Jasmine 'Ghost' Bullard | Synth Application

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Jasmine 'Ghost' Bullard | Synth Application

Post by AccointNaim » 26 Apr 2018, 03:42

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Marine Name (so we know who you are; if you play alien mostly, state that here): Jasmine 'Ghost' Bullard, Jasmine 'Suicidal' Bullard, Jasmine 'Life' Bullard.

Name/Designation of the Synth Character you’re requesting to use (Follows common naming rules, and requires a first name with no last name): Jasmine (If name unavaliable, Sam)

Are you familiar with the Synthetic Programming and Guidelines (viewtopic.php?f=57&t=14417)? Yes, I am.

Synthetic Character Story (An ADEQUATE description and story of your Synthetics actions and involvement in a previous mission onboard the Almayer)
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How do you intend to play your Synth (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your Synth and what support roles you’ll mainly focus on, what is your synthetics quirk)?
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How familiar are you with support roles? (ie; Medical, MT, Science, SO)
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Why should we whitelist you? I've been around the community, I've matured, I've made myself semi-noticable, I died, alot. Broke a couple rules, and I think I'm ready for the heavy burden that is Synthetic, Command yelling at you, dying by Xenomorphs, dying by marines, dying by a Predator, and so on. I wish to make myself more noticable, and maybe even become an Admin one day, maybe even accept the synthetic applications, I've been here a long time, and I hope to make the most of it.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)? I don't think so

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why? I am not.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or the Synthetic Programming Guideline? Yes, and if I break the programming guidelines, I would accept the revoke.

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Re: Jasmine 'Ghost' Bullard | Synth Application

Post by Lukey111 » 26 Apr 2018, 08:20

You say you have been around the community awhile, was that when you made your forum account (I'm just curious)? Another question, is english your first language, it is totally fine if it is not. Going along...

Pretty good story(s)
Don't know you, but may recognize you from somewhere...
Has an understanding of most roles.
Reason for Whitelist and How would you Play are a little short, but I like how you would make up your bandages/splints.

Overall, you don't look a bad addition to synths. Neutral leaning lightly towards positive. Read over the quirk again, and when you think about it, the quirk really is not that good of a quirk. Changing to plain neutral

EDIT: To Karmac, the story was pretty good in my opinion, just didn't show how she did things. Keeping my vote above.
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Re: Jasmine 'Ghost' Bullard | Synth Application

Post by Karmac » 26 Apr 2018, 16:57

Your backstory is short, poorly written and as much as you might think that's no big deal, being able to fluently type in undersrandable sentences is key to RP based roles such as Synths and Predators, the other problem is your quirk is not even a quirk, you're just saying "my synth knows how to make do in situations where we are low on proper supplies", which has nothing to do with how it would act around the ship, as you'll probably have actual supplies most of the time. Going to have to -1 this, take a look at some accepted applications and see what you can improve.

I would also suggest using a different name to the one you use as a marine, because it feels a bit cheap and thoughtless.
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Re: Jasmine 'Ghost' Bullard | Synth Application

Post by AccointNaim » 26 Apr 2018, 18:28

Karmac wrote:
26 Apr 2018, 16:57
The other problem is your quirk is not even a quirk
Yeah... I realised that after the time went up, I just couldn't think of a quirk, was thinking of a curious synthetic, but I think its been done before. So that's why I didn't pick it, if I could change the quirk now, I would change it back to curious.
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Re: Jasmine 'Ghost' Bullard | Synth Application

Post by Wubs4Scrubs » 30 Apr 2018, 11:24

Haven't actually looked through the application in detail yet but just thought I'd toss a quick comment in and say that I'm not a fan of naming your Synthetic after your marine characters, rubs me the wrong way.
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Re: Jasmine 'Ghost' Bullard | Synth Application

Post by Jakkkk » 01 May 2018, 00:38

Why is her quirk to be ghetto and make use of what's around her, that seems pretty standard to me. If a synth doesn't have any trauma kits, it isn't a quirk for them to use bandages when nothing else is around.
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Re: Jasmine 'Ghost' Bullard | Synth Application

Post by Kavlo » 03 May 2018, 13:28

To put this plainly, there ain't enough thought and effort put into this application, your quirk ain't a quirk, you used the same name as your marine, your backstory ain't great overall and to top it off you haven't experimented much with too many other departments.

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Re: Jasmine 'Ghost' Bullard | Synth Application

Post by AccointNaim » 24 Jun 2018, 03:30

Requesting this two month old application to be denied, so in another two months I can make another one
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Re: Jasmine 'Ghost' Bullard | Synth Application

Post by Emeraldblood » 08 Jul 2018, 18:59

Resolved - Closed at the request of the app hoster. You can make a new app in reference to May 3rd.
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