USCM Document 1280 - Cooler O'Connor's apliance for commander on board of the USS Almayer.
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USCM Document 1280 - Cooler O'Connor's apliance for commander on board of the USS Almayer.
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Player name you use the most: Cooler "Ace" O'Connor
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Do you understand that any player - even donors or staff members - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our Server Rules or Roleplay Guidelines? Of course i do. I can't imagine how bad it would be if it wasn't.
Why should you be whitelisted?
In the more personal stuff, i really enjoy being the higher up. If anything happens, i want to know. I want to be the one doing the explanation, not the one receiving it. It came to me that i wanted to be the commander of the ship when another commander allowed me take control of the operation the day this is being presented. I enjoyed congratulating the marines and the rp that came with it. I really loved the strategic level that adds to the game. It was actually one of the most enjoyable experiences i've had in this game. I also tried to get the marines to not kill on sight the xenos, but that didn't worked out . I think i should be whitlisted because as displayed on said round and on previous operations, i am quick to take charge and do stuff the way that is ment to be done. The good way.
Player name you use the most: Cooler "Ace" O'Connor
Make a list of links to all of your applications and (job)ban appeals, including whitelist and staff apps, within the last year. Also, provide "Ban reason; Verdict" beside each (job)ban link:
[*] viewtopic.php?f=87&t=10956&p=117301&hil ... al#p117301 Attempted to strangle a marine as mp (but i was trying to take his gear, i was a noob at time) ; Lifted
[*] viewtopic.php?f=127&t=12947 Thwinkaonb Thah'Ka-IN [Grand Force] ; Denied (with reason, it was crap)
Do you understand that any player - even donors or staff members - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our Server Rules or Roleplay Guidelines? Of course i do. I can't imagine how bad it would be if it wasn't.
Why should you be whitelisted?
In the more personal stuff, i really enjoy being the higher up. If anything happens, i want to know. I want to be the one doing the explanation, not the one receiving it. It came to me that i wanted to be the commander of the ship when another commander allowed me take control of the operation the day this is being presented. I enjoyed congratulating the marines and the rp that came with it. I really loved the strategic level that adds to the game. It was actually one of the most enjoyable experiences i've had in this game. I also tried to get the marines to not kill on sight the xenos, but that didn't worked out . I think i should be whitlisted because as displayed on said round and on previous operations, i am quick to take charge and do stuff the way that is ment to be done. The good way.
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I love you papa feweh, god bless.
LostPlayed a round as an Ancient Runner and Ancient Hunter. I still suck at alien though : ^)
I love you papa feweh, god bless.
LostPlayed a round as an Ancient Runner and Ancient Hunter. I still suck at alien though : ^)
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Re: USCM Document 1280 - Cooler O'Connor's apliance for commander on board of the USS Almayer.
well why not. cant be any worse then bill carson
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Re: USCM Document 1280 - Cooler O'Connor's apliance for commander on board of the USS Almayer.
1. Your signature is longer than your application. I feel like, you didn't put as much time into making the application as you do updating your signature. Which, for the record, I'm not a fan of the weird "stats in signatures" that's popping up recently.
2. Your app is not very good overall. "Because I was in command once and it worked out" isn't really a valid reason.
3. I feel like, you say that someone else did the "USCM DOCUMENT" thing and tried to copy it, but you did a kinda bad job with the application. The guy who did it before spent a bunch of time customizing and formatting. You've got broken HTML formatting in your app.
Also, I don't view "Can't be any worse than Bill Carson" as a valid reason to give a +1 vote.
2. Your app is not very good overall. "Because I was in command once and it worked out" isn't really a valid reason.
3. I feel like, you say that someone else did the "USCM DOCUMENT" thing and tried to copy it, but you did a kinda bad job with the application. The guy who did it before spent a bunch of time customizing and formatting. You've got broken HTML formatting in your app.
Also, I don't view "Can't be any worse than Bill Carson" as a valid reason to give a +1 vote.
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Re: USCM Document 1280 - Cooler O'Connor's apliance for commander on board of the USS Almayer.
If you can't capitalize your "I"'s then I can't take the time to up-vote you. Poppy hit the rest of my points.
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Re: USCM Document 1280 - Cooler O'Connor's apliance for commander on board of the USS Almayer.
I'm giving it as a -1 As well its just not that great, doesn't really give us a clear reason as to why we should actually +1 you to be fair. Anyway if you look on the bright side its actually doing 5% better than my personal application, which is all well and good!
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Re: USCM Document 1280 - Cooler O'Connor's apliance for commander on board of the USS Almayer.
I see that, as much as everything i do, this is also shit. Feweh, hit me with the denial, will try again in 2 months.
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I love you papa feweh, god bless.
LostPlayed a round as an Ancient Runner and Ancient Hunter. I still suck at alien though : ^)
I love you papa feweh, god bless.
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Re: USCM Document 1280 - Cooler O'Connor's apliance for commander on board of the USS Almayer.
I've yet to have a memorable experience of you as an SO or XO. Though it's awesome that you enjoy playing Command roles, you need to play them more, and develop something of a style other than a vague preference for the role. If you want this app to be taken seriously, you need to start building that style, knowledge and most importantly, reputation, that makes a good commander.
Otherwise a lack of attention to detail or nuance (see gigantic typo laden signature, misspelled topic, and so on) makes me ill inclined to plus one this.
Otherwise a lack of attention to detail or nuance (see gigantic typo laden signature, misspelled topic, and so on) makes me ill inclined to plus one this.
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Re: USCM Document 1280 - Cooler O'Connor's apliance for commander on board of the USS Almayer.
What do you do before you log out as CO if it's early round?
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Re: USCM Document 1280 - Cooler O'Connor's apliance for commander on board of the USS Almayer.
Well, it depends, if there is an XO i will tell him he's in charge, adivse the troops and everyone else that i'm going ssd and Ahelp. If it isn't an XO, i would assign one of the POs and repeat the proccess of telling everyone and ahelp. All thought, if i knew i was leaving in the early round, i wouldn't even join as commander.NoahKirchner wrote:What do you do before you log out as CO if it's early round?
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I love you papa feweh, god bless.
LostPlayed a round as an Ancient Runner and Ancient Hunter. I still suck at alien though : ^)
I love you papa feweh, god bless.
LostPlayed a round as an Ancient Runner and Ancient Hunter. I still suck at alien though : ^)
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Re: USCM Document 1280 - Cooler O'Connor's apliance for commander on board of the USS Almayer.
It's only fair that i don't get commander from this crap app. I didn't took the time to properly make a decent app. Looking at this, I just realize more and more that i screw up in this app. It was late night, and i should've gave you guys a decent and valid reason to whitelist me instead of "because i want to". Right now i can think of "Because i know how to strategize" "Because i like to insprire the troops, and the commander really gives that feel to the regular pvts" or "Because the RP potential that gives me is gigantic, and i thought i can bring some things new to the table as CO than as XO" Though there isn't really that much difrence other than how the troops see you. I will try to reaply when the timer expires and will make a more thought out form. Maybe i'll even try to rp it with it being a document from the USCM.RedOktober12 wrote:I've yet to have a memorable experience of you as an SO or XO. Though it's awesome that you enjoy playing Command roles, you need to play them more, and develop something of a style other than a vague preference for the role. If you want this app to be taken seriously, you need to start building that style, knowledge and most importantly, reputation, that makes a good commander.
Otherwise a lack of attention to detail or nuance (see gigantic typo laden signature, misspelled topic, and so on) makes me ill inclined to plus one this.
Best interaction with i've had:
I love you papa feweh, god bless.
LostPlayed a round as an Ancient Runner and Ancient Hunter. I still suck at alien though : ^)
I love you papa feweh, god bless.
LostPlayed a round as an Ancient Runner and Ancient Hunter. I still suck at alien though : ^)
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Re: USCM Document 1280 - Cooler O'Connor's apliance for commander on board of the USS Almayer.
Noted. Will try to make something better next time around. I already updated my signature to have something better.apophis775 wrote:1. Your signature is longer than your application. I feel like, you didn't put as much time into making the application as you do updating your signature. Which, for the record, I'm not a fan of the weird "stats in signatures" that's popping up recently.
2. Your app is not very good overall. "Because I was in command once and it worked out" isn't really a valid reason.
3. I feel like, you say that someone else did the "USCM DOCUMENT" thing and tried to copy it, but you did a kinda bad job with the application. The guy who did it before spent a bunch of time customizing and formatting. You've got broken HTML formatting in your app.
Also, I don't view "Can't be any worse than Bill Carson" as a valid reason to give a +1 vote.
DAMNIT, I KNEW I SHOULD'VE PUT A CARSON JOKE THERE
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I love you papa feweh, god bless.
LostPlayed a round as an Ancient Runner and Ancient Hunter. I still suck at alien though : ^)
I love you papa feweh, god bless.
LostPlayed a round as an Ancient Runner and Ancient Hunter. I still suck at alien though : ^)
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Re: USCM Document 1280 - Cooler O'Connor's apliance for commander on board of the USS Almayer.
Noted, i Will Make Efforts To Start Capitalizing My "i"sTexasTwoStep wrote:If you can't capitalize your "I"'s then I can't take the time to up-vote you. Poppy hit the rest of my points.
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I love you papa feweh, god bless.
LostPlayed a round as an Ancient Runner and Ancient Hunter. I still suck at alien though : ^)
I love you papa feweh, god bless.
LostPlayed a round as an Ancient Runner and Ancient Hunter. I still suck at alien though : ^)
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Re: USCM Document 1280 - Cooler O'Connor's apliance for commander on board of the USS Almayer.
Alright, you didn't mention to going to cryo but you did ahelp. I'm pretty confident that you're not going to log off at roundstart so I'll +1 and give you the benefit of the doubt. just pls fix grammar in speechesjusa297 wrote:Well, it depends, if there is an XO i will tell him he's in charge, adivse the troops and everyone else that i'm going ssd and Ahelp. If it isn't an XO, i would assign one of the POs and repeat the proccess of telling everyone and ahelp. All thought, if i knew i was leaving in the early round, i wouldn't even join as commander.
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Re: USCM Document 1280 - Cooler O'Connor's apliance for commander on board of the USS Almayer.
Will do, thanksNoahKirchner wrote:Alright, you didn't mention to going to cryo but you did ahelp. I'm pretty confident that you're not going to log off at roundstart so I'll +1 and give you the benefit of the doubt. just pls fix grammar in speeches
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I love you papa feweh, god bless.
LostPlayed a round as an Ancient Runner and Ancient Hunter. I still suck at alien though : ^)
I love you papa feweh, god bless.
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Re: USCM Document 1280 - Cooler O'Connor's apliance for commander on board of the USS Almayer.
Denied
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