Jason Smith - CO Application

[Jason Smith]

Byond ID: Michaelmikey

Player name you use the most: Jason Smith

Make a list of links to all of your applications and (job)ban appeals, including whitelist and staff apps, within the last year. Also, provide "Ban reason; Verdict" beside each (job)ban link:

• Example: viewtopic.php?f=67&t=10027 | Griefing; 3-day ban
• Exact formatting is helpful but not required.

Do you understand that any player - even donors or staff members - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our Server Rules or Roleplay Guidelines? Yes I understand

Do you understand how the Battlefield Execution functions? Yes, Battlefield execution should be the last form of discipline to regain authority and to make an example out of wrongdoing marines.

Do you understand you are not above Marine law, or allowed to enforce it yourself? Yes

What do you think is the job of a Commander? To lead his forces to victory against whatever battle may occur and to ensure the order is kept on the battlefield.

If a member of your staff is disobeying orders, how would you handle it? Call the MP and brig them for insubordination.

Why should you be whitelisted? I have been playing Colonial Marines for over 2 years now. And have a fair understanding of the mechanics and roleplay aspect of the game. I feel like I can bring interesting and different roleplay the other commanders and spice things up by making every round a little different from the other as well as creating new marine tactics to help assist in the battlefield.

[Sulaboy]

This application feels very low effort. I see some errors in writing which show that you didn't even bother to proof read the 7 sentences you wrote.

I can bring grade an RP as a commander and I feel like it would be best

I don't know what else to say about this. -1

[Park]

This application seems laughably short and doesn't really display why you would be competent in the position.
-1

[x31stOverlord]

-1. No effort at all.

[Shyguychizzy]

-1 From my experience, explicitly I am not huge fan of your character overall. There was a time if I recall remarked inappropriate slur meant for joke among squad's comms. I simply couldn't entrust with way your character is and way RPs become Commander believe Commander isn't for you additionally not much effort put into this app overall. Indeed I am referring to first round of general comms and previous interactions with your character maybe as a Staff Officer I can understand but as Commander that's iffy.

[Jason Smith]

I appreciate the feedback. Mistakes were made in this application and I will for sure improve my applications in the future when creating one. I was not too sure before what to exactly put in for this application which is the reason why it was so short. As well as the forum editor was really confusing when writing the application and it gave me a hard time trying to figure out exactly what my application was gonna look like. Again thank you all for your feedback and I will try to improve any and all applications from here on out and hope I didn't put a bad view on me or my Character.

-1 From my experience, explicitly I am not huge fan of your character overall. There was a time if I recall remarked inappropriate slur meant for joke among squad's comms. I simply couldn't entrust with way your character is and way RPs become Commander believe Commander isn't for you additionally not much effort put into this app overall. Indeed I am referring to first round of general comms and previous interactions with your character maybe as a Staff Officer I can understand but as Commander that's iffy.

As for this comment, I do appreciate the feedback on my roleplay. I will use this information to hopefully improve myself and my character altogether and hopefully improve your experience on me for the future in the event that I do possibly post another application.

Thank you again

-J.Smith

[Kavlo]

Really bare-bones overall clearly needs more thought put into it overall, -1.

[nerocavalier]

When in doubt, just add things about how you'd handle it. You can talk about your experiences with watching COs use their BE and how it made you disappointed or happy. Reflect on them and then decide how you're going to be different on similar.

That said, you're still getting a -1 for the low effort app.

[TexasTwoStep]

-1.

Obvious reasons above, but you also posted another application with some more detail but to soon after this one (since it hasn't even been approved/denied.

[Imperator_Titan]

Right. This one hasn't even been denied yet and you already opened up another one? I'd stay on neutral if the rest of your app wasn't so lacking in detail. I also haven't seen you around, that may be due to time zones but I can't speak for your actions as a player.

-1

[Sargeantmuffinman]

Make a better application next time with more detail. I advise reading the accepted applications and familarise yourself with the forum editor.

-1.

[Emeraldblood]

Resolved - Denied; you can try again in one month.