Lukey's Synthetic application

[Lukey111]

Byond ID:Lukey111

Marine Name (so we know who you are; if you play alien mostly, state that here):Monday 'Scatter' Williams

Name/Designation of the Synth Character you’re requesting to use (Follows common naming rules, and requires a first name with no last name):Chris
Examples of acceptable names: James, Mason, Xavier, Felix, Otto, Allan, Jessica
Examples of unacceptable names: Obama, Jesus, King, Dragon, Godly, Snyper, Circuits

Are you familiar with the Synthetic Programming and Guidelines (viewtopic.php?f=57&t=14417)?
Yes. I have gone over it twice.
Synthetic Character Story (An ADEQUATE description and story of your Synthetics actions and involvement in a previous mission onboard the Almayer):
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data_log_1- We have started orbit around the suspected colony of LZ-294. The Acting CO has commanded me to keep an eye on medical and engineering. As I was working on stabilising a marine from an AP bullet, another marine came in, pleading for help. I could not help him. I started to tear, and then drug him to the morgue, after I stabilised the other marine, of course. I was then required to go planetside because the medics were "Bald". I have finished and now bring back to LZ 1, subject is stabil-
data_log_2- Reboot started, loading data from Almayer synthetic drives... reboot complete, running hardware check... hardware check complete, ready to assist. I have been sabotaged by a UPP sniper to my System board, and had went into the frozen state. I have been repaired and ready to get back on the ground. I have now finished my role on this OP for the Almayer, logging out...

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How do you intend to play your Synth (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your Synth and what support roles you’ll mainly focus on, what is your synthetics quirk)?
My synthetics quirk will be cheerful, and I will mostly be focusing on engineering, medical, and leadership. As I am working, I will not say anything negative nor let any marines moral come low. I will be the synthetic that everyone wants to be around with.
How familiar are you with support roles? (ie; Medical, MT, Science, SO)
I am VERY good at medical and engineering. Leadership is fine, but I will probably need to play as XO more to learn what the others COs strategy's are, and how I can base my tactics on that.
Why should we whitelist you?
I think that you should whitelist me because I am a trusted person in CM, and could act as a helper for new players ( Of course asking the Admins) in a roleplay manner ex. Detected baldie, running through marine law and guidelines... etc.
Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?
No
Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?
No
Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or the Synthetic Programming Guideline?
Of course

[TheMusician321]

Ehhhhhhh, backstory is really short, could use more work, and I don't actually know who you are, I've never seen you in game, I have to -1 you, play around for a while longer and get more people to know you and your backstory doesn't really show much of who your synth is, what they're like, etc etc.

[Retro]

-SNIP

-1 I've been away for a while, so I don't know who you are not judging that alone on you. Second, your background is WAY TO SHORT, five posts in a month+ of on the forums is just like asking I made this account just to post my Application! You show no example of knowing any lore behind synths, I'm sorry, take a look at other people's applications and reapply when you can. This is just lacklustre, disorganized, and a really shitty app in general. Not trying to be a dick, more effort is needed. Try again, and fix everything please and thanks, then I will consider this application.

[Lukey111]

Alright, thanks for the helpful comments, I really thought people would know Monday...

[NescauComToddy]

You did not apply so much effort to your application if we compared it with others, which eventually made your backstory short, with no impact on your application at all.

The reason why you should be whitelisted also has no impact whatsoever on your application. Synths were not meant to alert staff about new players to the server.

Unfortunately, your activity in the forum is very low, besides that, I do not know your character and that this app is not at the level required to be accepted.

I wish you good luck in case you try again in the future. Look and review the other applications, especially the ones accepted, and you'll see the problem here.

[Counter-Terrorist]

I'm going to have to give a -1 on this application here. The reason I am doing this is because of the backstory, it was quite short and lacking in even describing your synth's description to us. While I am very unfamiliar with you, I definitely can remember the name you use but not very distinctly. I suggest reading other approved applications for synths to see what you can shore up on.

[Lukey111]

I seriously play almost every day, but thanks for the feedback.

[Tharinoma]

Hello Lukey111,

I remember your character, you seemed like a nice player.

Your application however, is in my eyes below standard. Poorly formatted, a few mistakes here and there, and most importantly, doesn't give me the impression you will be able to roleplay well. Your description could very well fit a human being. Syths are supposed to be special in their RP interactions. They also aren't here to help newbies, we have mentors for that.

-1

[Mxssi10]

Unlucky man, it's a shame because I know who you are since I've seen you in game quite a bit. I'm not gonna give a +1 nor -1, however this is needing a lot more work with the backstory as previous people have said. Well 2 more months so you can fix on that.

[Feweh]

Denied for reasons stated above.