The One Cals whom Fought - Nyxia Cals

Show off your artwork and literacy.
Post Reply
User avatar
Nightwolf901
Registered user
Posts: 252
Joined: 17 Jun 2016, 10:23

The One Cals whom Fought - Nyxia Cals

Post by Nightwolf901 » 23 Nov 2016, 17:09

It was just a normal day, If counting you have dead bodies around you and xenos scraping at the windows. Nyxia left a heavy sigh standing back up with her few squadmates who were carefully watching the corners and doors. Luckily they were the smart ones who didn't leave to machete a runner who ran away. "Pfth hah.. This is nothing." Nyxia said to her self as she lowered the M56 Smartgun System to her hands. She slid her thermal optic sight and scanned around inside the medidome. She called to her squadmates to move up seeing as she was in command of them. Her SL had died and the whole planet evacuated. They were left to die and rot with all the bodies on the planet. She wasn't going to let that happen even if it depended on not seeing her sister Destiny Cals once more. Nyxia was always the soft one until joining the USMC. She pulled up a chair and sat down with her smartgun ready on burst. She wasn't able to do much with out a barrel charger that a blasted RO had given to PFCs. Tap Tap Tap, could be heard as the windows were creaking. "Watch closely.. translucent mother fucker around here.." She spoke out to her squad mates. They responded and tighten up their form watching around. A loud hissing was heard and then a muffled scream after that. She looked back to see one of her squadmates face fucked. "Help him up now! Get him to his feet and fight off anything that comes close!" she would yell as she blasted bullets towards a poor drone that was scurrying along the medidome and stepped in. She smirked as the loud goraching sound was heard. She knew she had killed it and saw its blood spill. Nyxia glared around the room and bit her cheek seeing the Queen step into the medidome. "YOUR EARS!" She blurted out before covering them her self. Sending her self forwards as the smartgun locked back into place with force. She grunted lightly as she felt the ground tremble beneath her. Even with her gloves cupped over her ears that piercing screech hurt like a bitch to her. She looked around for the moment and saw the xenos start to pull in. She smiled as she looked at her squadmates got back up and grabbed their gun. She swiftly pulled out two of her HE grenades and sent them flying towards the queen and the main entrance of the Medidome hitting the queen luckily and a damned spitter. She smiled as she pulled her M56 Smartgun down once more and let bullets fly past her squadmates hitting alot of the xenos bouncing around. Her squadmates had more of a focus onto the queen as they blasted her with Grenade after Grenade. "Good work!" She yelled over the gunfire of her weapon. The growling and the acid spilling everywhere as Xeno after Xeno had died. She had soon ran out of bullets and let her power pack fill up the gun. She let out a soft breath before waiting for that certain click to start spraying the bullets into them.





My first story that i might be posting more to. Tell me whatcha think and i don't mind hate =p

EDIT: If you want your characters name in this story i'm only taking the first five.
Last edited by Nightwolf901 on 23 Nov 2016, 18:04, edited 1 time in total.
LOOC Nyxia 'Fifty' Cals "I swear to god if I haven't broken a bone to this moment. I need to head back to get my replacement Titanium plates."
LOOC John '???' Baker? "Better get running"


Sometimes, Snowflakes are not needed, but this one keeps pushing the fact.

User avatar
Karmac
Registered user
Posts: 2458
Joined: 08 Aug 2016, 00:29
Location: 'Straya
Byond: Karmac
Steam: Karmac

Re: The One Cals whom Fought - Nyxia Cals

Post by Karmac » 23 Nov 2016, 17:22

You're nickname's Bladedancer right? If so, I've seen you a couple times as an SL, and you seem pretty robust.

Also, nice story bro.
Garth Pawolski, or is it Powalski?

Back in action.

User avatar
Nightwolf901
Registered user
Posts: 252
Joined: 17 Jun 2016, 10:23

Re: The One Cals whom Fought - Nyxia Cals

Post by Nightwolf901 » 23 Nov 2016, 17:39

Carmac wrote:You're nickname's Bladedancer right? If so, I've seen you a couple times as an SL, and you seem pretty robust.

Also, nice story bro.
Yeah i'm Blade Dancer, And Thanks ^-^
LOOC Nyxia 'Fifty' Cals "I swear to god if I haven't broken a bone to this moment. I need to head back to get my replacement Titanium plates."
LOOC John '???' Baker? "Better get running"


Sometimes, Snowflakes are not needed, but this one keeps pushing the fact.

User avatar
LordeKilly
Registered user
Posts: 806
Joined: 24 Feb 2015, 16:55
Location: mongoria
Byond: lordekilly

Re: The One Cals whom Fought - Nyxia Cals

Post by LordeKilly » 23 Nov 2016, 19:13

If you're going to make a series of stories, probably should look into structuring the paragraphs, adding in more conflict, possibly killing off a character or maiming the main character even.
Image

User avatar
Nightwolf901
Registered user
Posts: 252
Joined: 17 Jun 2016, 10:23

Re: The One Cals whom Fought - Nyxia Cals

Post by Nightwolf901 » 23 Nov 2016, 19:41

LordeKilly wrote:If you're going to make a series of stories, probably should look into structuring the paragraphs, adding in more conflict, possibly killing off a character or maiming the main character even.
Thats why i said that i MIGHT make more of
LOOC Nyxia 'Fifty' Cals "I swear to god if I haven't broken a bone to this moment. I need to head back to get my replacement Titanium plates."
LOOC John '???' Baker? "Better get running"


Sometimes, Snowflakes are not needed, but this one keeps pushing the fact.

Post Reply