Blaze Macintosh Character Dossier

[Blazer]

This isn't fully complete yet


Name:Blaze Macintosh

Nickname:Blazer

age:40

Height:6.6

History

Blazer was born on the colony of Aegis 7 to a loving mother. he never knew his father, he worked for WEYYU as the CL of the USS Roosevelt until it was destroyed by mass Reactor failure killing him and everyone else, cause being unknown. his mother worked for WEYYU as the main doctor on Aegis 7. his life was as normal as living on a company colony could be. at the age of 18 Blaze joined the USCM where he spent 22 years fighting whoever the Core considered an enemy.

Alpha Forever für den Sieg!

[Bancrose]

Yeah my mans. Sieg and uhhh all that?

[SaltyMouthful]

>Be 17

[Sleepy Retard]

.....?

[Artemis111]

age:17

I thought characters had to be at least 18?

[Alky]

Critizing to the max.

First off, Age, at least be 18 or older.
Secondly be more in depth with your character, descriptions and how.
Thirdly, know that you're suppose to be more unique with your character, if this is supposedly "100%" of yourself in real life, then how is that different to the rest of us? Why is your hair pink? Why is your character acting like you do.
Fourth, if you don't know why you are making a dossier, then don't make it, a dossier is meant to take time, it's not some sentence you can think of in a minute, it takes time.
Fifth, You are the epitome of Alpha aside from Masamune, you best show yourself to be known if you decide to stay here.
Sixth, Is your middle name 'Creek' or is that your nickname? I recommend taking out your middle name entirely or add " '/' " to your name if Creek is your nickname.
Seventh, You should really change color palettes, it iritating to read even if it's small
Eighth, look at other dossiers and tell me what's wrong with yours.

The end. Good day.

[Artemis111]

Critizing to the max.

First off, Age, at least be 18 or older.
Secondly be more in depth with your character, descriptions and how.
Thirdly, know that you're suppose to be more unique with your character, if this is supposedly "100%" of yourself in real life, then how is that different to the rest of us? Why is your hair pink? Why is your character acting like you do.
Fourth, if you don't know why you are making a dossier, then don't make it, a dossier is meant to take time, it's not some sentence you can think of in a minute, it takes time.
Fifth, You are the epitome of Alpha aside from Masamune, you best show yourself to be known if you decide to stay here.
Sixth, Is your middle name 'Creek' or is that your nickname? I recommend taking out your middle name entirely or add " '/' " to your name if Creek is your nickname.
Seventh, You should really change color palettes, it iritating to read even if it's small
Eighth, look at other dossiers and tell me what's wrong with yours.

The end. Good day.

Wew

[Blazer]

i am remaking the Dossier as we speak with some help from friends. sorry for such a sloppy job i will do better.