The different colours of red, orange, and yellow remind me of a rainbow. As a homophobe, I kindly request you remove them, along with the other small amounts of colour filled in every now and then.
Additionally, the rules are a bit long winded. They should be condensed and reformatted. Let's take "No ERP" as an example.
Rules wrote:No ERP - ZERO TOLERANCE POLICY - ERP, or Erotic Roleplay, is defined as roleplay that has a strong erotic element intended to elicit a sexual response from the receiver(s). It may involve two or more people or be done in front of spectators. This includes reading stories about ERP but not participating directly (WGW). Both consensual and nonconsensual ERP will be met with a PERMABAN. This is not to be confused with distasteful but acceptable marine bravado such as "/me scratches his crotch" or "/me pinches [player]'s nipple." However, these actions can be handled IC as Neglect of Duty or Sexual Assault per Marine Law. Bottom line: If you're not sure if it's ERP or not, or you don't want to be permabanned, just don't do it.
Why not...
No erotic roleplay - erotic roleplay, otherwise known by the abbreviation "ERP", is defined as roleplay that has a strong erotic element intended to elicit a sexual response in one or both parties. Participating in acts of erotic roleplay, be it consensual or nonconsensual will result in a permanent ban from the server. This must not be confused, however, with distasteful but otherwise acceptable roleplay, such as scratching your crotch, or pinching another player's nipple.
Aside from the fact that it gives out far too much information than is necessary, it also frequently uses slang and phrasing that only experienced Space Station 13 players would understand.