just some criticism and points I'd like to touch on regarding marine law
If the suspect is being held for less than 30 minutes for a non-violent offense, remove all of their equipment with the exception of their boots, jumpsuit, and radio.
Keeping boots on them is a bad idea because they have bootknives in those, and MPs often also forget to check the pockets of the uniform because that's not a strippable item. I think it's advisable to change this to something like "strip them of all their clothes" (rpwise we're supposed to be cavity searching anyway), "then return their uniform, headset, and boots without sheathed bootknife". In addition, it should probably be included to search their items for contraband and evidence, and to evidence bag/store that.
The prisoner may request an appeal on his sentence from the Chief MP. If the Chief MP is not available, he may appeal to the acting commander. This right is rescinded during emergencies. The Chief MP has the final say on all appeals, and can override the Commander if he feels it is in the best interest of the ship's safety.
Just a few rounds ago the CMP, who's actually a fairly competent MP at least from what I saw, misinterpreted this section as a chance to allow the prisoner clemency or forgive them of their crimes, rather than what I (and the staff I faxed) interpret as more of a regular review of whether or not the charges the MP brought forth are actually legitimate. I don't think the CMP has the authority to just go, okay, you're free of murder because you appealed and I liked the cut of your jib! So I think this should be clarified to state that the CMP is just reviewing the charges themselves, not whether or not the prisoner is allowed to just go free because he feels like it.
The battlefield execution lists the parenthesed "(this is similar to rule 0...)" explanation twice in two consecutive paragraphs.
Authorized Weapons may be carried by deploying marines, security (non-lethals only), the Acting Commander and the XO only. If you have a weapon, you must keep it holstered at all times while on the ship. This applies to Deploying Marines as well.
Way too strict wording to say "holstered at all times", maybe "holstered when not in use"? Taking what is currently written, literally, would mean marines can't apply mods or load their weapons before drop. Just feel like the letter of the law should match the enforced spirit here.
Using offensive names, disobeying orders, or being directly disrespectful to someone of a higher rank or position. Each offense stacks. Punishment time is per offense.
Almost none of the MPs I've played with after the law change think it's a good idea to have this stack. Kind of makes no sense to permabrig someone for saying "fuck you" to the RO 12 times. I feel like it's better, as other crimes currently do, to just keep the timing range wide and give the officer discretion to increase it. Also it's somewhat strange that SLs can call MPs mean names and not be punished under this law, since they're the same rank.
Drug Use | Consuming either space drugs or medical compounds not authorized for distribution.
This one is REALLY strange. Does this mean medbay can't heal themselves using ANY drugs until the CO and CMO authorize it? And yet the wording of this law doesn't make it illegal to forcefeed others drugs in the medbay, so... you can't eat a pill, you can't give a pill to someone else to eat (or that's drug distribution), but you CAN force them to eat a pill (which isn't distribution). It's like if you needed the CE's and CO's authorization just to turn on the SMES.
Neglect of duty | Failure to perform their role to an acceptable standard. For example, a Commander failing to properly organize and ensure his personnel are given orders.
The wording and specific example here probably need changing now that command demotions must be handled through the CMP's fax.
Finally, are conduct unbecoming and recidivism multiplicative or additive?