Setg'in Mei'hswei (Deadly Brother)

[Feweh]

Need feedback on this please.

[Monoo]

Let me start by saying I don't really know you, so I only have your responses to go off of here. Jesse Cooper seems kind of familiar, but I can't recall from where. Oh well.

The story's good, and your reason for being whitelisted is nice too. You seem very qualified to handle level of RP needed for playing a predator. However, the application isn't without its drawbacks. As Khan pointed out, you went for too narrow a creative medium by picking cloaking as your area of expertise, since cloaking is a pretty narrow and uncreative mechanic in-game. Your responses to the criticism indicate you probably aren't prepared to handle problems with your playstyle well.

While I don't mind people coming back from a break and making an app, since you seem to have been involved in the past, I haven't seen you become that involved here again. I don't see you on the forums or in-game.

Gonna have to go with a -1, sorry man but I feel like you could have done better on this.

[Feweh]

Denied

I really havent seen you in-game much, the app was sub-par and you just came back to CM.