Distress Signal Narrative

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Distress Signal Narrative

Post by UnknownMurder » 28 Nov 2015, 23:34

This is just for fun. Not meant to be real or OFFICIAL.

INTRO

The Colonial Marines is on the Rasputin heading to the Lazarus Landing situated in North Hemisphere of LV-462, where we are searching for the distress signal, of the survivors, Scientists of Weyland Yutani, who signaled for help during the middle of our patrol. Bizarre cases of disappearances recently occurred in the Lazarus's Landing. There are several scientists attacked by a group of unknown creatures of 15. Victims, were apparently eaten... The Battalion 501st Colonial Marines went to the Caves and disappeared... It was the fallen drop pod... Nobody was in it, but strangely most of the equipment was still there, but no one knows why. However, soon... We will discover why.

-Alex Graves-
--The Squad Leader of Alpha--
---21st Battalion Colonial Marines---


END

There are only five of the 21st Battalion Colonial Marines left now. Commander Carson, Military Officer Tanya, Doctor Strife, Marine Sanders and myself. We don't know where Marine Xur is, he said he was sealing off the evacuation for us. We're on the evacuation pod heading back to the Central Command. Our horror just has ended, Sulaco has fallen with the Queen inside... We hope this was the last of their species. Everyone I knew was dead, Leo Blackburn, my best friend. Casca, my bully. Jack Knight, my role model. They're all dead, fallen with the Sulaco. We learned the truth behind the incident, it was a Corporation we thought to be our ally, Weyland Yutani, whom was behind all this. Now, it's up to us to stop the Weyland Yutani. This is just the beginning of the downfall of the Weyland Yutani.

-Alex Graves-
--WANTED CRIMINAL--

What you think of the story?
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Re: Distress Signal Narrative

Post by ShortTemperedLeprechaun » 28 Nov 2015, 23:52

Good, now we just need a xur PoV. Because let's be honest here....one queen is not enough to kill him off. That's just my opinion though.
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Re: Distress Signal Narrative

Post by Mac » 29 Nov 2015, 00:35

Carson? No wonder there are only 4 marines left.

For the story, I enjoyed it. I'm always a fan of reading the writing of others.
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Post by coroneljones » 30 Nov 2015, 10:48

Jack knight?
Dead simply?
Heresy
He likely took the xenos down and died
As long as his legend is carried he is never dead
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Post by Jack McIntyre » 30 Nov 2015, 11:19

First off if you are the squad leader, that squad shouldn't have made it off the sulaco, Love you UM :p.

Also have to agree with coronel, I had a instance where he and I were killing xenos with knives when we were the last humans on the planet before dying, but we took a few with us. So the fact that I could fight alongside jack knight in that moment and seeing how he refused to flee from the xeno scum means he probably already wiped out the hive with his "death" :p. Sidenote you may want to arrest carson too :P he will lead you down a dark path. :p

Also I don't see my name mentioned :p, but no it was a nice little teaser trailer so to speak. I rather enjoyed it.

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Re: Distress Signal Narrative

Post by Sadokist » 30 Nov 2015, 20:30

you're a wanted criminal? *arrested*

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Re: Distress Signal Narrative

Post by Azmodan412 » 30 Nov 2015, 22:58

Sadokist wrote:you're a wanted criminal? *arrested*
Actually: You're a wanted criminal? *Shoots said criminal until dead, stuffs body into incinerator to hide evidence and go on like you didn't do anything while deadchat rages at you for being Shitcurity.*
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Post by Sadokist » 01 Dec 2015, 08:37

Azmodan412 wrote: Actually: You're a wanted criminal? *Shoots said criminal until dead, stuffs body into incinerator to hide evidence and go on like you didn't do anything while deadchat rages at you for being Shitcurity.*
Lol yeah but dat ain't how I role

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Post by Lostmixup » 01 Dec 2015, 08:46

I probably snuck off on the CL's escape pod as XO.
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Re: Distress Signal Narrative

Post by UnknownMurder » 01 Dec 2015, 11:32

Teaser Trailer... Oh yeah, I should try it.

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