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Nightmare2125
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by Nightmare2125 » 13 Aug 2017, 02:05
1. Name (Last, First, Middle)
Bartton, Erron, Edward
2. Social Security No.
102-02-6542
3. Department, Branch
Department of the Navy, United States Colonial Marine Corps (USCM)
4.a. Grade, Rate, or Rank
Private First Class
4.b. Pay Grade
E-2
5.a. Date of Birth (YYYYMMDD)
2167-10-22
5.b. Age
19
6. Place of entry into Active Duty
Marine Recruit Depot, California, USA
7. Last/Current Duty, Command, or Station
USS Almayer
8. Decorations, Medals, Badges, Citations, and Campaign Ribbons Awarded or Authorized
1: National Service Defence Medal (NDSM)
2: Colonial Marine Expeditionary Medal (CMEM)
3: Hypersleep Deployment Medal [Bronze star for 100+ Miles] (HDM)
4: Marksmen Ribbon [Expert]
9. Remarks
PFC Bartton shows promise as a future Team Leader, Squad Leader, and perhaps. Sergeant Major.
10. Signiture of Enlistment
Erron E. Bartton
USMC OEF Combat Vet
0331 Machine Gunner
2010-2016

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Nightmare2125
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by Nightmare2125 » 13 Aug 2017, 02:12
First Time I've ever done something like this, so harsh feedback totally welcomed lol
USMC OEF Combat Vet
0331 Machine Gunner
2010-2016

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Martzin
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by Martzin » 13 Aug 2017, 02:54
I like the way you wrote this mate.
The dude who plays Murdoch Machowicz, whoever he is.

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Nightmare2125
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by Nightmare2125 » 13 Aug 2017, 03:33
Martzin wrote:I like the way you wrote this mate.
Thanks, man, appreciate it.
USMC OEF Combat Vet
0331 Machine Gunner
2010-2016
