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Thatnewguy1-Synthetic application

Post by Thatnewguy1 » 16 Nov 2017, 13:12

Byond ID: Thatnewguy1

Marine Name (so we know who you are; if you play alien mostly, state that here): Jaxon Williams

Name/Designation of the Synth Character you’re requesting to use (Follows common naming rules, and requires a first name with no last name):
Odin

Are you familiar with the Synthetic Programming and Guidelines (viewtopic.php?f=57&t=14417)?
1.You are to assist the Almayer and its crew with the completion of its objective

2.While you make look as strikingly handsome as normal humans, You are in fact; only human on the outside. on the inside you are a computer, act like it!. While a human may begin to panic under distress, you, however, will stay cool, calm, and Handsome collected. You are to make decisions on what is the most logical and helpful to the success of the mission.
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3.You are to follow marine law EXACTLY AS IT IS WRITTEN. No excuses, no exceptions(besides admins being spicy), and no second chances, Weyland-Yutani would not ship a defective and troublesome synth, so behave.

4.If you are ordered to do something, do it, (As long as it does not break the marine law) but follow the chain of command regarding what order to do things. If the Chief engineer wants you to clean his office, but the commander needs you flying the Alamo, Alamo takes precedence. The exception to this is an emergency that requires your immediate attention to assure the success of the mission
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5.You are expensive to replace and you can and are encouraged to defend yourself in the face of inescapable harm; though, you should always attempt to reach a peaceful resolution if possible. If peace is not possible, and you are unable to escape, You are allowed to use a multitude of methods to disable attackers. Though according to the Geneva convention as per year 2283-clause 92, paragraph 2 "For this reason, they are programmed with the inability to comprehend advanced weapons such as firearms". Synths are allowed to defend the lives of innocent's to an extent as to the synth would not be violating the marine law or interfering with a lawful arrest.

methods of defense include.
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6.While not encouraged, the synth may sacrifice himself in order to assure the success of the mission. Synths can be repaired easily in comparison to humans. with this in mind though, the synth should preserve itself and avoid situations that would bring the synth to harm unless you are ordered to by an officer above you, or without the synths interference in a dangerous situation, the success of the mission will be compromised, or the lives of others would be lost.

7.Synthetics are highly advanced mobile, walking, talking supercomputers. As such they know every human language. Given enough time around it, they may even adapt and learn other foreign or alien languages. It is not an instant process however and the synth must take time processing the different languages and simplifying them to a point where the synth can comprehend what they are saying.

Synthetic Character Story (An ADEQUATE description and story of your Synthetics actions and involvement in a previous mission onboard the Almayer):
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How do you intend to play your Synth (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your Synth and what support roles you’ll mainly focus on, what is your synthetics quirk)?
Odin will be focused primarily on the engineering and medical areas including research. While he does have experience in the other support area's of the ship, he was programmed with medical and engineering activities and the furthering of the USCMC research division into new fields of study.

The quirk Weyland-Yutani has graciously endowed Odin with is that of Self Pride, he will continue to go on about the superiority of synths and why they are better at most things in comparison to humans. He strives to keep his appearance in perfect condition.(ie; Medical, MT, Science, SO)
MT-Love it, always have. I don't have a perfect memory of how to build what off the top of my mind but, hey, that's what the wiki is for.

Medical/Research-Always fun talking to yourself, doing xeno autopsies with the 'me' command, and being swamped with hundreds of marines at once with severed right hands. Again, I lack a photographic memory of every function but I always keep the wiki up when I'm doing jobs.

Requisitions-I'm good at loading crates and getting things were they need to go fast, what I lack however is good point management so I've never been a big fan of the being the ro himself. Besides that im about average at supply crates and all that jazz, just fill it with what the Marines are asking for and maybe put in a gift in the form of a medibot if you're feeling generous.

Command-Not a huge fan, I HATE when other people dislike me, its just how I am. No one gets more hate than the command team so I usually avoid it like the plague, I do have a general idea of what the console's do, how to aim orbital beacons, and squad commands and orders though.

Pilot-Never had more fun sitting in a seat and pressing 2 buttons. not much to know about the pilots besides me having never seen the laser ordnance from the cas first hand and I'm really wanting to change that.

Janitorial service-someone has to do it. I guess I can

Why should we whitelist you?
I don't like this question as its full of bias. I'm no god of rping that can top Bill Carsons amazing cl rounds. I don't have any more of a right than anyone else to be a synth, im just hoping you will give me a chance.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?
last month is a no
Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?
No sir
Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or the Synthetic Programming Guideline?
Step out of line and you get your toys taken away. I understand and am fine with this.
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Re: Thatnewguy1-Synthetic application attempt 1

Post by shyshadow » 16 Nov 2017, 13:14

I haven't read the entire thing yet. But please, remove the larger text size.
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Re: Thatnewguy1-Synthetic application attempt 1

Post by Thatnewguy1 » 16 Nov 2017, 13:55

shyshadow wrote:
16 Nov 2017, 13:14
I haven't read the entire thing yet. But please, remove the larger text size.
Adjusted, just is a little harder to read now with my old man eyes
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Re: Thatnewguy1-Synthetic application

Post by oprayx73 » 16 Nov 2017, 19:19

Pretty sick application. I like it, and the character description bootup sequence kind of reminds me of my own synthetic app.
I could give it a solid +1
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Re: Thatnewguy1-Synthetic application

Post by Thatnewguy1 » 17 Nov 2017, 17:04

question, what do you mean by my memory lost again?" . I MADE THIS THE WRONG TEXT COLOR!
*insert screams of the dammed*
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Re: Thatnewguy1-Synthetic application

Post by shyshadow » 22 Nov 2017, 15:16

After a bit from my 1st response, the backstory was good. But it didn't really show your synthetic in action. While the whole log feed from the Odin was kinda meh. It didn't ruin the backstory. Personally I think it could've used a lot more polish, but it does fairly well.

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Re: Thatnewguy1-Synthetic application

Post by TheBeoni » 09 Dec 2017, 06:50

Good story well done app. Thatnewguy1 is a competent guy and gets a whooping +1 from me.
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Re: Thatnewguy1-Synthetic application

Post by Gerald888 » 09 Dec 2017, 08:34

+1
I Like it. I mean its not a godly app but i know you will do well with the RP and synth guide lines and i trust you to follow command unlike a certain synth i played with...

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Re: Thatnewguy1-Synthetic application

Post by NescauComToddy » 09 Dec 2017, 16:14

Gerald Noodles wrote:
09 Dec 2017, 08:34
+1
I Like it. I mean its not a godly app but i know you will do well with the RP and synth guide lines and i trust you to follow command unlike a certain synth i played with...
If your statement is genuine, please notify the staff about this player so that a warning can be provided to him. Synthetics are required to obey USCM command officers as long as the orders given to them do not interfere with Marine Law.

I would like to remind you that it is possible to solve this in an IC by simply sending a message to High-Command, in case the infraction of the synthetic is not serious, of course.

On the application, I have already finished reading Odin's back-ground, which I have to admit is not very interesting and could have been better.

I'm glad you're familiar with the synthetic guidelines, but you need not have applied so many details to prove it.

Now the part that bothered me the most about your application is the reason you want to be whitelisted. You could have told us about features that differentiate you from the rest of the community. Your behavior, your knowledge of our rules, your ability to perform role functions, and so on. Of course, this will not have a negative impact, but you have missed the opportunity to present positive factors that would help your application to be accepted.

Unfortunately, I did not get a chance to see much of your in-game character, but I'll trust that you're more than capable of being a synth because of the other posts in this thread :].

Good luck, +1.
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Re: Thatnewguy1-Synthetic application

Post by Leonidzurnadzhi » 10 Dec 2017, 10:47

1- need work a bit more on backstory and so add more harisma to your character, i even chuckled a bit

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Re: Thatnewguy1-Synthetic application

Post by Thatnewguy1 » 11 Dec 2017, 13:15

I was starting to worry this app would have been removed for low activity, you all are awesome
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Re: Thatnewguy1-Synthetic application

Post by Feweh » 13 Dec 2017, 02:31

Accepted

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