they start coming toward to us! Shotgun buckshot fires were heard from the direction of the elevator, "Oh. That boy's still alive. He always survive." said Wooki. They begin to rappel down the elevator tunnel shaft.

The remaining of Alpha Squad has reached to the first floor, followed by Crimson. "Alright. No time for breathers, time for change of plans. Crossman, Wooki, you go together and search for escape route. I have this station bounced radio if you ever need to reach me. Graves, you're with me to to find survivors."

Crossman and Wooki marched, "HUP! HUP! HUP!" in the opposite direction as Graves and Crimson are walking in hallway with offices. "Graves, we split up here. You check that side and I'll check this side." He gestures to many doors on each sides of the hallway. After each sweeps in each door, Crimson finds a disfigured marine of the Delta Squad, a survivor covered in blood! Hold up!" called Crimson! "We got a survivor here!" The survivor is missing a helmet, legs, and his eyes!

The survivor gasping for breath, "Th-There i- is a co-cons-conspirat-tor..." he gasps to take another breath, "in t-t-the U-United States Co-Colon-nial M-M-Marines. T-The-There is a ri-ride ou-out a-at the e-end of t-the medic-"

"WHO!?" shouted Crimson! Graves appearing to be alerted, standing over Crimson.

"We-Weyland Yutani..." survivor marine said with his final dying breath, blood drooling from his lip, his head now hanging over his chest. Alex Graves would then begin to check him for ammunition while Crimson would pull off the golden dog tag from the survivor's neck. The golden dog tag reads, "Noah T. Kirchner, Combat Engineer, U.S.S. Sulaco, 501st Legion"

Graves would take a step back, slowly beginning to draw out his holdout pistol slowly aiming for Squad Leader Crimson's nape. Gunfires erupted down in the hallway at a far distance. "This is Wooki, we're getting swarmed, we're heading to your location!" buzzed the station bounced radio. "Meet me at the end of the medical hallway, it's our ride out." Crimson screamed into the station bounced radio. Graves pulls the trigger!

*CLICK* Oh Fuck.

Crimson hearing the sound within a milli-second of the click from the pistol, shoulder charging at Graves, throwing him down, fighting for the control of the ammo-less holdout pistol.*CLICK* *CLICK* *CLICK* Graves on the ground, being wrestled, kicks off Crimson into the wall. Crimson being dazed, Graves throws punches at Crimson's face! Crimson takes two punches, to the face and returns a kind headbutt to Graves, throwing him off from Crimson. They both pull out M14A Pulse Rifle they had holstered at the same time! Graves's blood dripping from his head while Crimson has a giant bruising on his upper lip.

"Since when, Graves? Since when have Weyland Yutani been slipping you pay check?" barked Crimson! "I'm afraid I don't know what you're talking about. I always have been with Weyland Yutani. You make me proud, Crimson, of course you are my Squad Leader. Put your gun down, I can tell it's unloaded."

Crimson now just have realizing it, his gun was not loaded! Crimson drops his rifle on the floor along with pistols and revolvers he had in his backpack.

"You and I are going to have a nice walk to the ride out in the train. We're going to leave Wooki and Crossman behind to the Xenomorphs. Xenomorphs are just what the humanity needs, a suppressor to human's population. You'll never understand, William."

Crimson being held at gunpoint, forced to march with his hands over his head to the medical hallway where a train awaits them for their way out. The gunfire were growing stronger and closer to Crimson. Crimson tries to walker slower but Graves would keep poking his back and shooting the rifle near his feet to get a move on. They would board the train, the train's cargo consisting of giant Xenomorph in cryogenic storage. "It's magnificent, this is the alpha and the omega, the beginning and the end... This is the highest alien tier of alien reproduction cycle goes, the Ancient Empress and I'd slaved her to me, she is but forever under my control. You and the rest will be my wonderful experiment." Graves begins to press several buttons on the control panel next to cryogenic storage whilst holding the rifle at Crimson one-handed. Crimson glared at Graves, "You've become senile." whilst Graves tosses his rifle out of the train car. The Alien Empress starts to twitch, holding back her claw and lunged it toward to Graves's chest, penetrating her claws through him! Graves starts to cough up and drooling blood from his mouth, gripping on the claws!

"I LOVED YOU, EMPRESS! HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO MEEEEE!?" Graves coughing up more blood! Graves is thrown against the wall, unresponsive.

Wooki and Crossman making in time, slamming the door to prevent from Xenormorphs entering! "Now, we have to deal with his wife!?" yelled Crossman!

Crimson picking up the rifle and pointing at the Alien Empress, "Welcome to the party, Crossman. You'll get used to it."

Alien Empress roars! SCREEE

The train starts to become operational automatically and starts to roll toward to exit.

"WARNING! WARNING! CONTAINMENT BREACH HAS BEEN DETECTED! THE COLONY WILL SELF DESTRUCT IN FIVE MINUTES!"

Gentlemen begins to pour bullets at the Alien Empress as Alien Empress uses her tail smack back Crossman against the wall! THUD! THUD! THUD! The aliens were starting to break through the ceiling! The train starts to gain momentum! The Alien Empress charges at Oosala Wooki but Wooki dodges Alien Empress and tosses explosive grenades at her feet! The train's wooden floor were now moderately unstable due to the hole! Crossman just getting up and finds that Graves is no longer in the train car, there was a pill bottle supposed whereabout corpse!

"PILLS HERE!" shouted Crossman, grabbing the bottle of miracle pill and gets tackled by xenomorphic hunter! "HUNTER'S GOT ME! AHHHH!" Hunter Xenomorph takes a rifle bullet to the face and acidic blood gushes down on Crossman's face, "I got hit by burning goo shit!" The Alien Empress standing before Crossman, raising her foot over Crossman! Crimson and Wooki pulls up their rifle and pours blood, Alex Crossman getting several friendly fires, "I'm not an alien man, shoot the aliens!" Queen Empress stomps her foot on Crossman's face!

Alien Empress roars!

The train has now become too fast for any xenomorphs on the outside to handle. They've fallen off... The remaining marines only obstacles were to take care of Empress! They move to the next train car and starts pouring bullets, Alien Empress chasing after the marines!

"WARNING! WARNING! THE COLONY WILL SELF DESTRUCT IN ONE MINUTE!"

Wooki slams the door on the Queen Empress chasing her and opens the train car to the outside of the train, "Crimson... We're not tools of Weyland Yutani. Fighting was the only thing... the only thing I was good as a proud Colonial Marine. But... at least I always fought for what I believed in. Goodbye, Crimson."

Alien Empress breaks the through the door as Wooki charges at the Alien Empress and bearhugs the Alien Empress off the train!

"Wooki! NO! You seventy hundred years old bastard!" cried Crimson!

BOOM!

The train starts to shudder, almost becoming derailed! Crimson slams his fist at the wall! "I'm going to take down Weyland Yutani." muttered Crimson.

"You're going to need a helping hand with that, William. A lot of helping hands..." said a familiar voice... "It's up to us to take out the Weyland Yutani."

Crimson turns to look at the silhouette person coming out of the shadow.

END OF PART 1

Now... Shall I make a segue? I haven't made a story this long in a while.
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Re: A Short Fanmade Inspirational Story - Part 1

Post by solidfury7 » 14 May 2017, 22:57

Oh neat, I didn't expect to see myself in anyone stories, to be honest but I'm glad to be in it.
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Re: A Short Fanmade Inspirational Story - Part 1

Post by shyshadow » 15 May 2017, 03:59

Lol Inspiring Woman? Wut R U gey. Men marines, men man. I made man men, because men are manly.
Also I read the part where you LITERALLY THROW YOUR FELLOW COMRADE INTO A FUCKING HALLWAY FULL OF ALIENS! Bro like jeez, I don't think any sane marine would do such a thing.
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Re: A Short Fanmade Inspirational Story - Part 1

Post by UnknownMurder » 15 May 2017, 07:53

shyshadow wrote:Lol Inspiring Woman? Wut R U gey. Men marines, men man. I made man men, because men are manly.
The memes, Jack! The memes!
shyshadow wrote: Also I read the part where you LITERALLY THROW YOUR FELLOW COMRADE INTO A FUCKING HALLWAY FULL OF ALIENS! Bro like jeez, I don't think any sane marine would do such a thing.
The player of the character says otherwise, he's been shoved into battle and forced to survive...Although, I never said he died.
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Re: A Short Fanmade Inspirational Story - Part 1

Post by Biolock » 20 May 2017, 09:50

This story waa fuckin lit +1 for having Crossman be a huge duchebag -1 for having him die in the first story ;_;

+1 again for having him die as part of a meme.
I'm stressing way too hard about what to put here, so I'm just gonna leave it blank.... or....

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Re: A Short Fanmade Inspirational Story - Part 1

Post by Karmac » 20 May 2017, 11:58

I bet wooki killed the empress in a fistfight and made it back.
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Re: A Short Fanmade Inspirational Story - Part 1

Post by UnknownMurder » 22 May 2017, 14:05

I see that people likes this. I'll probably make a segue and toss in new characters to the story like it's Metal Gear Solid.
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