future predator application story

[Eroszabi]

Byond ID: Eroszabi

Name of the character you want whitelisted: Ruthless Kha'bj-te : Maniac/Reckless
Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?
I am.

Character background:


Kha’bj-te like all his clan lived on their ships and didn’t have an established world they called home, and like his clans rules he and his brother were trained and raised by their uncle and would not see their father until they had their first hunt. His brother Mar’cte was the most skilled of the two in close quarters combat and him being the older of the two easily could pin and knock out Kha’bj’te.
The two were never far apart and would boast and joke about how after the hunt they would become known and the two best hunters in the galaxy and they would start their own clan and mate with as many females they could so their genes would spread throughout the Yautja worlds and their names would be know. While Mar’cte trained with their uncle, Kha’bj-te would talk and boast to the females of his age and tell them one day they would be his and this would earn him and back hand from his uncle for not paying attention and would be told he would never make a good hunter if he didn’t at first learn how to beat his brother. Mar’cte trained with the traditional spear and blades and this earned him a lot of respect from the hunters around him, Kha’bj-te used dual mauls and a whip his uncle used to joke and say “ those weapons are for Yautja that have no skill” this joke would make the other blooded watching laugh.
Kha’bj-te would hiss in annoyance and walk off to flirt with the girls and even one night attempted to flirt with a grown female that earned him a knock out punch right in the face and his brother found him hours later still asleep. Mar’cte laughed at him and say another strike on the list brother, they would laugh and plan for the great deeds ahead. One Training session years later Kha’bj-te and Mar’cte squared off in a claw match with their uncle and other blooded and young bloods watching in the training room of the vast ship. Mar’cte puffing out his chest and hissing at Kha’bj-te to make him feel small. Kha’bj-te roared in anger and charged Mar’cte as quickly as he could, but mar’cte was quicker and side stepped the charge and trips Kha’bj-te and he fell right on his face and the watchers erupted in laughter and the stupid young blood’s mistake. Kha’bj-te jumped back up and took in a deep breath to clear his mind, the two stepped forward and traded punches and counter punches, for once in the decades of training Kha’bj-te was holding his own but that was short lived when Mar’cte locked Kha’bj-te arms at the elbows and head-butted him so hard his vision blurred and knees buckled. Kha’bj-te stood up unsteadily and tried to fight again but the match was called and again Mar’cte was the winner, Kha’bj-te was happy for his brother but one day he would out do him because if he couldn’t then their dreams would never come the light.

working on the first hunt right now. plz give me your thoughts and how i can make it better

[Renomaki]

Here is my advice.

Don't.

You only have 7 posts to your name, and are barely known in the community. Please, PLEASE wait awhile longer and get more involved before trying to apply, you are just setting yourself up for disappointment.

[shyshadow]

Umm, a little too detailed about the whole mating thing...comes off a little...weird...

[Eroszabi]

So I have one person weirded out over press being like humans and flirty. Then another that's says wait.
I'm not submitting it any time soon I'm just Working on it. How was the story so far atleast

[Eroszabi]

I also many play as a alien so people knowing my name in game is gona be rare

[Steelpoint]

I'm no expert on the field of Predator applications, but I suggest attempting to play the game, as a Human, consistently for two months before you consider attempting a Predator application. If no one knows who you are, no one can genuinely comment on your character, by character I mean you're in game personality and role play conduct.

Aliens have a lower standard of roleplay than Humans, and Aliens have no real unique, long term, identifier so outside of OOC confirmation after round there's few ways to build up a reputation for good roleplay as a Alien.

[Eroszabi]

Yeah this is true. I just like playing as a Zeno. I have played a few games as a human also. Any advise on the story atleast that's what im working on atm while I'm playing the game and meeting people

[Shyguychizzy]

Generally, playing marine even if its for quite a bit tends to help expand; 1. Skill/ perspective on how you RP, 2. To be a bit more known or which as some said helps makes us (Either regulars or newbies) familiarize with you. 3. How you act or how you are as player. As stated above, xenos a bit lower standard in either locally chatting or hivemind chatting; however sometimes they may have at times good RP or good attempts.

[Eroszabi]

Yeah I need to play as Marines more to be known in the community and so people know how well I RP . I do play are Marines a little bit but I just like how the xenos play and the feel of them and when I do play as the xenos I do RP as them. Most people don't but I find a good bit of people do . I just don't like how the Marines feel and I hope when I am able to apply to play as a predator they will atleast give me a chance and let me show them I am able to RP as one. From what I seen predators try and play at as they just get a few kills then leave and the to I do see between them and another race is sparce and short .