USCMC Dossier: Saul Freytia

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USCMC Dossier: Saul Freytia

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Full name: Saul Freytia

Nickname(s): Salt, Red, Asshole.

Age: 29

Birth date: 08/21/2121

Gender: Male

Position: Squad Standard

Notable traits:
  1. Personality Disorders:
  2. Cluster B. Intermittent Explosive Disorder
  3. Cluster B. Borderline Personality Disorder
  4. Cluster B. Narcissistic Personality Disorder
  5. Cluster C. Avoidant Personality Disorder
Persona: Saul can more often than not be found aggravated or standoffish, even in situations where no heightened emotional response should be found. His usual demeanor is that of hostility and presenting a thick emotional wall between any vulnerable expressions and other people, preferring more to keep his soft side, if such a thing exists, away from prying eyes through harsh treatment and anger. He does, however, lighten up around people he knows or respects, showing no hostility and even following orders or helping them in some way, showing his immovable loyalty to those close enough to see it. On the other hand, to people he deems a problem, he gives the opposite reaction to, being well beyond disrespectful and even downright hostile, in some cases even [REDACTED] leading to a near miss with a court martial on one recorded occasion.

He is pessimistic and angsty when the situation revolves around combat, expecting the worst outcome for everyone but himself and enjoying jumping headfirst into conflict with hostiles, be it human or not. He has expressed distaste for guard duty whether necessary or not. He has shown a frightening disregard for his own safety, focusing instead on helping fellow marines in need when authorized to do so.

Saul has demonstrated a steady hand when using hand grenades or throwing knives, hitting the mark 9/10 times on the former and 2/5 times on the latter. He has also shown an aptitude for long range marksmanship but did not volunteer for sniper training despite a high score in Range Finding, Target Leading, and predicting enemy position for said skills. On the opposite end of the spectrum, Freytia has displayed inert ability for room clearing in hostage situations and Anti Terrorist ship to ship combat, scoring a 89/100 on snap shooting and clearing ducts. The other 11 points were, however, a critical failure, and disqualified him from acting in CQC environments where civilians or friendly soldiers may be operating, showing that his finger acts before he identifies the target as friend or foe and simply acting on reflex alone caused consistent hits on friendly or neutral targets almost as much as hits on hostile targets. NOTE: May be a cause of a previously unseen eye condition. Investigation required.
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  • Condition: Photophobia - an experience of discomfort or pain to the eyes due to light exposure or by presence of actual physical sensitivity of the eyes.
  • Condition found to be benign. Cause: Hue of iris.
Freytia is always showing a more than casual interest in his own outward appearance, keeping his clothes spotless if he sees something out of order, and making sure to keep his hair in check. He has made it clear he would prefer his surroundings remain clean of refuse but has no problem actively ignoring certain irregular patterns on surfaces otherwise symmetric or spotless.

Saul shows a deeply rooted patriotism for the Colonial Marine Corps and respects strength in someone with a position of command, no matter the rank. However, he tends to let hatred get the better of him when it comes to civilians or businessmen, refusing to trust the latter when forced to converse with them and expressing that his distaste for civilians stems from a view of uselessness or vulnerability when pertaining to someone with no military ties.

History:
  • Pre USMC: Saul grew up in a large trading hub on the Mars city of Leo, staying in and around his local halfway house, picking up the language the merchants and salvagers use early in life. He was born with a minor condition that caused light to bring pain to his eyes, so he grew accustomed to wearing welding goggles or any other eyewear to dim light. In his teenage years, he started learning the ins and outs of policing but never continued this study, finding it more fun to be in his natural habitat and stay on the opposite side of the law, earning numerous nights in a cell. His life on Mars held very little meaning to him, having no parents or friends to speak of and only an older sister, he instead finds solace in the Corps. He moved on to mercenary work after signing on with a small nameless crew that was resupplying in Leo.
  • Mercenary Work: For the most part, Freytia spent his earlier time in a small mercenary group under the wing of a large Scandinavian man who taught him ancient pagan values, the basics of treating minor wounds, and staying under the radar when things go awry in the mess hall, the latter picked up easily from Saul's time in foster care. After a brief period of time, Saul was spending his days loading clips, cleaning floors and walls, watching captured victims, and making sure the ship was stocked with all of it's supplies. After a few months of stocking and watching, he was invited to move on to the fighting aspect of his work, beginning with an ambush set for an unnamed company official in the Earth city of London. The ambush, set in an alley behind [REDACTED] ended with several stitches in his inner thigh and bringing light to his failure to excel in hand to hand combat.short story for this
  • Enlistment: After a routine mission to extort a smaller company went South, almost all of the crew were killed in a brief skirmish with law enforcement. The survivors, consisting of Saul and another unnamed man, went their separate ways after a stealthy escape. Saul enlisted in the USMC and quickly found himself dropped into the harsh conflicts between the United Americas and the Union of Progressive Peoples, his tour giving him an overburdening resentment for Russians and Asians.
  • CONFIDENTIAL: Psychiatric Probation: His second year in the Corps consisted of training and waiting, Saul spending a little over ten months on Gateway Station conducting war games with other marines under Psychiatric Care until fit for duty. Care consisted of weekly viewings with an IA qualified psychiatrist under watch of USMC medical and military officials until he was deemed fit for duty as standard prodecure for returning veterans of the border world conflicts. Saul had begun to show neurotic tendencies coinciding with Depersonalization Disorders and various anxiety related problems, all of which were discredited as time continued until the patient had been cleared for Active Duty by mentioned officials and psychiatrists. Proceedings classified as: Closed.


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Psychiatric Interview, Case File #23211906.
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Relations:
  • Bros: Sam 'Stunner' Abrams
  • Friends: Valeria 'Valkyr' Andreeva, Barnabus Jones, Taryn 'Freyja' Corvus, Akemi Ikeda, Nyxia 'Fifty' Cals.
  • Buds: Melissa Wright, Bigby 'Pyro' Farkas, Tanya ‘Aegis’ Hernandez, Axel Strife, Werner Diels, John 'Spartan' Murry, Jessica Bailey.
  • Disliked People: Xur "Ghost" Dergens, Scotty Hardy, Keiran Lawson, Victor 'Orbital' Kaipov, Dayton 'Day' Mann, Jim "Twitch" Sanders, Artyrial Loudain.
Basic appearance: Saul stands at five feet, two inches tall, with fair skin that looks well taken care of. He has naturally red hair shaped into a pompadour, well groomed equally red eyebrows, as well as a neatly trimmed red soul patch on his chin, and is always found with large mirror black aviators on his face. His body is mildly stocky but otherwise unimpressive with a small scar above the 6th rib on the left side of his torso and a fading scar down the inner thigh of his left leg.

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Likes: Guns, Clean Places, Sleeping, Explosives, Complaining, Shirking.

Dislikes: Unkempt Places, Women, People in Command, Civilians, Machines.

Strengths: Adaptable, Loyal, Defensive of Friends, Fearless, Variability.

Weaknesses: Lacking Empathy, Loner Mentality, Abrasive, Brash, Violent, Stubborn, Stupid, Self Centered.

Other OOC Info: Dossier is still a Work In Progress, needs tons of refurbishing and extras added but in the end, it will be beautiful. The relations are based off of in character relations in the game and in no way represent my own feeling towards the people behind these characters. The two are separate.

Most, if not all, of the information in this Dossier is fluff used to create a life behind the lovable aviators and red soulpatch. Certain things could not be taken into account in the current round I'm in, while other parts of the dossier can be openly discussed with Saul, ie me, to make it feel a bit more real. Muh immershun.
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Re: USCMC Dossier: Saul Freytia

Post by LordLoko » 16 Oct 2015, 12:09

Doesn't look snowflake-ish 10/10 would make it join my squad.
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Re: USCMC Dossier: Saul Freytia

Post by Releasing » 13 Mar 2016, 14:34

Dislikes women. Most of his friends are women. wat.
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Re: USCMC Dossier: Saul Freytia

Post by Sadokist » 13 Mar 2016, 15:23

yea lol, ah watevs

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Post by Desolane900 » 13 Mar 2016, 15:24

Releasing wrote:Dislikes women. Most of his friends are women. wat.
Well he is gay. Gay men don't exactly enjoy the company of women in case you can't tell :p
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Re: USCMC Dossier: Saul Freytia

Post by Sadokist » 13 Mar 2016, 15:25

Desolane900 wrote: Well he is gay. Gay men don't exactly enjoy the company of women in case you can't tell :p
i thought your other character was gay? forget his name

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Re: USCMC Dossier: Saul Freytia

Post by TheSlapDoctor » 13 Mar 2016, 15:37

Desolane900 wrote: Well he is gay. Gay men don't exactly enjoy the company of women in case you can't tell :p
I don't think 'gay' and 'likes women' are mutually exclusive.

Nice dossier, regardless.
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Re: USCMC Dossier: Saul Freytia

Post by Minijar » 13 Mar 2016, 17:58

I like women (Only as friends). Problem resolved. Also, is a dick with flashbangs and tasers to fellow MP's >.>.

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Post by Desolane900 » 14 Mar 2016, 16:46

TheSlapDoctor wrote:Nice dossier, regardless.
Still a work in progress tbh. Need serious work and detail before I can call it done.
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Post by Desolane900 » 14 Mar 2016, 16:47

Sadokist wrote: i thought your other character was gay? forget his name
Martin~ and yes. They're both gay.
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Post by Edgelord » 21 May 2016, 19:55

Reported.

edit: and I am personally offended that there is no enemies list containing my name.
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Re: USCMC Dossier: Saul Freytia

Post by TeknoKot » 21 May 2016, 19:56

Where's Victor Kaipov on the hate list.
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Post by Desolane900 » 21 May 2016, 20:08

TeknoKot wrote:Where's Victor Kaipov on the hate list.
Edgelord wrote:Reported.

edit: and I am personally offended that there is no enemies list containing my name.
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Post by TeknoKot » 24 May 2016, 04:23

SO MUCH HATE ON COMMANDING PLAYERS that are better than you, this is why you die.
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Post by Desolane900 » 24 May 2016, 14:13

TeknoKot wrote:SO MUCH HATE ON COMMANDING PLAYERS that are better than you, this is why you die.
I die on purpose. Besides, hate for command is his style so it makes sense.
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Besides, hate for command is his style so it makes sense.
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Post by rapidboy9 » 06 Jun 2016, 13:13

Lol Stunner loves you too bro! Loved that scene didn't think it would impact a Dossier. I still need to make one actually for Sam.
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Post by Desolane900 » 06 Jun 2016, 13:42

rapidboy9 wrote:Lol Stunner loves you too bro! Loved that scene didn't think it would impact a Dossier. I still need to make one actually for Sam.
I just couldn't resist throwing it in there lmao
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Desolane900 wrote:
  • Disliked People:Victor 'Orbital' Kaipov
I think we should be best friends already.
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How can you dislike me little muscles :c

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Post by GreyHound501 » 25 Jun 2016, 08:00

10/10 Would crush your dreams again
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Re: USCMC Dossier: Saul Freytia

Post by northcote4 » 25 Jun 2016, 08:40

Not going to lie, this is legitimately one of my favourite dossiers. Between the way it's written, the lack of snowflakiness, and that fucking audio log.

10/10 makes me salty.
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Post by Desolane900 » 25 Jun 2016, 09:50

northcote4 wrote:Not going to lie, this is legitimately one of my favourite dossiers. Between the way it's written, the lack of snowflakiness, and that fucking audio log.

10/10 makes me salty.
The audio journal is one of the ways I'm trying to change Saul's aspect from being the way I had originally meant him to be into a more "I can feel something besides salt but you don't get to see it."
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Re: USCMC Dossier: Saul Freytia

Post by northcote4 » 25 Jun 2016, 09:59

Desolane900 wrote:
The audio journal is one of the ways I'm trying to change Saul's aspect from being the way I had originally meant him to be into a more "I can feel something besides salt but you don't get to see it."
Well I, for one, wholeheartedly approve.
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Post by Desolane900 » 25 Jun 2016, 10:04

northcote4 wrote: Well I, for one, wholeheartedly approve.
Originally he was this angry for no reason, hate everything kind of douche asshole. Now I'm trying to give him a selfless caring side only his closer friends can catch a glimpse of, while giving him a reason to be hateful and angry all the time through quips from his history in the Corps. I never really thought of him being someone I'd give a shit enough to build a life for but seeing as how I have nothing better to do for plenty of my time I figure I can try to mold him into something that'd work better for the rest of the platoon instead of himself.
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