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Caryl - Caryl's Synthetic Application

Post by Caryl » 20 May 2018, 13:05

Byond ID: Caryl

Marine Name (so we know who you are; if you play alien mostly, state that here): Caryl 'Hail' Bernhaben

Name/Designation of the Synth Character you’re requesting to use (Follows common naming rules, and requires a first name with no last name): Caryl
Examples of acceptable names: James, Mason, Xavier, Felix, Otto, Allan, Jessica
Examples of unacceptable names: Obama, Jesus, King, Dragon, Godly, Snyper, Circuits

Are you familiar with the Synthetic Programming and Guidelines (viewtopic.php?f=57&t=14417)? Yes, I am. I've read the entire page and familiarized myself with the ways of how a Synth is supposed to act, work, and talk.

Synthetic Character Story (An ADEQUATE description and story of your Synthetics actions and involvement in a previous mission onboard the Almayer):
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How do you intend to play your Synth (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your Synth and what support roles you’ll mainly focus on, what is your synthetics quirk)?

I would play it in a manner where everyone could feel assured that their backs are covered. An Engineer needing a marine to fill their sandbags for them? Done. Engineering not maintaining the reactors? Caryl's there! Medical in need of a few extra hands? Let's get bloodied! My synth's quirk is that it is a reliable source of help. One that people can actually depend and count on.

How familiar are you with support roles? (ie; Medical, MT, Science, SO):

Medical : I played Doctor a few times, I am fully aware of the processes for surgeries and limb/organ detach/attachment, Drug Mixing, and resuscitation. I am also a proficient Squad Medic.

MT : Engineering is no stranger to me. I can build, repair, and maintain things whether be it the Ship's Engines, Damage to the Dropships (Airlocks), Atmos Breaches, I still have yet to work on the tank, haven't gotten to experience repairing one yet.

Science : I've played as a Medical Researcher, not much to this class but to RP and RP. You take an egg or a host (monkey-class, Human hosts detained could cause trouble), then you wait for it to grow. Examine what makes up the biological structure of the Xenomorphs that you encounter. Research on ways to defeat them, or use them to your advantage. Or, you could go Mad Scientist and talk crazy about Scientifical stuff that most marines would grunt and grumble hearing about.

SO : I am familiar with the Overwatch function and the responsibilities of a Staff Officer. I've played rounds as a Staff Officer, I've had a few bad OBs that I'm not proud of, but each mistake is a lesson to be learned. Talk to a squad, see if their needs are met, if the RO is lacking staff or generally non-existent, take over and supply the squad(s) with their requested suppl(y)/(ies).

Why should we whitelist you? Support roles have been... lacking, so to speak, I've played as a Squad Leader, a Staff Officer, a Rank-and-File soldier, a Requisitions Officer, a Medical Doctor, and a Medical Researcher. Each of them are inhibited to their own department and specific skillset. Watching a Synthetic play made me realize that being a synthetic means helping these supporting roles make the best out of it. If I am allowed to be a synthetic, I believe that I can cut down on the pressure exerted on these supporting roles. Specially when one of these players is new to the game and require guidance, as a Synthetic, I can teach them the ropes without the need to be restricted on Role-Based knowledge.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)? No, not that I know of or remember.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why? No, I am not.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or the Synthetic Programming Guideline? Yes, I understand.
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Re: Caryl - Caryl's Synthetic Application

Post by z a n e b o t » 20 May 2018, 21:44

Your quirk isn't really a quirk, you made your quirk essentially just what a normal synth should be doing. Gonna stay neutral for now.

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Re: Caryl - Caryl's Synthetic Application

Post by Alky » 21 May 2018, 02:16

Eh, I have a distaste of synths not much of a hate, but it’s alright.

The role you had was good, showed how you managed in as you said in your quirk, “backs are covered”

You are a support unit, you are suppose to help the Almayer crew no matter what, I wished I saw some foreign interaction with colonist, CLF, UPP, Xeno, etc.

But you are a likeable chacter at least to me, though I’m going with neutral with a negative stand as I would have liked seeing your synth in action or interacting with someone not of the Almayer.

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Re: Caryl - Caryl's Synthetic Application

Post by Jakkkk » 21 May 2018, 06:47

I'm at a solid neutral for this one.

Your synthetic name is the same as your marine character and that always puts a bad taste in my mouth.

The whole point of a synth is to be there to count on, its not a quirk.

In all truth, I have never seen you as a doctor or engineer before. I think I've seen you XO once, but that's it when it comes to nonmarine roles.

Why would a synth say "How brutish!" when a marine is shoving people outta the way.

Your story is also not to my standards, I'd expect to see your synth during a special event or something that would define them as a synthetic, this is just his daily routine it seems.
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Re: Caryl - Caryl's Synthetic Application

Post by Lukey111 » 21 May 2018, 09:10

Story is not the best, but shows you put effort.
Ok answers.
Decent amount of posts.

Along with everyone else, I have not seen you in many other support roles, so I'm going with a neutral.
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Re: Caryl - Caryl's Synthetic Application

Post by Caryl » 22 May 2018, 06:38

z a n e b o t wrote:
20 May 2018, 21:44
Your quirk isn't really a quirk, you made your quirk essentially just what a normal synth should be doing. Gonna stay neutral for now.
Well... A quirk for me, is something that the person is good at. And... well, that's the only thing I'm able to think of that's a quirk of Caryl.
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Re: Caryl - Caryl's Synthetic Application

Post by Caryl » 22 May 2018, 06:39

Alky wrote:
21 May 2018, 02:16
Eh, I have a distaste of synths not much of a hate, but it’s alright.

The role you had was good, showed how you managed in as you said in your quirk, “backs are covered”

You are a support unit, you are suppose to help the Almayer crew no matter what, I wished I saw some foreign interaction with colonist, CLF, UPP, Xeno, etc.

But you are a likeable chacter at least to me, though I’m going with neutral with a negative stand as I would have liked seeing your synth in action or interacting with someone not of the Almayer.
I was planning to put in more Characters, but it looked long enough and it might not be an enjoyable read, plus the interaction with different factions would have jeopardize the Almayer before the Mission, so I tried to keep the ship in-tact as it is when the personnel wake up from their sleepers.
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Re: Caryl - Caryl's Synthetic Application

Post by Caryl » 22 May 2018, 06:48

Lukey111 wrote:
21 May 2018, 09:10
Story is not the best, but shows you put effort.
Ok answers.
Decent amount of posts.

Along with everyone else, I have not seen you in many other support roles, so I'm going with a neutral.
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Re: Caryl - Caryl's Synthetic Application

Post by Karmac » 22 May 2018, 07:01

I'm neutral, the intended playstyle is "I'll do my job", and I don't remember you as anything other than 'shooty marine', the backstory however is well written for what it is, so that helps.
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Re: Caryl - Caryl's Synthetic Application

Post by Jakkkk » 22 May 2018, 14:46

A quirk isn't something that someone is really good at, a quirk is a personality defining feature.

Gonna change the neutral shit and go to a straight -1.
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Re: Caryl - Caryl's Synthetic Application

Post by MattAtlas » 04 Jun 2018, 06:48

You're a good player and a good guy but you've really dropped the ball with this application.

Your story has a few issues but it's decent. However you really drop the ball on the quirk part. Your quirk is not a personality, you're just saying your synth is a synth.

Another issue is your synth has the same name as your marine. This doesn't sound like much of an issue but your ckey, your marine name and your synth name would be all equal. One of the fundamentals of roleplay is to detach yourself from your character and this is a big red flag.

I'm sorry man, but I'm gonna have to say -1. You can do better.
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Re: Caryl - Caryl's Synthetic Application

Post by RedsPro » 14 Jun 2018, 02:25

+1 Damn fine detective
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Re: Caryl - Caryl's Synthetic Application

Post by Vispain » 15 Jun 2018, 13:47

I know Caryl knows his stuff in the variety of roles and can RP. I've seen him in various roles and in every one of them he's done a good job from what I've seen.
As others have mentioned, the quirk isn't fully there though, but I liked the story and coupled with what I've seen of and from him I know he would do a good job in the role.

I'm going to say +1.
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Post by Adralimas » 23 Jun 2018, 23:42

Caryl's still the only squad leader i've ever seen that uses point effectively and as a synthetic he'll beable to point 200% More effectively.
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Re: Caryl - Caryl's Synthetic Application

Post by Sargeantmuffinman » 08 Jul 2018, 16:14

Your abilities on how to utilize all departments efficiently won't be questioned by me. I can assume you have the knowledge to aid in all support roles effectively.

The quirk isn't an actual quirk, that's been noted by everyone here. Come up with something so people will recognise you rather than pass you by as a working joe.

The backstory is alright, above average but passable.

The name is fine but I'd say make them a seperate character from your own.

You'll get a -1 from me and come up with a better quirk.
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Re: Caryl - Caryl's Synthetic Application

Post by Aceluke123 » 08 Jul 2018, 19:05

z a n e b o t wrote:
20 May 2018, 21:44
Your quirk isn't really a quirk, you made your quirk essentially just what a normal synth should be doing. Gonna stay neutral for now.
Essentially this.
I view the story as something to show what your personality quirk is and how it would be roleplayed out. Though this quirk -while- shown in the story isn't a quirk and doesn't really show anything when it comes to the point of synthetics and their special attitude that makes them different from humans.

You are highly active and I believe you can do the role well. I just hope you can give me a quirk to work with as you did very well on your story.

I'd sadly have to give this a neutral vote for now. Pending a response

I want to ask, what personality quirk would you give your synth if you did get your whitelist. Knowing my view on the personality quirk of a synthetic I would love a reply.
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Re: Caryl - Caryl's Synthetic Application

Post by nerocavalier » 10 Jul 2018, 11:57

I learned more about other people in the story than I did about the synth. Your character should be able to stand on its own merit without having to mention any regulars. Except the story is bogged down on descriptions of other players that aren't needed. The quirk is already mentioned by other so I won't talk on it.

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Re: Caryl - Caryl's Synthetic Application

Post by Solarmare » 11 Jul 2018, 23:54

What you've put as a quirk is more how you would try to play your synth rather than an actual personality quirk it would have.
Worth focusing more on your own character you're asking to be applied more than the others there. It does seem you could work out something along those lines with what you've already written for a backstory, though for now I'll sit at a -1.
Being able to have a distinct note of personality is important because it shows how you plan to actually act and whether you can display that kind of character through the story. Besides that you do seem to understand how to work out a synth, so I would suggest being able to make another application sooner if this happens to be denied.
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Post by RedsPro » 13 Jul 2018, 02:21

I really like it. I also really like that you think im smart enough to be a Doctor. +1 and much love
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Re: Caryl - Caryl's Synthetic Application

Post by Kavlo » 01 Aug 2018, 16:15

I like you as a person and player but this application isn't really up the the standard IMO.

Your backstory is alright, nothing really stands out about it. Your playstyle is pretty bland to say the least. I don't think I've seen you play anything other than squad marine roles and command staff, but if you're a synth you'll be going into more than just the command field.

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Post by ThePiachu » 03 Aug 2018, 00:30

The quirk is rather bland. We have Synths like Nicole the friendly assistant, Oscar the supportive and sympathetic, and Abraham the benevolent and supportive. So being helpful is neither original, nor is it distinctive enough to make the synth memorable.

As others pointed out - it's better to have a unique name for your Synth that is not tied to your character. It probably should be in the guidelines really...

Don't remember seeing you in-game, but that happens.

Good number of posts, and I'm guessing you have the skills necessary to pull off playing a synth.

Unfortunately, -1 from me. If you had an interesting and unique quirk, it would've probably been a positive vote. Better luck next time!
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Re: Caryl - Caryl's Synthetic Application

Post by Aceluke123 » 03 Aug 2018, 00:43

Due to getting no reply to my question after a significant time period I will change my neutral to a -1 as this application is very old at this point.

-1 from me.
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Re: Caryl - Caryl's Synthetic Application

Post by Emeraldblood » 05 Aug 2018, 19:28

Resolved - Denied; You can reapply in two months.
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