Rustarus' Pred App (Setg'in Hult'ah)

[Rustarus]

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I understand man. The story was choppy, and... I admit I could have added more. I feel like if only I spent more time refining it it could have done better, but... i'm just hoping with all the changes I have made from my first pred app to this, show everyone that I have changed. I'm trying to apply for the roleplay, to make the round fun, to make stories for others to remember, to keep people coming back to see how roleplay with predators is fun, and gives you a good story. I wont let you down, just like I hopefully haven't let too many others down as commander.

[Nightwolf901]

Rust is a player I've known for quite a long time back in my Sulaco Fresh days. He's honestly a good player and not that bad of a Roleplayer from my few sights watching him. Your story was fun to read and overall You're a good guy. +1 from me and a Golden Sticker.

Don't let alot of the talk on the app get to you and bark out, It'll cause a bad view from others regardless if you're defending yourself. It's happened to be me before. remember marine. "Stay Frosty."

[Feweh]

More feedback required.

[Symbiosis]

If I had read this app 6 months ago I would've probably given you a neutral or -1.

The last several months you've made some significant strides, to the point where I think you're ready to make the move into "The Hunt".

A Predator using only one arm is going to be at a disadvantage - but holding to this "gimmick" will show a dedication to RP that is admirable. I'll go ahead and give you a +1, Rustarus! Best of luck!

[northcote4]

While I have absolutely seen Rustarus around, I can’t say I’ve seen a heck of a lot of Terry, though my interactions with him have been nothing but positive.
As for the story itself, I found it a bit generic and clunky. Predator is a lone wolf for X reason and strives to become the best. It didn’t really strike me as anything special, and I must profess that I found the layout a bit sub-par. But, to paraphrase one of the other predator players, not everyone can be George Orwell.
As for your gimmick, I can sum up my thoughts in a couple of words: Good luck. By no means do I mean this in a sarcastic tone. I simply believe that attempting to hold onto this gimmick will try and test you as you go, so I genuinely wish you good fortune in doing so.

Ordinarily I might leave this as a neutral vote, as the application itself wasn’t really enough to sway me one way or the other. However I can very much say I approve of what I’ve seen in the thread itself. The fact that you are able to take criticism and even admit defeat is something I always hold in regard, and for that reason I’m willing to throw in my vote to let you have a crack at the whitelist. A +1 from me.

[shyshadow]

After do consideration, I've realized. I've been waaay to over critical. I honestly have no idea why I said what I said. You DO deserve this whitelist. As in you personally deserve it. Quite honestly. You as a person should get it. And after looking at your application again. I see no reason to actually -1. Well I mean I see reason to but, I realize that myself can be super critical at times. But I failed to be super critical of the person who is applying. So I'm going to give a +1. I clicked and I believe you've proven capable of this whitelist. Just, I believe you could've done soo much better.

[Rustarus]

While I have absolutely seen Rustarus around, I can’t say I’ve seen a heck of a lot of Terry, though my interactions with him have been nothing but positive.
As for the story itself, I found it a bit generic and clunky. Predator is a lone wolf for X reason and strives to become the best. It didn’t really strike me as anything special, and I must profess that I found the layout a bit sub-par. But, to paraphrase one of the other predator players, not everyone can be George Orwell.
As for your gimmick, I can sum up my thoughts in a couple of words: Good luck. By no means do I mean this in a sarcastic tone. I simply believe that attempting to hold onto this gimmick will try and test you as you go, so I genuinely wish you good fortune in doing so.

Ordinarily I might leave this as a neutral vote, as the application itself wasn’t really enough to sway me one way or the other. However I can very much say I approve of what I’ve seen in the thread itself. The fact that you are able to take criticism and even admit defeat is something I always hold in regard, and for that reason I’m willing to throw in my vote to let you have a crack at the whitelist. A +1 from me.

Thanks man. I lately am not playing a lot like I used to (Used to play almost every day, about 5 rounds per day) because of school, but that does not mean I am not inactive. I usually get a good amount of forum time in and fit in about one or two rounds per day. As for the story like everyone else said, I feel like I messed up there. I don't want to say I rushed it... but it wasn't my best quality. However, I just hope it's enough to show you I can RP with ease, and I understand enough to be able to take on the role of predator. All in all, I accept the challenge of one arm fully, it's not about ruining everyone, it's about having fun, giving fun, and making experiences that many will remember.

[Feweh]

Im denying this.
I've given you some random abilities and what not over the past month.

Instead of RPing anything interesting you kind of just run around playing with them.