Jox-kin 'Shao (Quiet Ripple)

[oprayx73]

Byond ID: Oprayx73

Marine Name (so we know who you are, if you play alien mostly, state that here):
Boris Bourbon

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name):
Jox-kin Shao

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?
Yes, i have thoroughly read the obligation that I must follow them, and have studied them.

Character background (A very BRIEF description of your predators background):
Grandson of Jos-kin 'Shao, a prominent leader of his clan well known for his complete honour, and showing
the courage to engage in hunts he may not even win. Jox-kin's father was supposed to be a promising warrior,
and ended up a dissapointment to his own father,
and died foolishly in a hunt forever tarnishing their surname, Jox-kin is determined to get that respect back.

How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)?
A gentlemanly hunter, who will not settle for petty tricks and dishonerable tactics. I meet my enemies face on, and won't faulter or back out till the deed is done.
Injuring me will only cause me to come back twice as hard.

Why should we whitelist you?
I could create some great experiences for the players, rp and gameplay-wise,
I have the desire to be a good predator and make great use of the whitelist, and add some character
as a real predator who is dedicated to improving and learning.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?
I have not been banned within the last month.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?
I'm banned from Yogstation for Bigoted speech,
which I do admit is my fault. I failed to follow their rules, and said something not so wholesome
and sadly earned my ban.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?
I fully understand that whitelist status is a PRIVILIGE and that i should take care to keep it.

► Show Spoiler

(Totes admit that my character story is a bit like a certain other novel ive read,heres some extra story.)
Jox-kin's grandfather was a beast of a predator, standing taller than anyone he knew.
Being tackled by two xenomorphs could not stop this determined killer.
Earning respect from those around him, his step-brother was always jealous of his success and devised a plan to ruin his son's future,
ending their control over the reigns of the clan, and eventually having it being given to his own child.
The night of Jox-kin's father's first hunt was a clear as water, the pure unadulterated moon spread out
above them. Since his own father (Jox-kins grandfather) had already passed, he was being ushered in and prepared by
his uncle, the step-brother. Being given faulty wristblades, dull knives, and poorly tied bolas along with his ornate mask
being cracked and painted over to seem fine, he enters the frey and suffers a brutal death,aswell as the Quiet Ripple
clan suffering a terrible loss.

His own son, still a whelp, never realized his father's death was intentional sabotage
and blamed it on his poor decisions. Seeing this unacceptable failure,
he envied his own grandfather's success and molded himself in that image.

this is what has made jox-kin's fighting spirit into who he is.

[ShortTemperedLeprechaun]

Neutral. I like how you PLAN to play, and I like the idea of a gentlemanly predator who speaks with a space british accent, however I'm not certain of you in total as a player yourself, as my interactions with you have been limited.

[LordeKilly]

I'm not sure, but I don't think you can be a clan leader off the bat (correct me if I am wrong)

But the application isn't very strong either, the way you'll play could use more detail in my opinion, and the application in general is very generic, not much in the way of standing out from other Yautja.

I mean, you've got a runescape picture, which is great, but still i'll have to go with -1. It's just not up to par with the applications that are getting accepted.

[Feweh]

Application is very weak.
Take a look at most of the accepted ones and youll see a huge difference.

-1

[oprayx73]

Application is very weak.
Take a look at most of the accepted ones and youll see a huge difference.

-1

I agree i should have been more illustrative of how i'd affect gameplay and put more effort into my application.

I'll elaborate on my playstyle, or how i'd affect the gameplay.
Instead of being how much of the other Yautja are, (no offense intended heh)
I would not spend so much time scouting out my prey for ages and being incredibly methodical.
Jox-kin is USED to victory, and his proud lineage truly shows when he faces an upward battle, and
a difficult fight is exactly what he seeks. Examples would be, a fully healed ravager who just displayed prowess in combat,
I would not wait for the most perfect chance to strike, I would descend apon my foe even if victory may be unlikely.
A gentleman will start a fight they are slightly uncertain they would win.

This doesn't mean i'd be a huge loose cannon who dies every round, though.

[Casany]

i like the application, after reading the spoiler anyway. the spoiler has some needed information. Neutral

[Feweh]

Further feedback needed from the Predator Community.
This application will either be denied or accepted by the end of this week.

[oprayx73]

Excited to see whats going to unfold~ glad you guys bothered to look at it

[Feweh]

Any further feedback, otherwise this will be denied.

[Feweh]

Denied.